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mai lakh vari khud nu azma ke dekh leya - 15th December 2007, 06:50 PM
lakh vari dil nu samjha ke vekh leya,
ohde jeha bhulekha kha v vekh leya,
uss chan dai rishma da jo nigh c, oh mud nahi milea
mai aapna ghar baar jla ke vekh leya.
nahi ha mai uss di ik risham jeha v,
mai lakh vari khud nu azma ke dekh leya,
aap muhare kadam tur pende ohde dar val nu,
mai har vaar rasta nava bna ke dekh leya.
rabb v kujh ta uss to oona c,
mai ohdi thave rabb nu bitha v dekh leya.
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lakh vari dil nu samjha ke vekh leya,
ohde jeha bhulekha kha v vekh leya,
uss chan dai rishma da jo nigh c, oh mud nahi milea
mai aapna ghar baar jla ke vekh leya.
nahi ha mai uss di ik risham jeha v,
mai lakh vari khud nu azma ke dekh leya,
aap muhare kadam tur pende ohde dar val nu,
mai har vaar rasta nava bna ke dekh leya.
rabb v kujh ta uss to oona c,
mai ohdi thave rabb nu bitha v dekh leya.

wah mere dost kya khub likha hai apne ahesaso ko hame bahut hi pasand aaya bas aage bhi yu hi likhte rahena
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15th December 2007, 07:08 PM
wah mere dost kya khub likha hai apne ahesaso ko hame bahut hi pasand aaya bas aage bhi yu hi likhte rahena.

thx KRENIL JI.aap ne apna kimti time meri poem ko diya.aap ko acha laga yeh aap ki jarraniwazi hai. shukriya dost.
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15th December 2007, 09:01 PM
Hello Babbu ji
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Thx God ke iss mehfil wich punjabi poetry da great poet aarse baad kuch likh reha hai,
tusi ene chir baad kuch likhiya hai, sachi jo vi likhiya hai kamaal da likhiya hai, iss mehfil de sare member taras gaye san tuhadi poetry read karan nu, Ek request karni si ke plz poetry likhna stop na kariya karo
sachi bahut hi sohna likhiya hai, ek ek line tuhade good poet hon da saboot dendi hai




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16th December 2007, 08:44 AM
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lakh vari dil nu samjha ke vekh leya,
ohde jeha bhulekha kha v vekh leya,
uss chan dai rishma da jo nigh c, oh mud nahi milea
mai aapna ghar baar jla ke vekh leya.
nahi ha mai uss di ik risham jeha v,
mai lakh vari khud nu azma ke dekh leya,
aap muhare kadam tur pende ohde dar val nu,
mai har vaar rasta nava bna ke dekh leya.
rabb v kujh ta uss to oona c,
mai ohdi thave rabb nu bitha v dekh leya.
hello babu ji bhut khoob likhea hai, menu aj v thodi koun poem var var read krn nu dil krda hai, bhut gehrai nal likhde ho, pr jldi vapis aea kro
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17th December 2007, 08:24 PM
HEER tuhada dhanwaad tusi iss choti jehi poem nu like kita. mai koshish karda ha ki jaldi hazri lava deva par kai vaar zindgi de rujewea ch fursat nahi mildi.enaa maan den lai tuhada sabh da rini ha.
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17th December 2007, 08:30 PM
DR. PREET tuhada dhanwadi hai tusi meri mamuli jehi poem nu ena pyaar dita.par sach aakha ta tuhadi poetry din b din khoob surat ho rahi hai. tuhanu read karna changa lagda hai likhde reha karo.
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quote=A-BABBU;262199]lakh vari dil nu samjha ke vekh leya,
ohde jeha bhulekha kha v vekh leya,
uss chan dai rishma da jo nigh c, oh mud nahi milea
mai aapna ghar baar jla ke vekh leya.
nahi ha mai uss di ik risham jeha v,
mai lakh vari khud nu azma ke dekh leya,
aap muhare kadam tur pende ohde dar val nu,
mai har vaar rasta nava bna ke dekh leya.
rabb v kujh ta uss to oona c,
mai ohdi thave rabb nu bitha v dekh leya.
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Waahhhh - 24th December 2007, 03:55 PM
Babbu ji pehlaaN taaN tuhaadey naraazgi hai ki tusi bahut DinaaN de baad kujh likhiyaa hai. Aur doosri gall eh hai ki Tusi Shaandaar likhiyaa hai. Tuhaadi poetry di dunghaaee nu vekh ke man kardaa hai ki kadi tuhanu saahmney baith ke suniyey. Agar kadi mulaaqaat ho saki te main apney aap nu khushkismat samjhaaNgaa.

