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kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai..... - 11th July 2009, 12:49 PM


kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....


Subha ko din woh hi kehte hai
Jinhe tazurba nahi raat abhi baaki hai.....

Zara faasle se chala karo tum
Saath mai koi aur bhi hai.....

Puchhte ho tum jis shakss ka pata
Woh ab iss shahar mai nahi hai.....

Mod toh kitne aaye they raaste mai
Kidhar jaau yeh batane wala koi nahi hai....

Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....

Khatam kar diya ab maine intezaar karna kisi ka
Mujhe tanahayee mai jeene ki aadat sii ho gai hai.....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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11th July 2009, 01:24 PM
Naresh jii..........accha likha hai aapne, par ek sher mujhe bahut accha laga, woh yeh hai:


Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....


bahut khoob likha hai.
kush raho

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11th July 2009, 01:33 PM
Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
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bahut accha sher hai ye...nareshji.............
bilkul naya..taaza..................
   
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11th July 2009, 03:50 PM
Natresh Jii,

Tusi to dheere dheere cha rahe ho guru...
Bahut hi changa likha ha bahut hi vadiya..

Is sher da tumse nikalna hi aapke kamyabi ki nishani hai yaara..

Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
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Bahut hi vadiya likhata rahe guru..
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13th July 2009, 03:03 AM
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kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....


Subha ko din woh hi kehte hai
Jinhe tazurba nahi raat abhi baaki hai.....

Zara faasle se chala karo tum
Saath mai koi aur bhi hai.....

Puchhte ho tum jis shakss ka pata
Woh ab iss shahar mai nahi hai.....

Mod toh kitne aaye they raaste mai
Kidhar jaau yeh batane wala koi nahi hai....

Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....

Khatam kar diya ab maine intezaar karna kisi ka
Mujhe tanahayee mai jeene ki aadat sii ho gai hai.....


Nalin

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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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15th July 2009, 01:09 AM
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Behad ruhani ehsaas...................... dil se daad kubul kijiye
Nalin ji.............Meri koshish ko sarahane ka bahut bahut shukriya..........aise hi mera hausla badhate rahiye.........taki aur acha kuch likh paau........



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15th July 2009, 05:27 AM
aadaab naresh ji......bahut hi khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aapne....
aur ye sher...

Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....

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likhte rahiye....
   
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aadaab naresh ji......bahut hi khoobsurat gazal likhi hai aapne....
aur ye sher...

Tum mere maazi ki kitaab ka vark aahista se kholna
Pehle panne par kisi ke aansoon ki boond rakhi hai.....

laajwaab.....
likhte rahiye....
Raj ji..........Shukriya .......aapne meri nazm ko kimti waqt diya.......aur saraha......meri koshish safal ho gai lagta hai........aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega.......kiya pata kuch acha likh paau aur...........



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18th July 2009, 10:19 AM
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NARESH JI aap bahut hi khoobsurat likhte haiN...
Thank's.........koshish ki sarahana ke liye.......



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19th July 2009, 09:51 AM
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bahut accha sher hai ye...nareshji.............
bilkul naya..taaza..................
Mere is Sher ki sarahna ke liye.........aapka bahut bahut shukriya..........



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