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28th November 2005, 07:09 PM
dear friends
aaj ek nai gajal ban padi hai aapko achhi lage yahi soch kar pesh kar raha hun Jamane ka chalan apnaya jaye ! Hamare ishq ko thokraya jaye ! gunaah-e-ishq kee himmat kare jo .. use taa-umra tak tadpaya jaye ! suna hai sab mohobbat kar rahe hain .. hamare kisse ko farmaya jaye ! bahut kambkht dil ke raaste hain .. janha se laut ke aaya na jaye ! na jaane kyun sakun milne laga hai .. mere maajhi ko fir dohraaya jaye ! jinhe guman hai ulfat pe apni .. nasamjh hain ..unhe samjhaya jaye ! durd mashhoor fir se ho raha hai .. "Anish" ka dil kahin dafnaya jaye ! tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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28th November 2005, 07:16 PM
bahut hi pyara kalaam likha hai aapne Anish ji,
gunaah-e-ishq kee himmat kare jo .. use taa-umra tak tadpaya jaye ! sahi to hai..... jo pyar kare tadpe zaroor..... wo gaana hai na......jise hasna rona hai.. wo PYAR kare.... bas wahi hai apka kalaam mujhe bahut accha lagaa.... or apke naam se ik dost ki yaad aa gayi........ shukriya apka jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th November 2005, 09:35 PM
dear anish...bahaut hi umdaa likkha hai..
nihayti pyaara kalaam laga... likhte rehna... take care n bye  Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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28th November 2005, 11:17 PM
Jamane ka chalan apnaya jaye !
Hamare ishq ko thokraya jaye ! gunaah-e-ishq kee himmat kare jo .. use taa-umra tak tadpaya jaye ! Waaaaah.. bahut khoob kaha hai janaab! suna hai sab mohobbat kar rahe hain .. hamare kisse ko farmaya jaye ! bahut kambkht dil ke raaste hain .. janha se laut ke aaya na jaye ! Well said...! na jaane kyun sakun milne laga hai .. mere maajhi ko fir dohraaya jaye ! jinhe guman hai ulfat pe apni .. nasamjh hain ..unhe samjhaya jaye ! durd mashhoor fir se ho raha hai .. "Anish" ka dil kahin dafnaya jaye ! Khoobsurat byaanii...! Anish, Bahut hi khoobsoorti se bayaan kiya hai aapne apne ehsaas ko... MMujhe bahut pasand aaye aapke yeh aashaar...yun hi likhte rahiyega.... meri daad kubool kijiye...! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th November 2005, 12:08 AM
dear shweta
shukriya ke aapko meri ye rachna pasand aai or agar mere naam ne aapko ek purane dost kee yaad dilai hai to uske liye main apne naam ko sarthak manta hun waise ham bhi to aapke dost hain waise aapke ek sher ne hame bhi kisi kee yaad dila dee hai milna "ittefaq" tha bichdna "naseeb" tha wo utna hi ''durr'' ho gaya jitna "kareeb'' tha kabhi kisi ne hamse door hote hue ye sher kaha tha or likh kar diya tha ---------- dear farhana jee shukrgujaar hun ke hamesha kee tarah aap fir se hame hosla de rahe hain or taareef ke liye bhi aaapka shukrgujar hun ----- dear pulkit jee thnx ke aap yanha aaye or meri is rachana ko saraha dil se shukrgujar hun aapka tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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29th November 2005, 05:19 PM
bahoot khoob likha hai Anish ji..
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29th November 2005, 05:43 PM
hi garima jee
thnx for reply aapko achhi lagi ye rachana iske liye ye jankar khushi hui thnx again tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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20th March 2006, 08:39 AM
Dearest Anish,
After reading this, all I can say is.... WOW... bahut achhe dost. dard, junoon, tadap... kya kahu mein? daad kubul karna meri, aur aaise hi achha achha likhte rehna. take care! |
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20th March 2006, 10:30 AM
hi parul
ek purani see yaad ko fir se taja karne ke liye shukriya or shukriya ise padhne or tareef ke kabil samjhne ke liye tum mujhe bhool bhi jao to ye haq hai tumko ! meri baat or hai maine to mohobbat kee hai !! :) anish.paliwal@gmail.com:) |
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