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SAJAN tuhada shukria tusi meri poem nu like kita. tuhade jehe dosta da sath reha ta hamesha likhda rahaga.
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[quote=tilakji;263212]Babbu ji pehlaaN taaN tuhaadey naraazgi hai ki tusi bahut DinaaN de baad kujh likhiyaa hai. Aur doosri gall eh hai ki Tusi Shaandaar likhiyaa hai. Tuhaadi poetry di dunghaaee nu vekh ke man kardaa hai ki kadi tuhanu saahmney baith ke suniyey. Agar kadi mulaaqaat ho saki te main apney aap nu khushkismat samjhaaNgaa.

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TILAK JI ene apnepan lai mere kol shabad nahi han ki mai ki likha.ha iss vaar mai thodi der naal kujh likhea hai.iss lai mafi chaha ga.
TILAK JI eh tuhadi jara niwazi hai ki tusi iss nacheez nu ena maan de rahe ho.tuhadi reply hi ene sohne hunde han ki mamuli jehi poem v sohni ho nibrdi hai.kade mauka milea ta mai khud tuhana milna chahaga.ene pyare reply lai tuhada shukarguzar ha.
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5th January 2008, 10:17 AM
Babbu Vire,

Tuhadi Poem Padhi, Sidi Dil tak gai.... Mein Shayri.com te Kujh din pehla hi aya haan... Eh Sochiya ke meinu pehla koi nahi pata chalya iss website bare....

Vire, meri kalm aje apne bachpan vich hi hai.... Apni kalm di bachdi umar tuhadi Poem de naam karda haan....

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5th January 2008, 10:33 AM
Babbu ji........tuhadi poetry bahut vadiya laggi....main phele v kai baar tuhanu pad chuki haaN....bas waqt di kami kaaran review nahi de sakki....maaf karna....tuhadi poetry dil nu chuh jaundi hai.....aida hi likhde raho te punjabiyat da naam vadaunde raho....!

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[quote=rishi22722;264852]Babbu Vire,

Tuhadi Poem Padhi, Sidi Dil tak gai.... Mein Shayri.com te Kujh din pehla hi aya haan... Eh Sochiya ke meinu pehla koi nahi pata chalya iss website bare....

Vire, meri kalm aje apne bachpan vich hi hai.... Apni kalm di bachdi umar tuhadi Poem de naam karda haan....

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thx RISHI JI meri poem nu apna kimti sma den lai. tuhadi tra mai v pehlaa iss site bare anjaan hi c. par pata hi nahi lagea ki kad eh meri aapni ho gyi. is site de sare hi member baht pyare han. jo sab nu bahut aapnapan dinde han.
par Rishi tusi mainu ena maan de rahe ho sachi mai iss de kabil nahi ha.plez mainu ikk mamuli insaan rehan deo.
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[quote=sunita virender;264859]Babbu ji........tuhadi poetry bahut vadiya laggi....main phele v kai baar tuhanu pad chuki haaN....bas waqt di kami kaaran review nahi de sakki....maaf karna....tuhadi poetry dil nu chuh jaundi hai.....aida hi likhde raho te punjabiyat da naam vadaunde raho....!

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