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rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai....(gazal)
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rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai....(gazal) - 24th July 2006, 04:35 PM

dosto meri gazal tu nahi teri chhahat nahi.....main kush khamia thee jo mujhay ghayal sahib nay batai or maine unko mehsoos karke un main sudhaar kiya hai...


rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai,
dharnak nahi sansain nahi magar hum jeete to hai....

tu nahi teri chhahat nahi magar dil dharkte to hai,
aansu nahi shikva nahi magar dard sehakte to hai......

chaand nahi taaray nai magar chiraag jalte to hai,
phool nahi khushboo nahi magar ehsaas mehakte to hai........

saaj nahi awaaz nahi magar hoont larzte to hai,
shaam nahi jaam nahi magar qadam behakte to hai......

deewarain nahi chhat nahi magar log rehte to hai,
kafan nahi dafan nahi magar armaa sulagte to hai.....

sagar nahi dariaa nahi magar ashak behte to hai,
bahar nahi khizaan nahi magar mausam badalte to hai.......

tera koocha nahi dar nahi magar sar jhukte to hai,
saudagar nahi bazaar nahi magar ehsaas bikte to hai....

aankhain nahi neendain nahi magar khaab aatae to hai,
'veer' kalam nahi kagaz nahi magar hum likhte to hai.......

umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi.......raj........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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24th July 2006, 06:43 PM

raj ji,
acha laga aapka kalaam paadhkar.yun laga kisi ne mere dil ki kafiyat likh daali.

tu nahi teri chhahat nahi magar dil dharkte to hai,
aansu nahi shikva nahi magar dard sehakte to hai......

deewarain nahi chhat nahi magar log rehte to hai,
kafan nahi dafan nahi magar armaa sulagte to hai.....

bahut khoob,likhte rahiye


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai......(gazal) - 24th July 2006, 07:22 PM

veer ji

tu nahi teri chhahat nahi magar dil dharkte to hai,
aansu nahi shikva nahi dard sehakte to hai,


ye do line sabse achhi lagi.
baki puri gazal achhi hai aur bahot achhi hai. pahle bhi achhi hi thi aur ab to aur bhi achhi hai
   
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Re: rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai....(gazal) - 25th July 2006, 11:39 AM

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dosto meri gazal tu nahi teri chhahat nahi.....main kush khamia thee jo mujhay ghayal sahib nay batai or maine unko mehsoos karke un main sudhaar kiya hai...


rasta nahi manzil nahi magar hum chalte to hai,
dharnak nahi sansain nahi magar hum jeete to hai....

tu nahi teri chhahat nahi magar dil dharkte to hai,
aansu nahi shikva nahi magar dard sehakte to hai......

chaand nahi taaray nai magar chiraag jalte to hai,
phool nahi khushboo nahi magar ehsaas mehakte to hai........

saaj nahi awaaz nahi magar hoont larzte to hai,
shaam nahi jaam nahi magar qadam behakte to hai......

deewarain nahi chhat nahi magar log rehte to hai,
kafan nahi dafan nahi magar armaa sulagte to hai.....

sagar nahi dariaa nahi magar ashak behte to hai,
bahar nahi khizaan nahi magar mausam badalte to hai.......

tera koocha nahi dar nahi magar sar jhukte to hai,
saudagar nahi bazaar nahi magar ehsaas bikte to hai....

aankhain nahi neendain nahi magar khaab aatae to hai,
'veer' kalam nahi kagaz nahi magar hum likhte to hai.......

umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi.......raj........
raj ji appke likhi har rachna badiya hoti hai, aur ha yeh to jindgi ki sachai hai k, sapney sach nahi hoptey:

yeh jantey huey bhi hum sapney dekhtey to hai,
jiney ki essha na ho phir bhi log jeetey to hai


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hi - 28th July 2006, 10:24 AM

mere gumnaam dost main apko aksar apni post par pata hoon...app mere takreeban har qalaak ko parhti ho or sarahti bhee ho....gar app yu hee hosla afzai karti rahi ....to koshish karounga ki or acha likh saku....appmeri post par i raj tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hai..........raj......


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hi - 8th August 2006, 10:53 AM

veer ji

tu nahi teri chhahat nahi magar dil dharkte to hai,
aansu nahi shikva nahi dard sehakte to hai,


ye do line sabse achhi lagi.
baki puri gazal achhi hai aur bahot achhi hai. pahle bhi achhi hi thi aur ab to aur bhi achhi hai

pooja ji main aksar appko apni post par dekhta hoon.....mujhe lagta hai app bhut dil se meri gazlon ko parhti ho......jiske naseeb main app jaisa parne wala ho uski to mano kismat he badal jati hai.....appko meri gazal pasand i main tahe dil se appka shukria aada karta hoon......or umeed karta hoon appka pyaar yu he milta rahega........raj...........


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hi - 9th August 2006, 09:25 AM

waah wah ek achhi koshish ke liye daad hazir hai
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hi - 11th August 2006, 06:47 PM

manu ji appko mera qalaam pasand aiya to mujhe yakeen hua ki saach main maine kush acha likha hai kiyon ki jo qalaam appki parkhi nazar se guzar gaya wo zaroor umda hoga...appka bhut bhut shukria jo app meri post par aiye,umeed karta hoon yu hee appka saath rahega......raj........


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hi - 14th August 2006, 01:51 PM

sunita ji app meri post par i meri gazal ko pasand kiya main appka bhut bhut shukria karta hoon.....umeed karta hoon appka saath hamesha mere saath rahega........raj.......


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