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Love je oh mainu pyar na karde - 6th July 2007, 11:10 AM
Je oh mainu pyar beshumar na karde,
dur jaan to baad mainu yaad na karde
sachi osdi muhabat hai yaar,
yu dur reh ke vi meri liye phariyad na karde
ajj vi mere bina shayad oh ji nahi sake,
eda dur reh ke mera intzar na karde
ajj vi kise te bharosa nahi mere jina,
aje tak vi mera te itbar na karde
gam os kol mera hi hai,
phir ro ro ke eda jind dushvaar na karde
sadi fakirra di kulli je changi na lagdi,
eni sohni duniya ch rehan to inkar na karde
jamane da darr hona ja mazboori koi,
nahi phir eda jindgi barbaad na karde
koi nere hoke vi paraya te oh dur reh ke mera,
par ki kara ke oh izhar nahi karde

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Post 6th July 2007, 11:37 AM
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Je oh mainu pyar beshumar na karde, dur jaan to baad mainu yaad na karde
sachi osdi muhabat hai yaar, yu dur reh ke vi meri liye phariyad na karde
ajj vi mere bina shayad oh ji nahi sake, eda dur reh ke mera intzar na karde
ajj vi kise te bharosa nahi mere jina, aje tak vi mera te itbar na karde
gam os kol mera hi hai, nahi phir ro ro ke eda jind nu dhuvaar na karde
sadi fakirra di kulli je changi na lagdi, ta eni sohni duniya ch rehan to inkar na karde
jamane da darr hona ja mazboori koi, nahi phir eda jingdi barbaad na karde
koi nere hoke vi paraya te oh dur reh ke mera, par ki kara ke oh izhar nahi karde

KOI TA MAJBOORI HOYEGI MERI V JO TEINU DUNIA TO KHO NA SAKEA,
SHAYAD MERE HI HAWA CH ASAR NAHI C, JO IK LAFAZ V TAINU MOH NA SAKEA,
IK TADAP TAINU PAUN DI TADPAUNDI RAHEGI,
JAD TAK CHALDE NE SAH TERRI YAAD AUNDI RAHEGI. A-BABBU
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6th July 2007, 12:08 PM
HELLO "PUNJABAN HEER"

WAH JI WAH, KINA SOHNA LIKHIYA HAI TUSI TAA, RABB DI SOH SACHI HI BAHUT LIKE KITA ENA PIYARA HI LIKHDE RAHO,

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wah kina sohna likh dita hai ji tusi ehna lina wich tusi jo pyar bare likh dita hai oh parh k pyar karan wala tan ki na karan wala vi tarap uthe
   
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Thumbs up Thank U Everyone - 8th July 2007, 11:33 AM
Thank u friends
Tusi sab ne bahut hi pyara ans ditaa, so thank u very much

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17th May 2008, 09:15 AM
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Je oh mainu pyar beshumar na karde,
dur jaan to baad mainu yaad na karde
sachi osdi muhabat hai yaar,
yu dur reh ke vi meri liye phariyad na karde
ajj vi mere bina shayad oh ji nahi sake,
eda dur reh ke mera intzar na karde
ajj vi kise te bharosa nahi mere jina,
aje tak vi mera te itbar na karde
gam os kol mera hi hai,
phir ro ro ke eda jind dushvaar na karde
sadi fakirra di kulli je changi na lagdi,
eni sohni duniya ch rehan to inkar na karde
jamane da darr hona ja mazboori koi,
nahi phir eda jindgi barbaad na karde
koi nere hoke vi paraya te oh dur reh ke mera,
par ki kara ke oh izhar nahi karde
SSA "HEER"ji

sab to pehla ta mai das deva ke mai do gallan bahut hi like kitiya
ek ta tuhada naaam bahut hi sohna laghiya "ADHURI HEER"
duja tuhadi poetry bahut hi sohni lagi

bahut hi sohna likhiya hai ji

Jihdi mitro bhaal ch dil
oh na kuri mildi,oh na kuri mildi

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Mel kara de Rabba sohni kuri de naaal
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17th May 2008, 09:24 PM
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SSA "HEER"ji

sab to pehla ta mai das deva ke mai do gallan bahut hi like kitiya
ek ta tuhada naaam bahut hi sohna laghiya "ADHURI HEER"
duja tuhadi poetry bahut hi sohni lagi

bahut hi sohna likhiya hai ji

Thanks Diljaan ji, meri poetry read karan liye, and iss nu like karan liye

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19th May 2008, 09:58 AM
Heer ji bhaut hi shaandaar. Aakhri 3 band taaN bahut hi khoob soorat laggey. Ajj kal kaafi consistantly wadhiyaa likh rahey ho. Rabb aggey ardaas hai ke tuhanu meri nazar na laggey.

