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21st April 2015, 09:14 PM
aj kal kuch do char jajbati alfaz ab achhe ni lagte hai..
bharosa., dosti., wade ki bate ab sachhe ni lagte hai..
ajeeb dang main badli hai chehre ki masumiyat..
aj kal dost., dost se., dusman., dusman se ni lagte hai..
bad gai hai ranjis dilo ki is had tak itni be-had tak..
aj kal apne kahne wale apne., apne se ni lagte hai..
ek dusre ko de rhe jkhm., or phir farebi mrhm de rhe..
jani pehchani hui fareb bhi ab fareb se ni lagte..
ho gya talluk kuch roj pahle mujhe mohabbt ke sath..
ajeeb kasmkas ho gai ab to apne ap ke ni lagte hai..
dal rakhe hai naqabi chehre pe bhi naqab aj kal..
kinhe jane pechane., koi phechane se ni lagte hai..
aj kal kuch do char jajbati alfaz ab achhe ni lagte hai..
bharosa., dosti., wade ki bate ab sachhe ni lagte hai..
~ : JYOTIBA ASHOK
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21st April 2015, 09:34 PM
Wah bhai wah,, achche jazbaath hain,, dil se dad kubul karein jazbaath k liya,,,
lekin meri ek salah hae,,Shayad a typing ki wjah ho sakti hae k aapke isko dubaara chek karein, jaese k "Jazbaati" hae jajbati nahi,, Ranjish,Dushman, maaaf karein agar mae galt hun tooo,, lekin aapke jazbaath bahoot pasand aaye,, aage bhi aapki aesi hi gazloon ka intezaar rahega
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21st April 2015, 09:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Sabhat khan
Wah bhai wah,, achche jazbaath hain,, dil se dad kubul karein jazbaath k liya,,,
lekin meri ek salah hae,,Shayad a typing ki wjah ho sakti hae k aapke isko dubaara chek karein, jaese k "Jazbaati" hae jajbati nahi,, Ranjish,Dushman, maaaf karein agar mae galt hun tooo,, lekin aapke jazbaath bahoot pasand aaye,, aage bhi aapki aesi hi gazloon ka intezaar rahega
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ji sir..
a/w..
apne bilkul shi sujhao diye hai m agli bar se kosis karunga ki in chhoti chhoti galtiyo se bachu
::: tahe dil se dhynabad
uhii sath dete rahe
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22nd April 2015, 08:57 AM
Achcha likha hai ashok jii.....
sabhat jii ki baat par gaur kariyega...
aur likhte rahein......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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22nd April 2015, 07:55 PM
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Achcha likha hai ashok jii.....
sabhat jii ki baat par gaur kariyega...
aur likhte rahein......
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jiii madhu mam..
agli bar se puri kosis karunga ki
galti na karu..
...tahe dil se sukriya
~ : JYOTIBA ASHOK
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22nd April 2015, 11:11 PM
Namaste saaheb
Bahot khoob aur dil se daad aapko....sabhat saaheb ki kahi huii baaton se main bhee sehmat huun...duaa hai zor e qalaam aur badhen ziyaadaah.... yuunhi likhte rahen aage bhee...bazm ko raushan karte rahiye
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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22nd April 2015, 11:17 PM
ji namste dhaval sir..
puri kosis rahegi agli bar sikayt kamauka na du
..tahe dil se sukriya
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