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मक़बरा अपना ही बनवाता रहा - 2 - 11th September 2014, 11:34 AM

Dosto..
pesh hai aap sab ki nazr ye ghazal..

haalanki ye poori nahi ho payi ||
Kuchh din ke baad fir se iss par lautenge...

नासमझ खुद को ही समझाता रहा,
डायरी में दर्द दफ़नाता रहा ||

Naasamajh khud ko hi samjhata raha,
Dayari me.N dard dafnata raha ||

मज़हबी रंगों में बंटता देख कर..
वो गुलालों से भी कतराता रहा ||

Mazhabi rango me.N bantata dekh kar,
Wo gulalon se bhi qatrata raha ||

था सियासी आदतों का ही असर,
वो कुँए पर नल जो लगवाता रहा ||

tha Siyasi aadato kaa hi asar,
Wo kuen(well) par nal jo lagwata rata ||

उल्लुओं का रंग इतना चढ़ गया,
वो उजालों से ही घबराता रहा ||

Ulluon ka rang itna chadh gaya,
Wo ujalon se hi ghabrata raha ||

इक चुनावी वायदा सच मान कर,
वो भी अपनी जेब सिलवाता रहा ||

Ik chunavi vayada sach maan kar,
Wo bhi apni Jabe silwata raha ||

नींव की कच्ची चिनाई भूल कर,
वो मकां पर रंग करवाता रहा ||

Neenv ki kachchi chinai bhool kar,
Wo Makaa.N par rang karwata raha||

दीमकों की सनअतों से बेख़बर,
मक़बरा अपना ही बनवाता रहा ||

Deemako.N ki Sanaton se bekhabar,
Maqbaraa apna hi banwata raha
   
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11th September 2014, 11:48 AM

Wah wah. .masha allah bohat khoob Nakul ji..

Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain

Dil se dheron daad qubool kijiye




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11th September 2014, 12:06 PM

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11th September 2014, 02:16 PM

Deemako.N ki Sanaton se bekhabar,
Maqbaraa apna hi banwata raha


Wahhhh! waahh! Nakul jee,

Bohat hi taaza se lagay yeH khayaal.. kuch alag... kuch khaas...
Aap apni socch ko jiss taraH alfazoN ka roop dete haiN,
aur unhe safhay per utaartay haiN, yeH fun aap ke paas ba-kamaal hai...

Bas dil se wahh wahh hi nikal rahi hai,

Likhte rahiye,
Aate rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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11th September 2014, 05:18 PM

Shukriya Nazeen Ji
Shukriya Hassan Ji ||

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10th October 2014, 09:21 PM

NakulG, bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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10th October 2014, 11:28 PM

Nakul ji...........bahut khoobsurat ehsaas hai............!


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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11th October 2014, 11:45 AM

kya baat hai nakul jee....very nice expression...reps.added



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11th October 2014, 07:59 PM

Bahut hi khoob likha hai nakul ji.............



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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