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Heer ji bhaut hi shaandaar. Aakhri 3 band taaN bahut hi khoob soorat laggey. Ajj kal kaafi consistantly wadhiyaa likh rahey ho. Rabb aggey ardaas hai ke tuhanu meri nazar na laggey.

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Je oh mainu pyar beshumar na karde,
dur jaan to baad mainu yaad na karde
sachi osdi muhabat hai yaar,
yu dur reh ke vi meri liye phariyad na karde
ajj vi mere bina shayad oh ji nahi sake,
eda dur reh ke mera intzar na karde
ajj vi kise te bharosa nahi mere jina,
aje tak vi mera te itbar na karde
gam os kol mera hi hai,
phir ro ro ke eda jind dushvaar na karde
sadi fakirra di kulli je changi na lagdi,
eni sohni duniya ch rehan to inkar na karde
jamane da darr hona ja mazboori koi,
nahi phir eda jindgi barbaad na karde
koi nere hoke vi paraya te oh dur reh ke mera,
par ki kara ke oh izhar nahi karde
Sach aakheya tussi Heer ji... Asi kade kade es gal da shukraana karna ppul jaane haan, ki je kar oh hunde hi na saadi jindagi ch, fer ki hounda...

Daad haazir ae...

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Mere na hone se shayad raahat haiN zamaane ko
Shor ye kaisa hangaama-e-maatam kyuN haiN
Har mulaaquaat pe mujhko ye hota hai gumaaN
Faasley furkat ke ye itney beraham kyuN haiN
Dil ko sadalakht* kiya sine ko bhi sad chaak kiya
Ab bhi dilresh* mai dhadkati tu paiham* kyuN haiN
Maine sincha haiN apne ashqo se dil ke gulshan ko
Baag-e-hasti* mai khizaaoN* ka mausam kyuN haiN

Hujjum= crowd
sadalakht= dil ke sau tukre karna/ dil ko cheerna
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Heer ji, kamaaal kari ja rahe ho, bahut hi sohni hai eh poem ta, and Talik ji theek keh rahe han ke kite sadi nazar na lag jave tuhadi poetry nu

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Sach aakheya tussi Heer ji... Asi kade kade es gal da shukraana karna ppul jaane haan, ki je kar oh hunde hi na saadi jindagi ch, fer ki hounda...

Daad haazir ae...

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Teri tasweer meri Nigaaho mai hardam kyun haiN
Aaine to tutate rahte haiN tumhe gham kyuN haiN
Wohi "lamha" wohi manjar wohi yaado ke hujjuM*
Aur kya chahiye? Maayus mere sanam kyuN haiN
Mere na hone se shayad raahat haiN zamaane ko
Shor ye kaisa hangaama-e-maatam kyuN haiN
Har mulaaquaat pe mujhko ye hota hai gumaaN
Faasley furkat ke ye itney beraham kyuN haiN
Dil ko sadalakht* kiya sine ko bhi sad chaak kiya
Ab bhi dilresh* mai dhadkati tu paiham* kyuN haiN
Maine sincha haiN apne ashqo se dil ke gulshan ko
Baag-e-hasti* mai khizaaoN* ka mausam kyuN haiN

Hujjum= crowd
sadalakht= dil ke sau tukre karna/ dil ko cheerna
Dilresh=zakhmi dil
Paiham=continues,constant
Baag-e-hasti= garden of life
KhizaaN=patzad

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Heer ji, kamaaal kari ja rahe ho, bahut hi sohni hai eh poem ta, and Talik ji theek keh rahe han ke kite sadi nazar na lag jave tuhadi poetry nu
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pta ni ji mainu ta kuj samaj ja nahi lagia ..........srry heer ji main har var rukha ja reply kar dina,,,,bt jo feel karda likh dina...........maaf kario plzz
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Thank u deep ji ke tusi jo feel karde ho ohi hi likhade ho, Iss wich Sorry wali kehari gal hai, so no Problem deep ji
Sorry ta kehadi je koi galti kiti hove,
par mainu ek gal samajh nahi lagi ke tuhanu iss poem wicho ki samajh nahi aaya
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heer ji sory mein tuhanu reply thodi der baad kr skea par majboorian han sada profession hi kuch aisa hai jo bhut busy rehnda hai , par tusi bhut hi sohna byan kita hai. gal jad dil di kehni hove ta udo lina da mahtav chhota pe janda hai, bhut hi sohna likhea hai tusi
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