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~aansoo~ - 20th November 2016, 01:15 AM



khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...


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20th November 2016, 12:29 PM

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khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...


Kya baat hai shaad sahab
Kya rawaa ghazal likha hai aapne

Waqayee tehseen ke qabil hai ye ghazal
Maqte ne jaan nikaal diya

Bohat umda la-jawaab
Dua ke saath ijaazat


Kya ishaara karey ye hawaaiye
Gaur se sun zara tu sadaaiye

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21st November 2016, 03:37 PM

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo


Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!

Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....

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khushk aankhon me kho gaye aansoo
ek apne naa ho sake aansoo

jab chalee baat bewafaai kii
ham ne chupke se pee liye aansoo

aadmii kii yahii tamanna hai
haale dil bhii kabhii kahe aansoo

meraa hansnaa to usne dekhaa hai
is dafaa us ko bhii dikhe aansoo

mere qaatil ki ye tamanna hai
phool bankar girenN mere aansoo

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo

ye mere dil kii beimaanii haii
ab bhi aate hain yaad me aansoo

Shaad aise na yaad kar us ko
chal paDenge ruke ruke aansoo....

Shaad...
Khoob ehsaas hue hai mere bhai mukhtasar si baat ko itni gehraayi mein bayaan kiya hai ki bas kya kahein.......yunhi bazm mein humhe nayaab nagme dete rahiye



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Kya baat hai shaad sahab
Kya rawaa ghazal likha hai aapne

Waqayee tehseen ke qabil hai ye ghazal
Maqte ne jaan nikaal diya

Bohat umda la-jawaab
Dua ke saath ijaazat

aapki inaayaton aur muhabbaton ke liye tahe dil se mashkoor hoon aapka janaab Mujahid Ali saahab......

Tashreef laate rahiyegaa

Shukriyaa

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behad shukriyaa janaab......... arse baad aapka khat dekhaa behad sukoon o masarrat ka sabab huaa hai....... tashreef laate rahiyegaa

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Kya baat hai janaab..100 daad pesh hain is ek sher par....
Waah!!!!!

Matla behad asar daar to maqta seedhe dil ko chhoota hua....kamaal ashaar huye hain sabhi manikhej aur purasar..
Hamari daad ko bhi jagah dijiyega apni bazm me.....likhte rahiye aur bhi behtar..
.....bada intzaar karaya mahfil ko is baar par chaliye ghazal aisi pesh ki hai ki mafi di ja sakti hai....

Khush rahein..

Madhu..


bahut bahut shukrguzaar hoon aapki is darjaa muhabbat, khuloos aur pazeeraai ke liye mohtarmaa...

aap jaise aala shoraa ki nazar gar khaaksaar ko naseeb ho jaae to kalaam me sone chaandi ke wark chaDh jaate hain.....

dil ki garaaiyon se mashkoor o mamnoon hooon aapkaa... aamad banae rakhiyegaa


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Bohot khoob shaad bhai.....ye lehza bhi bahot khoob raha...
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21st December 2016, 11:28 AM

Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
Khat me bheje hain kuch mere aansoo




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Shaad bhai....hamesha se aap khoob hi likhte ho, so kya tareef karu aapki shayri ki, haa yeh baat alag hai ki kuch ehsaas aise hote hai jo seedhe dil par asar karte hai, lagta hai ki yeh mere dil ki baat hi kahi hai....aisa hi ek ehsaas...!!

jo agar paDh sako to paDh lenaa
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tahe dil se aapka shukr guzaar hoon Sunita dee.... aapne jo alfaazon ki gahraai me chupe hue ehsaason ko pakad liyaa hai, aur pasand kiyaa hai....

aage bhi aapke pyaar aur duaaon ka talabgaar rahungaa......... aati rahiyegaa

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Samandar sa baną dete hain Ansoon
Na gava inhein Anmol hain Ansoon

Kuch Shaakh tufanon mein hilte hain jab
Baraste hain fir kuch Ansoon

Aaya jo toofan chala bhi jayega
Ek Indradhanush bhi layainge ye Ansoon

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Na gava inhein Anmol hain Ansoon

Kuch Shaakh tufanon mein hilte hain jab
Baraste hain fir kuch Ansoon

Aaya jo toofan chala bhi jayega
Ek Indradhanush bhi layainge ye Ansoon

Beautiful poetry Shaad.Remember that Tears are really precious.Kčep Smiling

kyaa baat hai Sukanya dee... aapne bahot hi khoobsurat kalaam ke andaaz me jawaab diyaa hai, mujhe aapke ehsaas behad pasand aaye.... aur bahut shukriyaa aapka jo aapne is kalaam ko pasand kiyaa hai...

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