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~~*ye zamaanaa judaaiyon waala*~~ - 3rd January 2016, 08:49 AM



Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....


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Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....
main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise....

Wah wah shaad sahab. Umda sher kahe hain aapne. Rumani andaaz bhi kya kehne.

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terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

Waah!! Bahut khoob bayangi....

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

Kya kahne....umda..

Naye saal ki shuruat Bahut haseen ghazal se huyi hai shaad sahab...bahut khoobsurat sher kahe hain.....is muhabbat bhare kalaam par daad qubool kijiyega..
Aise hee mahfil me chaar chaand lagate rahein...

Aate rahiye..
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Kya baat hai Shoiab bhai.....bahut khoobsurat aashaar....last two lines to jaise naye saal ka tohfa de diya aapne.....simpy superb...
bahut bahut shukriyaa aapka aru bhai...... merii ki taraf se shukriyaa qubool kijiyega.................

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Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....
Dil ke jab tootne ki awaaz na ho
khwaashishen ho par khwaab na ho

ek aisi tapish mein le gayi tumhaari baatein
baagh mein hum aur koi gulaab na ho

Bhai bahut naazuk bahut umdaa aur kaafi dil se likhi gayi rachnaa hai.....nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa aur yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa



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Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....
bahut khoob rahi aapki yeh koshish Shaad bhai........................


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Wah wah shaad sahab. Umda sher kahe hain aapne. Rumani andaaz bhi kya kehne.

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terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

Waah!! Bahut khoob bayangi....

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....

Kya kahne....umda..

Naye saal ki shuruat Bahut haseen ghazal se huyi hai shaad sahab...bahut khoobsurat sher kahe hain.....is muhabbat bhare kalaam par daad qubool kijiyega..
Aise hee mahfil me chaar chaand lagate rahein...

Aate rahiye..
Khush rahiye...


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Shaad bhaii

Namaste...kaise hain aap?

Hameshaa ki tarah ehsaason ko lafzon me ba khoobee pesb kiyaa hai aapne...dil se daad aur duaaen...aapko padhnaa hameshaa se ahchchha lagtaa hai..

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Aapki tadap dilbtak pohunchi.....bohut khubsoorat.

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Dil ke jab tootne ki awaaz na ho
khwaashishen ho par khwaab na ho

ek aisi tapish mein le gayi tumhaari baatein
baagh mein hum aur koi gulaab na ho

Bhai bahut naazuk bahut umdaa aur kaafi dil se likhi gayi rachnaa hai.....nacheez ki daad qubool farmaiyegaa aur yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYeGaa

aapne dastak kyaa dii, bazm raushan ho gayee aur ek alag hi khushboo se surkhroo huii hai....

mujhe aapka saath mil gayaa isse badee daulat aur koii nahi mujh gareeb ke liye....

jis muhabbat aur jis khuloos se aapne mujhe aur meri ghazlon ko nawaazaa hai main karzdaar ho gayaa hoon aapka.... Allah pak ye inaayat barkaraar rakhe.... aapka saath aur pyaar yunhi miltaa rahe......

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Shaad

Bahut Khoobsurat likha hay.

Zindagi tufaanon ka sailaab hay jaise
Duubte ko tinke ka sahara hay jaise

Saal naya kab puraana ho jaye
Aane wala kal har sawaal ka jawaab hay jaise.

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Aa raha ye khayaal hai jaise,
tum se milnaa muhaal hai jaise.

aaj dekha to maine paaya hai,
har khushi bhii malaal hai jaise.

ye zamaana judaaiyon waala,
ek pal ek saal hai jaise.

tujhko har waqt sochte rahnaa,
mere dil kaa kamaal hai jaise.

terii yaaden udaas gulshan me.n,
koii phoolo.n ki Daal hai jaise.

kyuu.n mujhe chain ab nahii paDtaa,
paagalon saa ye haal hai jaise.

main guzartaa huaa zamaanaa hoon,
tuu nayaa ek saal hai jaise.....


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