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Aint you getting the unexpected....sweety...

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Aint you getting the unexpected....sweety...

ziyada pani puri kha liya wo kafi nahi hai ab HAJMOLA bhi chahiye
Wht u said was hard to digest, I need hajmola for tht jahan tak pani puri ki baat hai hum indians ka digestive system bht strong hai tumhe khada nigal jaen aur dakaar(burp) bhi na lein tum apni nazuk atdi (intestine) ki khair manao jo ek pani puri nhi jhel sakti
   
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hahaha.... Why feeling proud with the faltoo digestive system.

I have seen in east many ppl eat, snakes, frogs, crocs, and som says any moving thing they will eat.

Aur mujhe pata nahi tha ke tum 'AAGOOORI' HO ....
   
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hahaha.... Why feeling proud with the faltoo digestive system.

I have seen in east many ppl eat, snakes, frogs, crocs, and som says any moving thing they will eat.

Aur mujhe pata nahi tha ke tum 'AAGOOORI' HO ....
Aur kya kahoge, tumhari nazuk tabiyat halke se spice ka bhoj bardasht nhi kar sakti so u definately dnt have much to feel proud abt ur digestive system .......& sweetie get ur facts correct mere speculation cud harm ur knowledge ..........maine tumhe nigalne ki baat ki thi.....hey r u comparing urself to snakes, frogs, crocs & any moving thing thnx for enlightening me abt ur type.
   
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..........maine tumhe nigalne ki baat ki thi......
You are a MAN EATER.....

You can take it personally literally or what ever way u can.... hahaha

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Hum tumhare peeche hai.N ke tum hamare,
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Bakhtiyaar Jii,,

Aap shayri bhi karte ho,
Mujhe to yakeen hi ni ho raha .....

Khair.... Aap ki yeh pehli koshish boht hi achi rahi,,
Agar aap younhi likhte rehtay to yakenan boht
naam banaatay....

Mujhe intezaar rahay ga k aap kuch aur bhi pesh
karien mehfil mein....

Take care n Regardz,
HSN


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Bakhtiyaar Jii,,

Aap shayri bhi karte ho,
Mujhe to yakeen hi ni ho raha .....

Khair.... Aap ki yeh pehli koshish boht hi achi rahi,,
Agar aap younhi likhte rehtay to yakenan boht
naam banaatay....

Mujhe intezaar rahay ga k aap kuch aur bhi pesh
karien mehfil mein....

Take care n Regardz,
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Leh...... Shayri bhi karte hooo....... Dude i do many more things...

Aur naam baanaatay....
Naam hai mera... Jo ke bahut hi badnaam hai...

Cuz few ppl think it that way....
   
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Bakhtiyaar Bhai salam walekuM........

Kya baat hai Bhai, mujhe sach mein yakiN nahi ho raha hai ke yeh ashaar aapke hai... Sach hai Dil ka mousam sahiN ho aur shayari bhi kamal ki kar lete hai log... Aur aapke lafzoN ne khud bayan kar diya ke aap mein bhi ek achcha shayar hai................

Tarif karun utni kam lagengii coz yeh ashaar hi aise hai.... But Mera Bhai itna darefull hai to izhar mein darta hai kya....... Hmm, may be... Isliye aise ashar nikale hai dil se aapke.... Daad yeh bhi ahsaar samjh liye huM.... bahut khoob..

But mere type ke nahi Dil ki baat dil mein nahi rakhata kwahish....... Zuban se na keh sake wo jazbaat ka kya fayda... Dude.... yeh apun ki soch hai...

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Leh...... Shayri bhi karte hooo....... Dude i do many more things...

Aur naam baanaatay....
Naam hai mera... Jo ke bahut hi badnaam hai...

Cuz few ppl think it that way....
Bhai aapki yeh guftagoo bhi ajeeb lagi, kisne keh diya aapko ke aapka naam badnaam hai, mujhe to nahi lagata kahan likha hai maine to nahi dekha aapka naam badnaam hai... Aap in baatoN mein mat uljhiye, janab kisika naam banana aur badnaam karwana khud apne haath hota hai, aur aapko agar lagata hai aapka naam badnaam hia to... phir bhens ke aage bin bajane se mujhe kya lena.......



