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har jagah hai numaaiish - 17th October 2014, 11:36 AM

har jagah hai numaaiish to kya kiijiye
aap bhii kuchh tamaashaa kiyaa kiijiye

pyaas hoTHoN se kya aur hinaa hi kya
laal may bhii lahuu bhii piyaa kiijiye

ashk kii de laDii bose ruKHsaar per
zaKHm dhaagoN se unke siyaa kiijiye

humne chehraa jo dekhaa pareshaan kyuN
aap pardaa giira kar hayaa kiijiye

Gum jo dete rahe pyaar bhii diijiye
kuchh duaa kiijiye kuchh dayaa kiijiye

haal apnaa muhabbat meN parvaanoN saa
lutf jalne meN aise liyaa kiijiye

hai fareb aur kyaa zaat insaaniyat
jazb-e-iimaan* to be-riyaa** kiijiye

(*commitment of belief, conviction; **without malice, sincere)

ishq jazbaat aur uskii fariyaad aur
aap us ke liye kyaa se kyaa kiijiye

jii ke marne ko kehte agar zindagii
to Safiir aap mar mar jiyaa kiijiye


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हर जगह है नुमाईश तो क्या कीजिए
आप भी कुछ तमाशा किया कीजिए

प्यास होठों से क्या और हिना ही क्या
लाल मय भी लहू भी पिया कीजिए

अश्क़ की दे लड़ी बोसे रुख़्सार पर
ज़ख़्म धागों से उनके सिया कीजिए

हमने चेहरा जो देखा परेशान क्यूं
आप पर्दा गीरा कर हया कीजिए

ग़म जो देते रहे प्यार भी दीजिये
कुछ दुआ कीजिए कुछ दया कीजिए

हाल अपना मुहब्बत में परवानों सा
लुत्फ़ जलने में ऐसे लिया कीजिए

है फ़रेब और क्या ज़ात इंसानियत
जज़्ब-ए-ईमान तो बे-रिया कीजिए

इश्क़ जज़्बात और उसकी फ़रियाद और
आप उस के लिए क्या से क्या कीजिए

जी के मरने को कहते अगर ज़िंदगी
तो सफ़ीर आप मर मर जिया कीजिए

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अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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17th October 2014, 02:23 PM

Aadeil bhai....bahut umda kahi hai aapne, sabhi sher bahut khoobsurti se aapne pesh kiye hai...aik sher jo hame behad khaas lga, wo yeh hai:

Gum jo dete rahe pyaar bhii diijiye
kuchh duaa kiijiye kuchh dayaa kiijiye




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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...


   
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17th October 2014, 03:22 PM

bhai kyaa ho tum...... insaan ho ya sher chaapne ki machine....

aur sher bhi aise ke bas qatl......

pyaas hoTHoN se kya aur hinaa hi kya
laal may bhii lahuu bhii piyaa kiijiye

is sher ne meraa dil jeet iyaa yaar.... likhte rahiye.... khoob khush rahiye... aate rahiye

Shaad...


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....superb aadeil ji...........


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Sunita di, Shoaibbhai & Madhuji..
aap logoN kaa bahot bahot shukriya... daad ke liye....



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ishq jazbaat aur uskii fariyaad aur
aap us ke liye kyaa se kyaa kiijiye


wahh! waah! Adil bhai..

Masha Allah.... kia kehne janab..
bohat umdaH ghazal tarteeb dii hai...
waqai aap yeh munfarid kaawish dherooN daad ki mustahiq hai.
to hamari taraf se bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...

Aise hi humeN mehzooz karte rahiye,

Regards,


*hSn* : parStaar

tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Aadil Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Janab badi hi baa kamaal aur be misaal kalaam bazm ko ataa kii hai ... behad umdaa aur laa jawaab sher huye haiN sabhi ...

Bade hi gehre khayaaloN kii laa jawaab takmil kii hai aapne ...
Is dilkash kalaam par meri hazaaroN hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... aise khoobsurat kalaamoN se nawaazte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...



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Wwwaaahhhh !!!! Zabardast ghazal kahi Aadeil sahab !! Lutf zauq masti fiqr soch naseehat .... kya kya naheen mila ek hi ghazal mein !!! Dheron daad aur beshumaar mubaarakbaad aap ko !!

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har jagah hai numaaiish to kya kiijiye
aap bhii kuchh tamaashaa kiyaa kiijiye

Bahut khub....daad kabool kijiye..
Aur yunhi magil ko rosan rakhiye



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har jagah hai numaaiish to kya kiijiye
aap bhii kuchh tamaashaa kiyaa kiijiye

Bahut khub....daad kabool kijiye..
Aur yunhi magil ko rosan rakhiye
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Wwwaaahhhh !!!! Zabardast ghazal kahi Aadeil sahab !! Lutf zauq masti fiqr soch naseehat .... kya kya naheen mila ek hi ghazal mein !!! Dheron daad aur beshumaar mubaarakbaad aap ko !!

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Aadil Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Janab badi hi baa kamaal aur be misaal kalaam bazm ko ataa kii hai ... behad umdaa aur laa jawaab sher huye haiN sabhi ...

Bade hi gehre khayaaloN kii laa jawaab takmil kii hai aapne ...
Is dilkash kalaam par meri hazaaroN hazaaroN dili daad kabul kijiye...

Likhte rahiye ... aise khoobsurat kalaamoN se nawaazte rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez ...

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ishq jazbaat aur uskii fariyaad aur
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wahh! waah! Adil bhai..

Masha Allah.... kia kehne janab..
bohat umdaH ghazal tarteeb dii hai...
waqai aap yeh munfarid kaawish dherooN daad ki mustahiq hai.
to hamari taraf se bohat sii daad qabool kejiye...

Aise hi humeN mehzooz karte rahiye,

Regards,
aap sabhii kaa teh-e-dil shukriyaa......



ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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