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Vese tan har ek bande nu aapna pind-shear malo-mali vadiya he lagde hunde...Te use shonk ch Sunam te 4 lina....

Peeran-Fakeeraan de eh dharti hai mitra....
Vich Malwe Sunam di shaan vakhri hai mitra....

London tak ajj vi ehde goonj hai mitra......
"Udham Singh" sher di yaad Sunam hai mitra....

Na pind, na bahuta shear eh mitra....
Sadgi,anakh di pechyan Sunam hai mitra...

Unjh tan sanu sari kaynat nal mahobat hai mitra...
Par Parshant de dil vich Sunam di khas than hai mitra.

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11th November 2014, 01:51 PM

Prashant bhai tuhadi eh koshish tareef di haqdaar hai...ise tarah likhde raho te abaad raho...



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11th November 2014, 04:04 PM

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12th November 2014, 10:38 AM

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Vese tan har ek bande nu aapna pind-shear malo-mali vadiya he lagde hunde...Te use shonk ch Sunam te 4 lina....

Peeran-Fakeeraan de eh dharti hai mitra....
Vich Malwe Sunam di shaan vakhri hai mitra....

London tak ajj vi ehde goonj hai mitra......
"Udham Singh" sher di yaad Sunam hai mitra....

Na pind, na bahuta shear eh mitra....
Sadgi,anakh di pechyan Sunam hai mitra...

Unjh tan sanu sari kaynat nal mahobat hai mitra...
Par Parshant de dil vich Sunam di khas than hai mitra.

Shukriya.
Parshant ji...bahut pyara likhiyaa hai tusi apne Sunam bare...apna pind kina pyara lagda, maiN bhi sehmat haa tuhade ehsaas naal...menu te apne pekiya pind da ghar, bootey, galiya sab kuch aina pyara lagda hai...ki jad maiN othey jaa ke vapis aaundi haa taa ona nu vekh ke dil ronda hai...pta nahi kida di kheech hai eh............!!


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15th November 2014, 08:49 PM

Thanks Sunita ji... tusi tan mere vadi bhen di hi taranh ho... mainu nahi pata si tuhanu punjabi aaundi hai... main ajj-kal mohali hi huna han .... je rab ne chahiya tan tuhanu milunga vi jarroar.... main aapni shayri di book launch karan bare sochdan rehna han.... je tuhade kol es regarding koi knowledge hove tan dasna. aapna chota bhai samajh ke.

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15th November 2014, 09:03 PM

Prashant ji...changa lgiya sun ke ki tusi bhi Mohali hi hunde ho...tusi kithe rehnde ho Mohali...ki pta mere nazdeek hi hovo kitey...menu PM karke apna contact no. te address daso...fil haal maiN Monday tak out of city haa,,,aake tuhanu contact karaNgi.

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15th November 2014, 09:27 PM

thanks... han haje tan main vi ajj-kal kafi busy han... jis din kade weekend te aapne pind na gya... ure hoya fer tuhanu contact karke 5-10 minute milunga te koi knowledge launga thuade ton.. thanks very much
   
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20th November 2014, 06:57 AM

Prashant ji ..tuhada ehsas e sunam bahut changa lagiya .. Main sunam tan nahi gaya per itna pata hai ki uthe rice mills hai bahut saree .. Mera CA boss jis kol main training leete se sunam nu belong karda see .. Vaise main chandigarh nu belong karda haan and uthe 20 years rehaya before moving to Delhi ..

Aidan hi likhde raho te phullan di tarah khilde raho ..

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Prashant ji ..tuhada ehsas e sunam bahut changa lagiya .. Main sunam tan nahi gaya per itna pata hai ki uthe rice mills hai bahut saree .. Mera CA boss jis kol main training leete se sunam nu belong karda see .. Vaise main chandigarh nu belong karda haan and uthe 20 years rehaya before moving to Delhi ..

Aidan hi likhde raho te phullan di tarah khilde raho ..

Sanjay Sehgal


waooooo...sanjay ji tusi handigarh ton ho....kya baat hai....!


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20th November 2014, 01:58 PM

Thanks sanjay ji.... Ek bande di zindagi ch usde aas-pas de enviorment da aehm yogdan hunda hai..... eskarke ve menu lagde har ek ensan nu aapna pind, shear changa lagde.

bas maine tan aapne shear da thanks karan di kosish kiti hai.
   
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