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Tasweer pe Tahreer - August 2015 -
3rd August 2015, 11:34 PM
To lijiye peechle mahine ke TPT ke silsile ko aage badhaate hai aur patjhad ke mausam se mel khaati tasveer is mahine ki tehreer ka sabab banegi.
Hidaayatein ek baar phir se tafseel se aapke saamne rakh raha hoon.. 1) aapke khayaalaat tasweer se milte hon, dhyaan rakhiye khayaal tasweer ke jitne nazdeeq honge, kalaam utnaa hi sabko attract karegaa.... 2) Kalaam khud kaa likhaa huaa ho.. ham maazrat ke saath kahnaa chahenge ke kisii aur ka likha hua kalaam hame na bhejen, warna use is muqaable me shaamil na kiyaa jaaegaa.... as per the rules of TPT. 3) aapkaa kalaam kisii aur website, Facebook ya personally kisii ko bhii share naa karen, jo aap TPT me dene waale hain... aapke kalaam me takhallus ya shaayar ka naam bhi shaamil na kijiyegaa... 4) ek member ek hi post hame bhej sakta hai.... aur bheja hua kalaam change na kiya jaae mehrbaani karke... haan agar usi kalaam me kuch mistakes ho gayee hon to wo sudhaarii jaa saktee hain... 5) aap apne kalaam, shaayri, kavita, nazm, ghazal ya geet sirf mujhe " Mast " ko , sirf aur sirf PM ke zariye bhejen...... isme Behar ki koi bandish nahii rakhii jaa rahii hai so that any one can take part.. lekin jo behar me likhnaa jaante hain wo iska istemaal kar sakte hain.... 6) Kalaam bhejne ki aakhrii tareekh hogee 18th August ... aap iske pahle apne kalaam mujhe PM par bhej den..... selection procedure ke liye ek poll thread banaya jaaegaa jiske through sabhii members/ mods apne votes dekar winner choose karenge... voting ki tareekh hogee 18th to 31st August... Voting shuru karne ke baad aap sab ko alag se ittelah kiyaa jaaegaa..... 7) koi bhi member aur Moderator is muqaable me hissaa le sakte hain aur voting ka adhikaar bhi rakhte hain..... 8) aur jaisa ke is baar main TPT conduct kar rahaa hoon to main iskaa zimmedaar rahungaa kisii bhi tarah ki shiqaayat aur sujhaaw kaa.. aap sab apni queries sirf mujhe bhejen, just to hide the identity .... Sabhi memebrs ke kalaam baaki sabhii dusre mods se bhii Also as i am coordinating TPT this time, hence to maintain transparency: a) i will not take part in TPT . b) i will not submit my kalaam in competition. c) i will not take part in selection process. (voting in poll thread.) 9) Winner ko ek bahut hi acche title se nawaazaa jaaegaa aur tohfe ke roop me 100 Reputation points bhii add kar diye jaaenge...... ye tiitle agle winner ki ghosnaa tak maanya rahegaa To doston ummeed kartaa hoon rules mazedaar lage honge aapko... to uthaaiye kalam aur mann ke andar utar kar wo khayaalaat kaagaz par utaar daaliye jo aapke bheetar is tasweer ko dekh kar kulbulaane lage hain...... to Pesh hai TPT season 2 ki dusri tasweer.....  Best of Luck....... -Team SDC Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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4th August 2015, 07:07 AM
Waah...bahut khoob tasweer pesh ki hai mast ji..aur sahi kaha mausam se mail khati huyi....
Sabhi dost is par apne khyaal zaroor hamare sath batenge aur is baar bhi tpt me badh chadh ke hissa lenge yahi asha karti hoon...... Aap sab ke kalaam ka intzaar rahega doston... Sabhi ko shubhkamnayein.......  अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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4th August 2015, 08:54 AM
Waahhh janab kya khoobsurat tasweer peshe nazar ki hai aapne..
