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uske haathon mein mehndi lagaai jaayegi
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uske haathon mein mehndi lagaai jaayegi - 6th September 2001, 08:19 AM

uske haathon mein mehndi lagaai jaayegi

uske maathe pe bindiya sajaai jaayegi

kajle ke dhaar palkon mein lagaali jaayegi

reshmi zulfon mein chandni bikhraai jaayegi


poshaak aik surakh usSe pehnaai jaayegi

phool se pairon mein pajeab khankhanaayegi
saji-dhajii mehfil mein jab woh laayi jaayegi

kya qayamat lagti hogi meri mehbooba
jab woh gair ki dulhan banaai jaayegi

maikasH


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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

maikash
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24th September 2001, 07:14 AM

yaar most of the feelings shared by you in your shers are same as mine. Par yaar tum mujhse thoda sa jyada lucky ho...

Dard-e-Dil ko sher aur ghazal banakar bayan kar dete ho
hum se to wo bhi nahi hota
ulta dard-e-dil dil mein hi rehta hai...
aur bahut satata hai


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shukriya dost...!!
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shukriya dost...!! - 24th September 2001, 07:22 AM

mohabbat insaan ko kya banaa deti hai ye ya to woh jaanta hai jo kisi ko paa leta hai ya hum jaisa woh jaanta hai to sab kuch gawaa leta hai...!!


aik ghazal likh raha tha abhi......usi ka aik sheyr kehta hoon...

sewaaye tere naam ke sunaa kuch bhi nahin
maine socha kya-kya aur hua kuch bhi nahin

mehfil ne suni hai mere zakhmon ki sadaa
aapki kasam humne kahaa kuch bhi nahin

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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai

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24th September 2001, 09:14 AM

that was just awesome mate

koi to mila jo meri feelings share karta hai...jo samakh sakta hai mere dard ko aur us dard ko zubani bayan kar sakta hai

maikash bhai u r great

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25th September 2001, 07:02 AM

shukriya mere dost...

tanha na apne aap ko ab paaiye janaab
meri ghazal ko saath liye jaaiye janaab


gumnaam


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25th September 2001, 07:31 AM

thanks mate

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mera bhi yahi haal hai.....
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mera bhi yahi haal hai..... - 25th September 2001, 01:35 PM

hi maikash,

lagta hai main akela nahin hoon apne gam main...

jis din
"uske haathon mein mehndi lagaai jaayegi" woh din bahut kareeb aa chuka hai... aur mujhse ab zyaada gam bhi nahin hota... khair sochta hoon..jo hua ...kisi kaaran ki wajah se hua hai...

pata nahin oopar waale ne kya socha hai mere liye...


cheers to all aashiqs...
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25th September 2001, 04:49 PM

sahi kaha darshna ji aapne....!!

Ye sab ke sab gham ke shikar nazar aate hain..lekin aap log kabhi zindagi se mayoos na hoon..uparwale ne aap logon ke liye bhi khushiyan chupa kar rakhi hongi jo aap logon ki jholi me jaldi hi dali jaygi...ye meri dua hai

Hamesha khush rahein....kyonki kuch pata nahi ke aap ki ek muskurahat pe kab kaun fida ho jaye!!


kabhi kisi ko muqammal jahan nahi milta
kahiiN zameeN to kahiiN aasmaN nahi milta!!
   
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Love hi - 25th September 2001, 05:06 PM

dear shumailaji...

sahi farmaya aapne...

lekin ek song pesh karti hoon..

main zindagi ka saath nibhata chala gaya
har fikr ko dhuve main udata chala gaya...

gam aur khushi main fark na mehsoos ho jaha
main dil ko us makam pe lata chala gaya...

film-hum dono
hero-dev anand
music-jaydev

abhi koi fark nahin padta khushi ya gam se.....

-take care


kunche ko tere chhorkar, jogi hi ban jaye magar..
jungle tere, parbat tere, basti teri
sahera tera....
   
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shukriya - 25th September 2001, 06:03 PM

thanx for the hope shumaila..... aur main ab gam ka shikar nahin hoon... mera gam ka paimaana bhar chuka hai.... bas ab khushi ka intezaar hai....
   
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Thumbs up adaab...!! - 26th September 2001, 06:08 AM

hello gaurav....

toote dil se dil todne waalon ko duaa de dekho mere dost.....
tumhari aah jis din unke dil ko choo gayi ....dekhna us din dil ko kitna sukoon milta hai.....

ghane darakht ke neeche sulaa ke chorr gaya
ajeeb shaksh tha sapne dikhaa ke chorr gaya
ye ujdaa ghar to ussi aik ki amanat hai
jo apne naam ki takhti lagaa ke chorr gaya.....!!

is sheyr pe gaur karna......

umar jalwon mein basar ho ye jaroori to nahin
har shab-e-gam ki sahar ho ye jaroori to nahin
neend to... kaanton ke bistar pe bhi aa sakti hai
unki aagosh mein sar ho ye jaroori to nahin.....?


gumnaam

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8th March 2003, 02:58 AM

very nice


dont frown, u never know whoz falling in love with ur smile :)

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hi maikaash ji,
wah wah bahut achaa likha hai..
keep writin
love riddhi


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uske haathon mein mehndi lagaai jaayegi

uske maathe pe bindiya sajaai jaayegi

kajle ke dhaar palkon mein lagaali jaayegi

reshmi zulfon mein chandni bikhraai jaayegi


poshaak aik surakh usSe pehnaai jaayegi

phool se pairon mein pajeab khankhanaayegi
saji-dhajii mehfil mein jab woh laayi jaayegi

kya qayamat lagti hogi meri mehbooba
jab woh gair ki dulhan banaai jaayegi

maikasH
Dard hi dard bhar gaya dil meiN aapki yeh chand panktiya.n padkar.....jo sawaal aapse kai baar poocha bhai.......ab woh sawaal nahi poochuNgi.

aapki shayri ka koi jawaab nahi........
aaj aapko khoob padna chah rahi hoon....

kush raho.....


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