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24th January 2008, 10:43 PM
doston........aaj mausam ko dhayan me rakhte huye shararat se bharpur ek ghazal likhi hai ....is me thodi si shararat hai,thodi si mohabbat bhi hai.....i hope aap sab ko meri ye koshish pasand aayegi.....plz do reply...........
chalo aaj rasm-e-mohabbat kuch yun nibha di jaaye , dil ki baat aaj to in labo se ki jaaye............. likh do tum apna naam mere gore badan per apni ungaliyon se , aaj kyu na ek nayi shararat ki jaaye.......... mile jab saanse saanso se hokar purnam, aao un saanso ki mehak aaj labo se pee jaaye............ kar rahi hai sargoshiya.n kuch behaki si hawa , aaj sawan ke badalo mein bheeg kar mohabbat ki jaaye dekha hai teri aankho mein bhi kuch betabiyo.n ko, kyo na aaj en betabiyo.n per ek kahaani mohabbat ki likhi jaaye.....................  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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24th January 2008, 10:47 PM
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wah lamha kya baat hai bahut hi achhi gazal likhi hai gazal padh ke to yakeen aa gaya ki waha ka mausam kuch jyada hi shararati hai sach me bahut hi achhi gazal hai mujhe bahut hi pasand aai aage bhi aise hi likhte rahena aapka dost krenil |
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25th January 2008, 01:27 PM
Dear Lamha.
Vakay bahut badhiya gazal likhi he.... per sach kahu........ muje Me Mahooba hu jyada achhi lagi thi (just frank opinion) par isi tarha likhte rehna... your Friend Teiro mat........... Baho (Dont Sweem..... Just Flow) |
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25th January 2008, 08:21 PM
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shukriya KRENIL......uhi saath dete rehna......... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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25th January 2008, 08:24 PM
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thanx RAJ....... pasand karne ka shukriya.....to be honest, muje bhi meri ghazal "MAI MOHABBAT HOO" zayada pasand hai...wo meri bhi sabse favourite ghazal hai... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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26th January 2008, 02:11 AM
Behetrin jazabaat Nice one to read n ya dnt mind if i carry it in my mind :P.
Bahut hi acchi gazal hai |
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26th January 2008, 07:38 PM
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thank u soooooo much dear......and as a friend i wont mind if u carry it in ur mind..  ...."LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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waah waah |
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waah waah -
26th January 2008, 10:36 PM
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27th January 2008, 12:23 AM
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thank u soooooooooo much MANU....  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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30th January 2008, 02:47 PM
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achi ghazal hai keep writting $...!
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30th January 2008, 06:54 PM
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thanx NEHA..............keep coming.....take care.......... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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3rd February 2008, 05:23 PM
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ya off course. u take care $...!
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very nice |
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salam janab app ne bohat achi post ki hai waqai main acha laga parh ker aysi poetry or kisi web nahi mili muje nice keep sharing apna khyal rakhna KHUDA app ko khush rakhe |
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5th February 2008, 03:44 PM
lamha fentastic likha aapne
aap to bekhubi aapne zasbaat aapni feelings aur aapne eehsaas ko kitab ke paan no par uutar na jante ho bahot hi aacha likha hain aapne Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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5th February 2008, 08:00 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya aap ka............ "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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5th February 2008, 08:01 PM
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shukriya NIHAR.....mai apni feelings ko panno par utarne ki koshish karti hoo....pata nahi kaha tak kaamyab hoti hoo.... "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko段i hamnaam teraa , ko段i tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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29th May 2008, 08:52 PM
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Bahut ache se paish kiya hai app ne shararat ko .......khush rahiye |
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