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Dhuaan... - 13th April 2012, 02:28 PM
Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…

Thakee hui si shaam thee, thakaa hua samah…
Bujhi hui si raat hai, kohraa ghanaa ghanaa…

Dabaa dabaa sa dard ek, hai seene mein banaa…
Aankhon mein par namee nahi, ki ronaa hai manaa…

Khafaa Khafaa sa rehni ki nahi koi nahi wajaah…
Khafaa Khaffa hi rehta hoon lekin mein har jagah…

Sisak sisak ki rooh meri, maange kahin panah…
Jhijhak jhijak ke zindagi lo ho gayi fanaa…

Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…
   
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13th April 2012, 02:47 PM
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Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…

Thakee hui si shaam thee, thakaa hua samah…
Bujhi hui si raat hai, kohraa ghanaa ghanaa…

Dabaa dabaa sa dard ek, hai seene mein banaa…
Aankhon mein par namee nahi, ki ronaa hai manaa…

Khafaa Khafaa sa rehni ki nahi koi nahi wajaah…
Khafaa Khaffa hi rehta hoon lekin mein har jagah…

Sisak sisak ki rooh meri, maange kahin panah…
Jhijhak jhijak ke zindagi lo ho gayi fanaa…

Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…
aahaa swaad sa aa gaya janaab ............... kitnaa khoob hai har sher ..
aksar log door ki sochne mai lage rahte hai...
aur aapne itnaa pas ka socha hai ki bas.. bahut door tak ka lagtaa hai
bahut acha laga aapko padhnaa .... kitnaa acha sanjeedaa sa lahjaa hai... jaise bahut ghup kohra.. andheraa sannaataa ya fir roshni...



Khafaa Khafaa sa rehni ki nahi koi nahi wajaah…
Khafaa Khaffa hi rehta hoon lekin mein har jagah…

bahut hi khoob .... kitnaa muskil hai yun asaan likhnaa

Sisak sisak ki rooh meri, maange kahin panah…
Jhijhak jhijak ke zindagi lo ho gayi fanaa…
very nice

Thakee hui si shaam thee, thakaa hua samah…
Bujhi hui si raat hai, kohraa ghanaa ghanaa…

ye sabse acha lagaa ....










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13th April 2012, 04:46 PM
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Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…

Thakee hui si shaam thee, thakaa hua samah…
Bujhi hui si raat hai, kohraa ghanaa ghanaa…

Dabaa dabaa sa dard ek, hai seene mein banaa…
Aankhon mein par namee nahi, ki ronaa hai manaa…

Khafaa Khafaa sa rehni ki nahi koi nahi wajaah…
Khafaa Khaffa hi rehta hoon lekin mein har jagah…

Sisak sisak ki rooh meri, maange kahin panah…
Jhijhak jhijak ke zindagi lo ho gayi fanaa…

Lamhon mein hai khalish koi, ye jaane kya hua…
Guzar rahein hai pal yuhin, ke jaise ho dhuaan…
Zabardast!........Ehsaas Bhaee/Behen.... buhat pukhta wa aala kalaam! Ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee rounaq badhaatay rahayn!

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14th April 2012, 10:10 AM
Khafaa Khafaa sa rehni ki nahi koi nahi wajaah…
Khafaa Khaffa hi rehta hoon lekin mein har jagah…

Sisak sisak ki rooh meri, maange kahin panah…
Jhijhak jhijak ke zindagi lo ho gayi fanaa…

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Love 14th April 2012, 10:36 AM
Ehsaas ji,

Wakai mey Aapki ye Rachna Kabil-e-Tareef Hai... Agar Thoda Short mey Likhenge to Behtar hoga kyuki Short likhne mey Focus wahi Rehta Hai Jis Khayal per Apki Rachna Hoti Hai... Bahot Accha Likha Hai Aapne... GOD Bless u n ur Family...

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18th April 2012, 06:36 PM
aapki ehesaas lajawab hai
umeed hai jald hi aur nayi ghazal aapki qalam se padhne ko milegi

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