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13th April 2003, 01:47 PM
maut pe bhi humko yakin hain,
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13th April 2003, 02:00 PM
You are leaving a very good first impression on this site!
 Nice sher, well written and nicely worded, very casual yet catchy. Good work! I hope to read more from you Sameer  |
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13th April 2003, 07:31 PM
wah wah sameer ji,
likhte rahiya aap me talent zaroor hai. zeba |
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13th April 2003, 07:33 PM
nice written sameer
Anjane Mein Mujko Woh Shayar Bana Gaya |
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dekhna hai wo myjhpar meharban kitna hai, asliyat kha tah hai aur guman kitna hai. kya pnah deti hai mujhko aur ye zameen mujhko, aur abhi mere sar par asman kitna hai!! |
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