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ab agar aa'o, to jaane ke liye mat aanaa - 1st December 2015, 01:11 AM


ab agar aa'o, to jaane ke liye mat aanaa

ab agar aa'o to jaane ke liye mat aanaa
sirf eHsaan jataane ke liye mat aanaa

maiN ne palkoN pe tamanna'eN sajaa rakkhi haiN
dil meN ummeed ki sau shamm'eN jalaa rakkhi haiN
yeh HasiiN shamm'eN bujhaane ke liye mat aanaa

pyaar ki aag meN zanjeereN pighal sakti haiN
chaahne waaloN ki taqdeereN badal sakti haiN
tum ho bebas, yeh bataane ke liye mat aanaa

ab tum aanaa, jo tumhe mujh se moHabbat hai ko'ii
mujh se milne ki agar tum ko bhi chaahat hai ko'ii
tum ko'ii rasm nibhaane ke liye mat aanaa!

ab agar aa'o, to jaane ke liye mat aanaa


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A mistake, indeed! - 1st December 2015, 03:22 AM

Dosto,

Aaj mujh se Ik Ghalati sarzad ho gayii!

MaiN ne Javed Akhtar ki Ik Nazm , bhulay se, Jon Elia ke thread meN chaspaan kar dee.
Aur sirf ye hi nahiiN, Nazm post Karen ke b'aad pataa chalaa ki bilkul yehii nazm Sunita ji ne bhi yahaaN chaspaan kee hu'ii hai!

Ab, mujhe 'Ilm nahiiN kih maiN apni post kis taraH "delete" kar duuN.

Sunita ji se bhi ma'azarat-Khwaab huuN!

~B.

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1st December 2015, 10:59 AM

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Dosto,

Aaj mujh se Ik Ghalati sarzad ho gayii!

MaiN ne Javed Akhtar ki Ik Nazm , bhulay se, Jon Elia ke thread meN chaspaan kar dee.
Aur sirf ye hi nahiiN, Nazm post Karen ke b'aad pataa chalaa ki bilkul yehii nazm Sunita ji ne bhi yahaaN chaspaan kee hu'ii hai!

Ab, mujhe 'Ilm nahiiN kih maiN apni post kis taraH "delete" kar duuN.

Sunita ji se bhi ma'azarat-Khwaab huuN!

~B.

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27th October 2016, 12:44 PM

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ये गम क्या दिल की आदत है??
जॉन एलिया साबेह की एक अनकही ग़ज़ल, एक अलग ही अंदाज़ में..

जॉन साहेब के बोलने का अंदाज़ और ग़ज़ल की गहरायी दोनों बहुत उम्दा होते थे, वो जिस अंदाज़ में सुनने वालों से बात करते और ग़ज़ल के बीच में और शायरों से बोलते ये सिर्फ जॉन एलिया साहेब ही कर सकते है।।


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