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16th February 2006, 11:49 PM
I prayed for a moment of love…
But all my prayers have gone unanswered… Numbness has crept in to my heart… With the pain inside looming large… Eyes of mine can only show the tears… Tears of love that dropped in to an ocean… Every drop of it was meant for her… Every drop of it is a pearl waiting for her… I wish I had a dream to live with… Alas! If only my wishes would be true… Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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17th February 2006, 12:55 AM
Originally posted by karthik
I prayed for a moment of love… But all my prayers have gone unanswered… Numbness has crept in to my heart… With the pain inside looming large… Eyes of mine can only show the tears… Tears of love that dropped in to an ocean… Every drop of it was meant for her… Every drop of it is a pearl waiting for her… I wish I had a dream to live with… Alas! If only my wishes would be true… I just love this little poem of yours...Karthik ! An awesome write ! Keep it up...you are in the right path...! Take good care of yourself  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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17th February 2006, 12:58 AM
I prayed for a moment of love…
But all my prayers have gone unanswered… hmmm....first look around...and ask....then u will c if ur prayers have gone unanswered or not...ill explain later Numbness has crept in to my heart… With the pain inside looming large… its not hard to melt tht feeling...its not hard to get rid of the pain Eyes of mine can only show the tears… Tears of love that dropped in to an ocean… Every drop of it was meant for her… Every drop of it is a pearl waiting for her… every tear of urs has been counted by the one above...and for every tear you have separated frm...He will give you double the amount of happiness....but tht DOESNT mean u can go and cry ur heart out intentially  I wish I had a dream to live with… Alas! If only my wishes would be true… dreams dont always come tru...its better to stay away frm something u cant trust....and yes, your wishes will come tru...jin baba hai na! well...all in all, beautiful, gud to c something frm u, very gud, i thought u were gonna give up poetry and be a journalist  ....nice to c u bac...take care keep writing and most importantly SMILE byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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17th February 2006, 05:17 PM
I prayed for a moment of love…
But all my prayers have gone unanswered… Numbness has crept in to my heart… With the pain inside looming large… Eyes of mine can only show the tears… Tears of love that dropped in to an ocean… Every drop of it was meant for her… Every drop of it is a pearl waiting for her… I wish I had a dream to live with… Alas! If only my wishes would be true… Beautiful expression as always...Loved it... but dont shed ur pearls too often buddy....value them... TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th February 2006, 10:42 PM
My dear karthik,
Beautiful poem. Hope your wish comes true. don't worry dear, be happy.. ok! take care. |
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17th February 2006, 10:58 PM
Hello Karthik
My Sweet Brother.......yet another beautiful poetry.....good one......keep it up.........The line which I liked the best is : I wish I had a dream to live with… Alas! If only my wishes would be true… Tumhari yeh lines dekh kabhi apna likha kuch yaad aa gaya...Chalo aaj ek apni english poetry ki line sunatey huun tumhey.... Colours of the sky like dreams in her eyes Sometimes bright sometimes dull Colours of the sky are colours of life Sometimes bright sometimes dull Take care and keep writing Di |
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19th February 2006, 06:24 PM
hello danny bhai...
thanks for da reply...nice to knw that u liked it take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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19th February 2006, 06:45 PM
may your dream come true dear...
take care jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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21st February 2006, 12:36 AM
Karthik,
A good one... Take Care Rohin |
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21st February 2006, 12:39 AM
Karthik,
Wishes and hopes are the only way you can build bridges between gaps so keep wishing and hoping, one day i am sure your bridge will be built. Well Written. Keep Writing. Destiny is what you make off, Be the creator of your destiny, For all have the force within.... Regards, Balaji Nagarajan |
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