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main zuban bhi hota.... - 25th October 2005, 07:32 PM
..dosri ghazal yahan post kar raha hoon....zara gerhrin baatein hai....sher ke mani utne khule hue nahin..kuch waqt lagata hai baat ko samjhane mein .....umeed karein ki aap meinse koi utna gahara jana chahe......raishumari zaroor kare ...agar koi samjhaish bhi ho.. har salah ka tah-e-dil se istakbaal hai

zara sabra rakhte kissa dastan bhi hota
ye muhabbat hai, numayan bhi hota

mujhe tanhayee se koi lazzat nahin
magar koi humzuban bhi hota

ye tagaful, ye bedili na hoti
tu khana-e-dil mein mahman bhi hota

ye firak hai bikhara hoon zarra zarra
tera saath hota zarra asman bhi hota

yun hi rona tha ,daman bhigona tha
shayar na hota insan bhi hota

tum padhate aur mera kalam hota
aankhein bhi hota,main zuban bhi hota

jo dil jalata nahin "amaan"
to zahan farozan bhi hota......

lafzon ke mani...----numayan=zahir ,tagaful=ignorance,firak=judai,zarra=dhool ka kan,farozan=roshan

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25th October 2005, 10:37 PM
Amman Ji,

mujhe tanhayee se koi lazzat nahin
magar koi humzuban bhi hota

ye tagaful, ye bedili na hoti
tu khana-e-dil mein mahman bhi hota

Wah! Bahot acchey!!

All the best!

Rajan!!!

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hi - 26th October 2005, 05:36 PM
Amaan ji....wah kya likha hai apne!
bahot hi khubsurat andaaz!
daad kubul kijiye!

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shukriya...shukriya - 3rd November 2005, 04:41 PM
janab rajan....aapne jis purzor andaz mein ghazal ki tareef ki hi us andaz ne humein aapka mured bana diya hai,,,shukriya bhaijaan..shukriya....umeed hai aage bhi aap apna kimati waqt mujh na samajh par zaya kareinge......shukriya

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Re: main zuban bhi hota.... - 4th November 2005, 04:30 AM
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..dosri ghazal yahan post kar raha hoon....zara gerhrin baatein hai....sher ke mani utne khule hue nahin..kuch waqt lagata hai baat ko samjhane mein .....umeed karein ki aap meinse koi utna gahara jana chahe......raishumari zaroor kare ...agar koi samjhaish bhi ho.. har salah ka tah-e-dil se istakbaal hai

zara sabra rakhte kissa dastan bhi hota
ye muhabbat hai, numayan bhi hota

mujhe tanhayee se koi lazzat nahin
magar koi humzuban bhi hota

ye tagaful, ye bedili na hoti
tu khana-e-dil mein mahman bhi hota

ye firak hai bikhara hoon zarra zarra
tera saath hota zarra asman bhi hota

yun hi rona tha ,daman bhigona tha
shayar na hota insan bhi hota

tum padhate aur mera kalam hota
aankhein bhi hota,main zuban bhi hota

jo dil jalata nahin "amaan"
to zahan farozan bhi hota......

lafzon ke mani...----numayan=zahir ,tagaful=ignorance,firak=judai,zarra=dhool ka kan,farozan=roshan

muhabbat-amaan
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dear amaan.....bahaut accha likkha hai aapne...
is ghazal ke saare sher lajawaab hain...
makta bhi bada sahi hai.....
is ghazal mein sabhi kuch bahaut khoob hai....
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farahana... - 4th November 2005, 05:49 PM
farahana...........
yad hai humari pahli mulakat utni khusnuma nahin thi..maine tumhe nazm ko ghazal kahne ki liye kaha tha......magar ab lagata hai tum shayri ki kafi aashan ho gayi ho....ab apne roshan khayal apne tak hi mat rakhna .unhe ..sobko batate rahna....shukriya ke tumhe ye ghazal aur ...uska matka asand aaya...shukria..

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6th November 2005, 09:53 AM
jaanke khushi hui ke aapne hame is kabil samjha......apna khyaal rakhiyega.

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