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Teri mutthi meiN teri qismat hai - 11th April 2013, 11:27 PM

GHAZAL
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KoshishoN se agar muhabbat hai |
Teri mutthi meiN teri qismat hai ||

kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
ek bus aap ki zaroorat hai ||

Jaan bhi un pe waar di maiN ne |
Phir bhi mujh se unheN shikayat hai ||

poochhte haiN pila ke zahr mujhe |
kaisi JAWED ab tabeeyat hai ??


ग़ज़ल
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कोशिशों से अगर मुहब्बत है ।
तेरी मुट्ठी में तेरी क़िस्मत है ।।

काट कर वो हमारे पर बोले ।
जाओ परवाज़ की इजाज़त है ।।

तेग़ है मैं हूँ मेरी गर्दन है ।
एक बस आप की ज़रूरत है ।।

जान भी उन पे वार दी मैं ने ।
फिर भी मुझ से उन्हें शिकायत है ।।

पूछते हैं पिला के ज़हर मुझे ।
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---हातिम जावेद
   
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26th April 2013, 04:17 AM

kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
ek bus aap ki zaroorat hai ||

Very nice..

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kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
ek bus aap ki zaroorat hai ||

Very nice..

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GHAZAL
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KoshishoN se agar muhabbat hai |
Teri mutthi meiN teri qismat hai ||

kaat kar wo hamaare par bole |
jaao parwaaz ki ijazat hai ||

Teg hai maiN hooN meri gardan hai |
ek bus aap ki zaroorat hai ||

Jaan bhi un pe waar di maiN ne |
Phir bhi mujh se unheN shikayat hai ||

poochhte haiN pila ke zahr mujhe |
kaisi JAWED ab tabeeyat hai ??


ग़ज़ल
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कोशिशों से अगर मुहब्बत है ।
तेरी मुट्ठी में तेरी क़िस्मत है ।।

काट कर वो हमारे पर बोले ।
जाओ परवाज़ की इजाज़त है ।।

तेग़ है मैं हूँ मेरी गर्दन है ।
एक बस आप की ज़रूरत है ।।

जान भी उन पे वार दी मैं ने ।
फिर भी मुझ से उन्हें शिकायत है ।।

पूछते हैं पिला के ज़हर मुझे ।
कैसी 'जावेद' अब तबीयत है ??
---हातिम जावेद
   
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13th May 2013, 09:34 PM

poochhte haiN pila ke zahr mujhe |
kaisi JAWED ab tabeeyat hai ??


waahh janaab kya baat hai.... bahot khoob


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