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Post mere geet - 27th December 2007, 06:16 PM
kuj soch soch k likhe c.kuj apne aap e aa gye.
kuj mainu bde pasand ne,kuj thodde mann nu bhaa gye.
kuj meri hasti beyaan karn ,kuj thodde utte aa gye.
kyia nu bda nindia loka ne,kyi wah wah bdi kra gye.
jis lyi likhe c,bas ose dil nu haale tak shoohiya,unj bull bde hi ga gye.
kyia da mada jeha afsos v reha ,jo maitho pehla hora de jehan vich aa gye.
"deep" shukarguzar hai ehna geetaan da,eh mere chaa hnda gye,
te kyi mera iklape da waqt langa gye..............
   
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27th December 2007, 06:26 PM
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kuj soch soch k likhe c.kuj apne aap e aa gye.
kuj mainu bde pasand ne,kuj thodde mann nu bhaa gye.
kuj meri hasti beyaan karn ,kuj thodde utte aa gye.
kyia nu bda nindia loka ne,kyi wah wah bdi kra gye.
jis lyi likhe c,bas ose dil nu haale tak shoohiya,unj bull bde hi ga gye.
kyia da mada jeha afsos v reha ,jo maitho pehla hora de jehan vich aa gye.
"deep" shukarguzar hai ehna geetaan da,eh mere chaa hnda gye,
te kyi mera iklape da waqt langa gye..............

hello sat sir akal je
tuhadi eh nazajam padhi ta bhot sohni laggi es tara hi likhde rehna
khush rehna
take care
umid hai uthadiya nazam es tara hi mildiya rehn ghya padhn le


bye

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21st April 2008, 12:08 AM
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hello sat sir akal je
tuhadi eh nazajam padhi ta bhot sohni laggi es tara hi likhde rehna
khush rehna
take care
umid hai uthadiya nazam es tara hi mildiya rehn ghya padhn le


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Deep Ji.... - 21st April 2008, 11:21 AM
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kuj meri hasti beyaan karn ,kuj thodde utte aa gye...............
Respected Deep ji....

Aah line saari nazam chon gehra parbhav chhaddan wali hai....sookham sochan waaleyaan de dilan te....bahut khoob!!

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21st April 2008, 06:36 PM
shukriya tmnaa ji..padn lyi ..eh nazam ta main v bhul gya c hun ,,tusi pta nai kitho kadd liyaye..thnax again ji..thank u very much
   
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21st April 2008, 10:26 PM
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kuj soch soch k likhe c.kuj apne aap e aa gye.
kuj mainu bde pasand ne,kuj thodde mann nu bhaa gye.
kuj meri hasti beyaan karn ,kuj thodde utte aa gye.
kyia nu bda nindia loka ne,kyi wah wah bdi kra gye.
jis lyi likhe c,bas ose dil nu haale tak shoohiya,unj bull bde hi ga gye.
kyia da mada jeha afsos v reha ,jo maitho pehla hora de jehan vich aa gye.
"deep" shukarguzar hai ehna geetaan da,eh mere chaa hnda gye,
te kyi mera iklape da waqt langa gye..............


Bahut hi vadhiya likhiya hai deep ji, really very goood poem



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22nd April 2008, 12:20 AM
thanx ji heer ji te anathak ji...anathak ji tusi shyd nve ho..main tuhanu pehlaa nai vekhia kde is mehfil vich..thnx 4 reading me..
   
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22nd April 2008, 01:05 AM
deep ji...

ki kavaan main...inni umda likhya aah tussi...sade kaul lafz ni tuvadi tareef karan layi. bahut hi creative likhya aah tussi. tuvadi kalam che bahut dam aah. eidha hi likde raho.

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22nd April 2008, 09:48 PM
thanx musafir ji...mehrbaani bahut bahut....
   
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26th April 2008, 02:48 PM
Deep ji pehlaaN te tuhaadey koloN es gustaakhi di maafi chaahaangaa ki enni khoobsoorat rachnaa nu pehli waar ajj padhiyaa. Es laee reply wi nahi keetaa. Sach much ik shayar de rooh di gall byaan Keeti hai tusi. har shabd bemisaal. Sach much tuhaanu jinnaa padho onnaa hi ghatt lagdaa hai. Can i ask u, what do u do apart from writing? Tusi renhdey kithey ho. Pataa nhi kyon mainu inj lagdaa hai ki jis tarah tusi koi bahut hi established poet oN. Any way keep up the good work.

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26th April 2008, 03:39 PM
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kuj soch soch k likhe c.kuj apne aap e aa gye.
kuj mainu bde pasand ne,kuj thodde mann nu bhaa gye.
kuj meri hasti beyaan karn ,kuj thodde utte aa gye.
kyia nu bda nindia loka ne,kyi wah wah bdi kra gye.
jis lyi likhe c,bas ose dil nu haale tak shoohiya,unj bull bde hi ga gye.
kyia da mada jeha afsos v reha ,jo maitho pehla hora de jehan vich aa gye.
"deep" shukarguzar hai ehna geetaan da,eh mere chaa hnda gye,
te kyi mera iklape da waqt langa gye..............
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26th April 2008, 07:07 PM
mehrabaani tilkji and dr. saahab...nale mainu plzzz shiv kumar batalvi nal compare na karia kro.....oh bahut ucchi hasti ne...mera ik v akhar ohna de pair de braabar nai...even k main koi shaayer v nai...nale hanji tilkji,main hune engg. complete kiti a, i m on job hunting now...is time chandigarh haan,waise bathinde to haan...
   
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can u tell me what's ur branch of engineering and what kind of job profile u r looking for? U can send ur CV to me at trsuman@gmail.com. May i can be of some help to u.

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30th April 2008, 09:32 AM
Deep ji,

Boht hi vadiya likhya ae tussi.. Ik ik akhar dil nu cheer gya!

Inj hi likhde raho!

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hai deep i am sandeep tusi ta kmaal da likde ho mainu ve likne da shaunk a je tuhadi help ho jave ta mehrbani hovegi thanks

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Rehke dil vich hi dil nu dukhaunde ne lok
Te fir reh-reh ke yaad aaunde ne lok
Koi yaad rakhda a te koi bhul janda a
Badi mushkil naal piyar nibhaunde ne lok
gurdeep asi uhna cho nahi jihre bhul jaiaye
Asi uhna cho ha jihre piyar vich jaan lutaonde ne lok
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Love for gurdeep - 30th April 2008, 10:53 PM
Jaroori nahi ke piyar nu manzil mile
Kade-kade raste vich hi vishad jande ne lok
Rehke dil vich hi dil nu dukhaunde ne lok
Te fir reh-reh ke yaad aaunde ne lok
Koi yaad rakhda a te koi bhul janda a
Badi mushkil naal piyar nibhaunde ne lok
gurdeep asi uhna cho nahi jihre bhul jaiaye
Asi uhna cho ha jihre piyar vich jaan lutaonde ne lok
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plz deep ji dasna meri lekhni vich v thoda dum hai ke nahi thanks

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Love For Gurdeep - 1st May 2008, 02:25 PM
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Badi mushkil naal piyar nibhaunde ne lok
gurdeep asi uhna cho nahi jihre bhul jaiaye
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Love gurdeep - 2nd May 2008, 01:33 PM
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26th June 2008, 06:40 PM
Ki likhan Deep ji

Shabad hi nahin hann, likhan layi.

Kujh bvi likha taan ghat hovega.


Bahut bahut WAdhia.

Pata nahin kithe si tusi. Main tuhanu pehlan kyon nahin read keeta.


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