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aye meri dil ruba aap ka shukriya - 5th November 2016, 12:28 AM

aye meri dil ruba aap ka shukriya
hum nafas hum nawa aap ka shukriya

ghar mera aap ke dum se aabaad hai
aap hain bawafa aap ka shukriya

ghar ke afraad hain aap se khush bohut
shaad hai ghar mera aap ka shukriya

noor se bhar diya zindegi ko meri
eh karam marhaba aap ka shukriya

her ghadi aap ko dil se dey key duwa
kar raha hun ada aap ka shukriya

chal rahi hai meri zindegi theek thaak
hai zabaaN per sada aap ka shukriya

rooh hain, jaan hain, saans bhi hain meri
aise men kehna kya aap ka shukriya

ghar men Perwaaz ko khaak samjhen to bhi
ghar ka gharbaar ka aap ka shukriya

A few meaning
nafas- Breath
nawa- Companion
Afraad- People
Bawafa- With favour
Shaad- Satisfied/ Peaceful
Noor- Light
Merhaba- Very good
Khaak- Nothing/ Soil
Gharbaar- Family Members

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5th November 2016, 02:13 AM

waah waah!! bahot khoob hai apke shukriya kahne ka andaaz...



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5th November 2016, 02:42 PM

Aap ka shukriya Madhuji..

Agar aap ne Daagh Dehlvi ko padha hoto pata hoga ke unka andaaz bhi isi tarah ka tha.
Oh bhi jazbati sher qalam kiya karte the aur aam fehem alfaaz men shayri karte the.
darasl mujhe shayri ki fikr karne ke liye ziyada waqt nahin milta.....peshe se Scientist jo thera....Naahin Urdu/ Hindi men mera koi kaam hota hai...sirf English aur English...2 din pehle shaam ko baithe baithe ek baek jee chaha ke kuch apni shareek-e-hayaat ki tareef men likh dun ....aur oh aap ke saamne hai..

Kher aap ka andaaz-e-bayaan bhi qabile tareef hai... mujh ko bohut pasand hai.

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Mujiib sahab kis bahut khubsurat sa
shukriya ADA kiya he aapne
bahut ....khuub

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5th November 2016, 02:49 PM

Aap ka shukriya Shakir Sahab

Yun hi begum ki tareef men Ghazal ban gayi hai.

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5th November 2016, 09:11 PM

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Aap ka shukriya Madhuji..

Agar aap ne Daagh Dehlvi ko padha hoto pata hoga ke unka andaaz bhi isi tarah ka tha.
Oh bhi jazbati sher qalam kiya karte the aur aam fehem alfaaz men shayri karte the.
darasl mujhe shayri ki fikr karne ke liye ziyada waqt nahin milta.....peshe se Scientist jo thera....Naahin Urdu/ Hindi men mera koi kaam hota hai...sirf English aur English...2 din pehle shaam ko baithe baithe ek baek jee chaha ke kuch apni shareek-e-hayaat ki tareef men likh dun ....aur oh aap ke saamne hai..

Kher aap ka andaaz-e-bayaan bhi qabile tareef hai... mujh ko bohut pasand hai.

Duaon ke saath.
Mujeeb
Ji zyada to nahi thoda bahot jo bhi padha hai Dagh dehlvi ka andaaz sabse juda hai......mujhe maloom hai aap scientists hain aur uske baad bhi aap shayri k liye vaqt nikal lete hain kabil e tareef hai.......likhte rahiye aate rahiyega....

Behad shukriya jo aapko mera likha pasand aata hai.....main bhi aam fehem alfaaz me shayri kah pati hun..jo jazbaat dil me aaye likh diya bas......

Bahot shukriya khush rahein..



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Thank you madhu Saheba

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