Tamaam ahbaab ko dheron mubarakbaad... hm ummeed krte hn aap sab phle ki trh is bar Bhi badh chadh kr isme hissa lenge... Shaad... |
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4th August 2015, 09:46 AM
wahhhh...kya chun chun kar tasveer de rhe ho bhai...aisi tasveer dekh kar to shayroN ki kalam apne aap chalne lag jaaye...khoobsurat mausam...hawa meiN lehrata aanchal aur aanchal wali bhi aik moorat jaisi lag rhi hai...bahut hi khoobsurat.
muje to lag rha hai ki es baar aur bhi khoobsurat gazaleN bazm ki nazar ki jayeNgi...to likhne waloN likh daaliye khoobsurat tasveer khoobsurat gazal .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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4th August 2015, 03:22 PM
Lol mere phone pe tasveer dikh hi nahi rahi hai...
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5th August 2015, 09:55 AM
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5th August 2015, 10:58 AM
Shaad bhai khoob tasweer laye ho aap
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5th August 2015, 02:27 PM
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th August 2015, 02:56 PM
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) MAST ko Shaad bana diya .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th August 2015, 03:39 PM
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5th August 2015, 11:08 PM
DostoN,
Umeed hai aap sabne apni tehreer ki shuruat kar di hogi Aapki ghazalon/nazmon ke intezaar mein....Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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7th August 2015, 10:36 PM
Tasweer par apni tahreer jald se jald mast sahab ko pm kijiye doston.....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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7th August 2015, 11:49 PM
Aapki tehreer ke intezaar mein muntazir hai aankhein....Jald hi aaiye aur bayaan kijiye apne dil ki haalat is tasveer par...
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th August 2015, 02:13 PM
Zaroor ab tak kuch entries aa gayi hongi mast ji ke paas aur jo nahi bhej paye unse bhi request hai ki apni tahreer mast ji ko pm karein...18 August se pahle....
Shukriya.. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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10th August 2015, 11:14 PM
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Jaldi kijiye aakhri 1 hafta baaki hai...Mujhe aapki ghazalon ka intezaar raheGaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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10th August 2015, 11:31 PM
Wah Mast bhai kya tasveer hai ,,ise dekh ke ghazal ki do lines yaad aa gayee..
Aye husn beperwah tujhe shola kahuN shabnam kahuN , PhooloN meiN bhi shokhi tu hai , kisko magar apna kahUN, Chalo bhai kuch likhne ki koshis kerte haiN is tasveer pe , waise ye tasveer mujh se bolne lag gayee hai , apne raaz khole lag gayee hai Hamdam khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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10th August 2015, 11:34 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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11th August 2015, 03:47 PM
Namaskaar dostoN
Aap sab se darKwaast hai kii tpt me hissa zaruur len...jald apni koshish bhej deN Aapka Dhaval |
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12th August 2015, 04:23 PM
Doston....kuchh hi din baaqee reh gaye hain....apni likhi hui koshish ko jald bhejen
Aapka Dhaval |
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13th August 2015, 10:36 PM
ab sirf 5 din reh gaye hai doston...Umeed hai aap sabki entries mujh tak jald hi pahunchegii...
Intezaar mein Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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13th August 2015, 10:40 PM
Doston jaldi se bhej den apni peshkash.......
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14th August 2015, 10:17 AM
pyaare doston .. jald se jald apne kalaam mast saahab ko PM karen............
kya apata is baar ke winner me aapka naam aajaae......... good luck guys.. Shaad..... |
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14th August 2015, 10:58 AM
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To jaldi kijiye doston.................. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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14th August 2015, 07:22 PM
Doston tpt me hissa zaruur len........aapki koshish kaa intezaar rahegaa......
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17th August 2015, 10:58 AM
Sabhi sdc members se guzarish hai apni tahree mast ji ko aaj hee pm kar dein...jaisa ki aap jante hain..sirf ek din hee bacha hai....
To please jaldi karein...... Good luck... Apki dost madhu... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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17th August 2015, 12:46 PM
doston jald se jald apne kalaam mast saahab ko bhej den.................
shukriyaa shaad.... |
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17th August 2015, 01:08 PM
waqt ne ulti ginti shuru kar di hai aap sab ki entries ka mujhe intezaar hai..jald hi aaiye...
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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