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akelai hum -
29th January 2004, 08:01 PM
guzri hai raat adhi ,sab loog soo rahai hai
yaha hum akelai mai baithai , tairi yaad mai roh rahai hai |
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*Ishq~Ibadat.......**
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29th January 2004, 09:17 PM
Hum bhi kaha so paye hein? Keise sukoon paoon tujhe dekhne ke baad ab keya Gazal sunayon tujhe dekhne baad keise sukoon paoon tujhe dekhne ke baad.......Gazal thi sune honge zaroor. I really like this one. Bohot achha laga. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.
 Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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31st January 2004, 02:32 AM
hi that was too good bahut acha likha hai app ne keep it up n take care tata khuda hafiz
Raat itni haseen thi Ke saare so rahe the, Hum hi aise badnaseeb the Jo aap ki yaad me ro rahe the!!!  |
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kuch likhne ki koshish
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hi -
31st January 2004, 04:49 AM
hi aroba j
how r u? acha likha hay aap ne sher main dard dikhayi de raha hay waise raton ko jagne ka..kisi ko yad kar k rone ka apna hi maza hay ..nahi? dad kabol kije aik banjara'''' bas'''' agar mohabbat hay to judai kiyon or judai main mohabbat kasi???? |
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