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Kitaab baich ke gudiya khareed laaya hai -
12th April 2012, 05:37 PM
Arbaab-e-Zauq Ko Aadaab….!Aik Nai Ghazal Ke Kuch Ashaar Pesh-e-Khidmat Hain…. Ummid Hai Ahbaab Ko Pasand Aayen Gay…Jahaan Kaheen Aap ko Lagay Ke Main Ghalat Hun To Bila-jhijak Bataaiye Or Shukria Ka Mauqa den…
KITAAB BAICH KE GUDIYA KHAREED LAAYA HAI Bazar-e-Dehar Se Dunia Khareed Laya Hai Khushi Ko Chod Ke Sadma Khareed Laya Hai Yateem Behan Ki Zidd Par Wo Phool Sa Bacha Kitaab Baich Ke Gudiya Khareed Laya Hai Baya'an Badal Diya Faaqay Zada Se Muflis Ne Zameer Baich Ke Aata Khareed Laaya Hai Tujhay Kaha Bhi Tha Ye Ishq Rog Hai Dil Ka Magar Tu Phir Wahi Fitna Khareed Laaya Hai Ye Tujh Me Aaj Bhala Kaun Baat Karta Hai…? Ye Kis Ka Aaj Tuu Lehja Khareed Laaya Hai…? Tamaam Umr ke Khawaabon Ko Baich Kar AHMAD Bas Ik Sukoon Ka Lamha Khareed Laaya Hai AHMAD ALI SHAKIL Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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12th April 2012, 06:57 PM
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tum bas shayri kiyaa karo..... waise kuch aur bhi karte ho ya nahi;............. roz roz nayee ghazaleN aur sach mai nayee ghazleN nazar na lage yaar |
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12th April 2012, 07:25 PM
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12th April 2012, 11:48 PM
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AsSalamAlykom Ahmad Bhaee, Kya kahayn janaab aapki is ghazal ko..... jazbaat, alfaaz wa manzarkashee nay dil ko aysa ahsaas dilaaya maano koi mut-thee mayn lay nachoar raha haye. SubhanAllah buhat aala talhayyul wa andaaz e bayaan! Nazar na lagay aapkay hunar ko! Aameen! Duagoh Ahmad |
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13th April 2012, 08:10 AM
ahmad sahab .kya kahu is ghazal par.bahut-2 behatreen.................zabardast takhayyul aur qamaal ki adaayagi.yu to mujhe ghazal ke sabhi sher bahut pasand aaye lekin ye sher to bas toooo goooood ho gaya-
Yateem Behan Ki Zidd Par Wo Phool Sa Bacha Kitaab Baich Ke Gudiya Khareed Laya Hai aapko is khoobsurat peshqash par hazaaro-laakho mubaraqbaad. khuda aapke hunar men din duna raat chauguna izaafa kare.aameen. |
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13th April 2012, 11:27 AM
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Sada khush rahiye……….. Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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14th April 2012, 10:09 AM
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Janab Sumit Saheb....! Aap Ne JIs Muhabbat Se Is Kalaam Ko Hausla-Afzaayi Se Nawaaza Hai, Us Par Aap Ka Bohot Bohot Mashkoor Hun........ Aap Ke Takhayyul Ki Parwaaz Bhi Kuch Kam Nahi Hai... Khush Rahiye....... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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15th April 2012, 10:58 AM
Ahmad Bhaa'ii:
salaam! janaab dil-kaSh Ghazal paDhne ka mauqaa aapne diyaa maiN aapka ShuKraGuzaar huuN... mazaa aa gayaa! yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate rahiye dil se daad... Khush rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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16th April 2012, 10:33 PM
Wwaahhh Ahmad ji ...bahaut khoob...shayari to umdah hai hi....saath apney kuchch aisey manzar alfaaz ke zariye khadey kar diye jinhonein dil ko kured ke rakh diya....dheron daad aur mubarakbaad!
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18th April 2012, 06:21 AM
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Khoobsurat Labo Lehzaa ... FikR O Khayaal ! BehtreeN Ghazal Huii ... Sar Se Paa Talak ! Nayaab .. Purasar ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th April 2012, 06:28 PM
aapki ye ghazal bahot hi khubsoorat hai
maqta sabse khas raha Tamaam Umr ke Khawaabon Ko Baich Kar AHMAD Bas Ik Sukoon Ka Lamha Khareed Laaya Hai daad :-ek bujhaa hua dhumil palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
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19th April 2012, 10:02 AM
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23rd April 2012, 05:38 PM
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Janaab Uffaq Saaheb...! Aap Ki Inaayat Hai Jo Aap Ne Is Kalaam Ko Waqt Dia....... Or Purkhuloos Daad-o-Mubarakbaad se nawaaza..... Dil Ko Bahot Khushi mili aap ki raaye jaan kar... Sada khush rahiye yunhi sath banaaye rakhiye....... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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24th April 2012, 10:36 AM
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Ji Bhaut Sunder..................... Ye Tujh Me Aaj Bhala Kaun Baat Karta Hai…? Ye Kis Ka Aaj Tuu Lehja Khareed Laaya Hai…? Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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27th April 2012, 03:58 PM
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27th April 2012, 04:00 PM
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Zarrah Ji............! Aap Ne JIs Khubsurat Andaz Me Is KHaaksaar Ke Adnaa Kalam Ko Saraaha Hai, Us Ke Liye Tah-e-Dil se aap Ka Mashkoor Hun.....Sada Khush Rahiye.... Yunhi Sath Banaaye Rakhiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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27th April 2012, 04:03 PM
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Mohtaram Naresh Mehra Ji....! Aap Ki Shafqat HAi...Nawaazish Hai, inaayat Hai Jo Aap ne Is Kalaam Ko Waqt Or Or Hausla-afzaayi Se nawaaza..Khush Rhaiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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27th April 2012, 04:05 PM
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Radhika Ji..........! Aap Ki daad Ka Bahot Bahot Shukria.. Sada Khush Rahiye..... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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