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Amar Prem - 7th September 2014, 07:28 AM
Teri garm saansen aaj bhi galon ko sehlati.hain,
Jab kabhi raat ki tanhai mein teri yaad aati hai.

Baagon mein bahar ban ke tu jab muskurati hai ,
Teri ankhon kee vo kashish phir mujhe bulati hai.

Tere narm hothon ka kapkapana yaad aata hai ,
Dil ke kisi kone mein phir se hulchal machati hai.

Waqt ke hathon kurbaan ho gayi teti meri mohabbat,
Per teri baahon ki vo kaid kahan chhoot paati hai.

Tun nahin hai bus teri yaad mein bus jeena hai,
Mere Dil ki dharkan baar baar ye baat dohraati hai.


khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
   
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7th September 2014, 10:39 AM
bahut hee umda shayri prastut kee hai aapne....ek alag andaaz mein dikhe aap mujhe.....keep it up...


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7th September 2014, 11:03 AM
bahot hi roomaani andaaz raha aapka sanjay saahab is baar..... bahot acchii peshkash rahi aapki......

likhte rahen

Shaad.....

Shaad...
   
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7th September 2014, 12:38 PM
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bahut hee umda shayri prastut kee hai aapne....ek alag andaaz mein dikhe aap mujhe.....keep it up...

Arvind ji shukriya ...

maine dekha ki.Ishq mein bicherne ka dard kuch jyada hi hota hai.
Kypn na bichar ke bhi achchi yaadon ko sanjoyein


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bahot hi roomaani andaaz raha aapka sanjay saahab is baar..... bahot acchii peshkash rahi aapki......

likhte rahen

Shaad.....
Samir bhai shukriya aapka ...
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Mann yun hi bhatakta phirta hai aaj isko yadon ki sambhal de do


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7th September 2014, 04:03 PM
waah !! bahaut khoob Sanjay ji !! behad roomaanee ehsaas aur behad sachche jazbaat !! dheron daad aap ko is khoobsurat ghazal par !!

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7th September 2014, 05:24 PM
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waah !! bahaut khoob Sanjay ji !! behad roomaanee ehsaas aur behad sachche jazbaat !! dheron daad aap ko is khoobsurat ghazal par !!
Zarra Sahib ,
Haste mamool aap ne phir hausala hi badaya hai mera .
Ghazal pasand karne ke liye shukriya janab..

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7th September 2014, 05:36 PM
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Sanjayji aapki nazm meiN ishq aur dard dono ki jhalak hai i hope ye sirf aapke khayal haiN sachchai nahin hai...sachchai hogi to mujhe bahot dukh hoga aap kaafi zinda dil aur hansmukh insaan haiN lekin aksar aise logoN ke dil meiN hi bepanaah dard hota hai....u may differ tough...aur waaaahhhhh! Bahot khoob rumaanii andaaz hai nazm meiN...yunhi likhtey rahiye
Dear Naaz ,

Main apka concern dekh kar overwhelm ho gaya . Per aisa kuch nahin hai.
Dekho jaise main non drinker ho kersharab pe likh sakta hun ..waise hi yahan
bhi kuch aise hi hai.. In fact main doosro ko observe karta rehta hun . Ye bhi kisi
aur ki life se inpired hai.

Shukhriya aapka ghazal pasand karne ke liye aur aap ke concern ke liye.

God bless you .

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Boht Khoob! - 7th September 2014, 08:03 PM
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Teri garm saansen aaj bhi galon ko sehlati.hain,
Jab kabhi raat ki tanhai mein teri yaad aati hai.

Baagon mein bahar ban ke tu jab muskurati hai ,
Teri ankhon kee vo kashish phir mujhe bulati hai.

Tere narm hothon ka kapkapana yaad aata hai ,
Dil ke kisi kone mein phir se hulchal machati hai.

Waqt ke hathon kurbaan ho gayi teti meri mohabbat,
Per teri baahon ki vo kaid kahan chhoot paati hai.

Tun nahin hai bus teri yaad mein bus jeena hai,
Mere Dil ki dharkan baar baar ye baat dohraati hai.
Boht khoob, jazbe ki gehrai ba kamaal hy
Duaon ke saath
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8th September 2014, 11:11 AM
wahhhh! Sanjay jii,,

Wese to aap ka hur andaaz hi qaabil-e-tehseen hota hai,
yeH roomaani andaaz bhi baDa pasand aaya......

DherooN daad iss naram-o-naazuk kalaam ke liye!

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,

*hSn* : parStaar

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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
   
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8th September 2014, 09:04 PM
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Boht khoob, jazbe ki gehrai ba kamaal hy
Duaon ke saath
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Bahut bahut shukriya aapki daad ke liye ..


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