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ro ro ke asiiN (Punjabi) -
14th August 2006, 01:37 AM
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miyaaN mujhe nahiiN pata ke yahaaN punjabi samajhne waale kitne haiN isliye shaayad yeh post Ghair zaroori hai lekin phir bhi aaj bohat dinoN ke baad kuch post karne ka man hua to kar raha huuN..... haal hi meiN punjabi ki ek nazm likhi hai uske kuch misre post kar raha huuN, puuri nazm post nahiiN kar sakta majboori hai, muaaf kijiyega.....mulaiiza farmaaiye :- khat puraane padh ke waqt laNghaa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae teriaaN yaadaaN reh reh ke tadfauun jadoN Gham tere mere gal wich phaahe paun jadoN hanjuaaN da marham zakhmaN te laa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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Re: ro ro ke asiiN (Punjabi) -
14th August 2006, 08:59 AM
"khat puraane padh ke waqt laNghaa layi dae
ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae" Very Nice.......... "hanjuaaN da marham zakhmaN te laa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae"  .....Kya baat haimaikasH bhai Majboori hai to alag baat hai magar dil chahta hai poori padhe  jayada acha lagta....itna padhne ka mauka diya aapne khushi huiShukriyah............ Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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14th August 2006, 09:43 AM
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"Jaach menu aa gaye gum khaun di. holi holi ro ke dil parchaun di, ki hoyea je tu paraya ho gaya, samaj menu aa gaye dil lagaun di" .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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16th August 2006, 11:55 AM
Namaskar Maikash ji
It's nicely written Punjabi poetry with beautiful punjabi words....changa likhya ya tussi..hope so soon we will read this complete punjabi poetry |
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24th August 2006, 05:51 AM
Ajj bahut dina baad kuchh padiya... Enjj lagaya ke kissi ne Phul dikhaya howe te khusboo len taun pehla hi waapas khich leya howe.
Je e nazm poori suna do taa phul vi saade kol aa jaayega te khusboo vi Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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26th August 2006, 01:55 AM
diggaj miyaaN
namaskaar bhai aap punjabi bhi samajhte haiN iska ilm mujhe nahiiN tha ...bohat achcii baat hai saahab aur khakksaar ka hausla badhaane ke liye shukriya qabuul kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th August 2006, 02:34 AM
sunita jee
Sat Sri Akaal es to vadaa sanmaan mere liye hor ki hovega ki tuhaanu meriyaaN eh do satraaN padh ke shiv jehe mahaan kavi di yaad aayi.......!! koi baaraN saal pehlaN di gal hai ek dost ne Shiv di ik kavita diyaaN do chaar linaaN sunayiyaaN san : thabba ku zulfaaN waaleya, thabba ku zulfaaN waaleya aReya ve teri yaad ne, kadd ke kaleja khaa leya tere zehar mohre raNg da baaNh te hai naa khunvaa leya tere shehar jaaNdi sadak da ik roD chugh ke khaa leya thabba ku zulfaaN waaleya, thabba ku zulfaaN waaleya aReya ve teri yaad ne, kadd ke kaleja khaa leya shiv kumar batalvi naal mera rishta badaa puraana hai.......mere kol kuch saal pehlaN taq shiv di hi autogpah keeti hoyi ohna di mashhoor kitaab "birha tu sultaan" hoya kardi si jisnu padhe bina mainu neeNd nai si aauNdi...... tuhaade layi ohna da ik geet : is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th August 2006, 02:41 AM
sukanya jee
hausla afzaai ke liye shukriya qabuul kijiye..... i will try to post the full version soon regards maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th August 2006, 02:52 AM
Varinder saahab
Sat Sri Akaal bade dinaaN baad darshan ditte ne maalko  veera je majboori na hundi taaN maiN zaruur puuri nazm post kar diNdaa.........gal darasal eh hai ke mainu huqm hoya hai ke maiN aapne kuj punjabi geet te nazmaaN internet te post na karaaN........tuhaanu pata hi hai ke ajj-kal aithey mahaul ki baneya hoya hai.......par tusiiN mere valloN dila mailaa na karo.......mainu tuhanu eh nazm mail kar deyaNga rab raakha G.Sandhu is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th August 2006, 07:55 PM
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Ae tan tussi bada hi changa keeta jo ik post punjabi di vi post kar ditti.. sach bada chir ho gaya si kujh vi punjabi da padhe hoye.. rooh khind gayi aaj taan bas.. Dard paal ke, os nu dudh pilla ke... palosna tan punjaabiyan di aadat hundi ae.. Ro ke kiThe dil nu kujh samjhaavenga.. Kinve oh guzre pal tu pulaavenga.. Yaada teriyan jinve mere dil ch vasdiyaan.. Kujh vi karke.. tu kiven ohna nu mitaavenga.. Dard naal apni vi rishtedaari badi puraani ae.. hun tan je eh kol nazar na aave tan dil rounda ae.. Veere tusi apna khayaal rakhiyo... te khush rahiyo... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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27th August 2006, 12:15 AM
***"khat puraane padh ke waqt laNghaa layi dae
ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae teriaaN yaadaaN reh reh ke tadfauun jadoN Gham tere mere gal wich phaahe paun jadoN hanjuaaN da marham zakhmaN te laa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae ro ro ke asiiN kamlaa dil samjhaa layi dae"*** Very deep indeed!! U r always outstanding Sir! I still remember ***koshisheN harchaNd kiiN is dil ko behlaayaa bahut bhuulnaa chahaa magar vo shaKhs yaad aayaa bahut kar ke aaNkheN baNd zaalim vaar to kartaa gayaa dekh kar lekin mere zakhmoN ko ghabraayaa bahut*********** Wah Some of my words in ur honor aarzu-e-barbad inteha to abhi baki hei laash to ban chuke, dabna to abhi baki hei shamma-e-farz jalata hun magar khud se dhokha to abhi baki hei Intezaam-e-maut kar chuka hun sush Ilzaam-e-zindagi to baki hei Warm Regards इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं! lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein |
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7th September 2006, 09:17 AM
priya jee Sat Sri Akaal
maiN tuhadi ik gal naal bohat sehmat haaN ke jis dil nu dukhaaN di aadat pae jaave ohdaa GhamaaN toN bagair guzaara nai huNda....vaise punjabiyaaN di ik aadat hor badi mash'hoor hai...oh hai zidd....hun tusi aape hisaab la lavo ke dukh te zidd jitthe ikkathe ho jaan us baNde da taaN pher waheguru hi maalak hai eh punabi satraaN tuhaanu chaNgiiyaaN lagiyaaN sun ke khushi hoyi.....koshish karaaNga ke kuj chir baad punjabi she'r vi post karda rahaaN...dhanvaad G.Sandhu is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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7th September 2006, 09:21 AM
Dard-e-sush saahab
bhai mujhe nai pataa tha ke yahaaN punjabi samajhne waale log iss taa'daad meiN maujuud hoNge....khair de'r aayad durust aayad meri liye ye nihayat khushi ki baat hai ke aapko mujh na'ehl ki itni puraani Ghazal yaad hai....aap jaise dostoN ki duaaoN ke sadke hauslaa ho jaata hai she'r kehne ko vagarna ba'qaul iqbaal saahab "kahaaN maiN aur kahaaN naKht-e-gul" bohat shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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