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Bakhtiyaar Bhai salam walekuM........

Kya baat hai Bhai, mujhe sach mein yakiN nahi ho raha hai ke yeh ashaar aapke hai... Sach hai Dil ka mousam sahiN ho aur shayari bhi kamal ki kar lete hai log... Aur aapke lafzoN ne khud bayan kar diya ke aap mein bhi ek achcha shayar hai................

Tarif karun utni kam lagengii coz yeh ashaar hi aise hai.... But Mera Bhai itna darefull hai to izhar mein darta hai kya....... Hmm, may be... Isliye aise ashar nikale hai dil se aapke.... Daad yeh bhi ahsaar samjh liye huM.... bahut khoob..

But mere type ke Dil ki baat dil mein nahi rakhata kwahish....... Zuban se na keh sake wo jazbaat ka kya fayda... Dude.... yeh apun ki soch hai...



Bhai aapki yeh guftagoo bhi ajeeb lagi, kisne keh diya aapko ke aapka naam badnaam hai, mujhe to nahi lagata kahan likha hai maine to nahi dekha aapka naam badnaam hai... Aap in baatoN mein mat uljhiye, janab kisika naam banana aur badnaam karwana khud apne haath hota hai, aur aapko agar lagata hai aapka naam badnaam hia to... phir bhens ke aage bin bajane se mujhe kya lena.......
Tum gaye nahi abhi tak................

ye lambe lambe ghaseedey likhna kab chhodo gey tum.....

Khair in a nut shell.... pata nahi kis ka hai... read it

Aansoon ko aankhon ki dehleez par laya na karo
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Tum gaye nahi abhi tak................

ye lambe lambe ghaseedey likhna kab chhodo gey tum.....

Khair in a nut shell.... pata nahi kis ka hai... read it

Aansoon ko aankhon ki dehleez par laya na karo
Apne dil ki haalat kisi ko bataaya na karo
Log muth-thi bhar namak liye ghooma karte hain
Apne Zakham kisi ko dikhaaya na karo
HaaN Bhai don't worry jaa raha huN,,, aur phir shayad jald laut ker nahi aauNga... Shayad kabhi nahi.....

Phir tumhe yeh lambe lambe ghaseedey padne ka tension nahi aayenga..

Aapke is sher ka matlab to main samajh gaya huN, aur uske liye mera yeh reply hai...

Hum mohobbat dil se karte hai na ki chupane ke dar se
Hum to Ibaadat dil se karte hai na ki zamane ke dar se
Itni kamzor nahi humari mohobbat ho ya ibaadat dost
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...................................Lambe lambe ghaseedey to nahi likhunga per teri hi style use karta huN..........


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Baqs jii..........aapki yeh gazal sach mein bahut hi umda bani hai, sabhi sher bahut hi acche haiN, par aap kyuN apni hi poetry ke saath yoon majaak kar rahe ho....aapne aur naaz ne to es gazal thread ko chatting thread bana diya hai....bahut dukh hota hai jab koi khoobsurat poetry aisi baato.n ke neeche dab jati hai....pls aisi baato.n ka khayal rakha kijiye ki aapki ya kisi aur member ki poetry es tarah baato.n ke jaal mein fans kar na reh jaye....

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Baqs jii..........aapki yeh gazal sach mein bahut hi umda bani hai, sabhi sher bahut hi acche haiN, par aap kyuN apni hi poetry ke saath yoon majaak kar rahe ho....aapne aur naaz ne to es gazal thread ko chatting thread bana diya hai....bahut dukh hota hai jab koi khoobsurat poetry aisi baato.n ke neeche dab jati hai....pls aisi baato.n ka khayal rakha kijiye ki aapki ya kisi aur member ki poetry es tarah baato.n ke jaal mein fans kar na reh jaye....

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