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26th August 2006, 07:53 AM
raakh ke dher se makaan khada nahi hota...
gujhar gaya hai jo waqt wapas nahi aata sab kuch to apna hi thaa…ghar, gali, gaon, desh… par ek ‘dead end’ k baad aage rasta nahi aata ab bhi log milte hai to pahchaan hi lete hai par aankh mai ab apnapan nazar nahi aata naakaam sharm se jhuki hui hai aankhe aur haari hui zindgi ka boz uthana nahi aata saanse chal rahi hai chal ne ki hi khatir... aye maut tujko bulana bhi to mujko nahi aata |
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26th August 2006, 09:24 AM
HAAN SAB BADAL SA JATA HAI THODI SI DURI AUR APNAPAN JAISE KHTAM JAANE KYU
LOG KHUD HI SHRAM SE JHUK JAAYE ITNI INSAANIYAT KAHA HAI AB MEENA JI aapki ye kuch dard bhari panktiyan kuch kahne ko nahi hai bus itna shayd yahi sachhyi hai zindgi ki love shrddha 
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26th August 2006, 09:39 AM
namasteee.. meena ji ..
hmmm .. app ke liye too sirf itna hi kahunga.. ke.. jara...akhon se akhein mila ke dekh .. tujhe saab apna .. nazaar ayega.. jiski na hoogi himmaat woh... saaree aam ..sab ke samne apni nazar zhukayega.. aur rahi baat..woh raste wali aur zinadgi ki nakaamiyabi ki .. too use sirf itna kahunga .. ke.. rastee.. kabhi hoote nahi khud ..bana ne padte hai .. karna padta hai sangarsh .. kaanto ko daman se chaatne padte hai .. jisse keahto.. hoo dead end....picche mudke palat ke dekho.. ek naya rasta..nazar ayega.. bus..app karo shuruvaat apne ..app ..kaatan ka rasta.. phoolon ki sej ban jayega.. hmmm abb aate hai apki akhri lino ..pe.. i knw. app kahoge.. ke. .sala.. khud too sudharta nai hai dusro ko nisihaat deta hai per kya kareein bhai hum too aise hi hai.. ,haahaha.. maut na kisi ke bullane pe.. aai na ayeegi.. agar aisa hota too saari duniya khatam hoo jayegi.. maat..raah dekh uski ussee ana hai taab ayegi.. bus..karti raho aise karam ke.. usse bhi.. apni saanse thaam ni pade.. tumhare pass ane se .. pehle.. khud hi wohh roo padee.. . bye ..n..take care.. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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26th August 2006, 10:14 AM
Sader Namaskar Di
Aaj itney din baad aapko site par dekh bahut kushi ho rahi hay  Thanks for coming.....Aur itney khoobsurat Kavita bhi padhney ko miley....thanks for that too......Very nicely written poetry.......raakh ke dher se makaan khada nahi hota... gujhar gaya hai jo waqt wapas nahi aata Di mana guzra waqt laut kar nahin aata....par jo waqt paas hay usey hi tham le to....aapki rachna dekh apni ek rachna ki yaad aa gayi....Jo pal kho diya usey tum janey do....Jo Waqt baki hay usey tum thaam lo....di yuun hi liktey rahiyega...hamey hamesha aapka intezar rehta hay... Take care |
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26th August 2006, 10:57 AM
meena dost
aap ka andaaz e bayaan aur tarz e tehreer yaqeenan sab se juda aur sab se munfarid hai. meri bharpoor daad qabool karein. yeh shayr bohat bhayaa ab bhi log milte hai to pahchaan hi lete hai par aankh mai ab apnapan nazar nahi aata khush rahein aabaad rahein. aap ke liye aur aap ki sehet ke liye dua go musharrafhusain |
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26th August 2006, 07:45 PM
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Aaj bahut dino baad aapka likha kuch padha hai... par yeh kya abhi bhi vahi dard vahi nakaam tanhaai ka rang..?? aapse us din baat bhi na ho paayi poori... plz aap apna dhayaan rahiye.. mujhe to ab aur jyada chinta hone lag gayi hai.. Agar sirf shayri samjh ke padhun to bahut khoobsoorat hai.. lekin aapse phir aise kisi dard ki umeed nahi kar rahi thi.. shaayad yahan kuch bhi nahi badla... bas meri hi zindagi ka matlab badla hai.. aap dhayaan rakhiye plz.. aapki... ~Prii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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31st August 2006, 12:16 AM
Do pal hain bas yeh mushkil ke,
fir har taraf hone khushaal nazaare hain Dekhaa aapne jaane kis or, har taraf yahaan to aap hi ki aankh ke taare hain.... Didi, Kabhi kabhi hota hai aisa jab lagne lagta hai ke koi apna nahi hai... accha huaa jo khayal likh diye.... magar inhe dil se mat lagaaiyega... aap akeli kaise ho sakti hain itne bade aprivaar ke hote hue? Apna khyal rakhiye achhe se... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st August 2006, 12:35 AM
Manna,
Well said... tum acche se jaante ho inhe kaise samjhana hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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31st August 2006, 02:24 PM
naakaam sharm se jhuki hui hai aankhe aur
haari hui zindgi ka boz uthana nahi aata saanse chal rahi hai chal ne ki hi khatir... aye maut tujko bulana bhi to mujko nahi aata meena ji, bahut khoob,badi gehri aur sacchayi se bharpoor baat kahi aapne.bahut acha laga padhkar. likhti rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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31st August 2006, 03:43 PM
Bhai jaan !
Bas kar dee na buddhoN wali baat ! lagta hai aapko apne young club se nikaalna padega  Dekhiye abhi tak aapko iss badhti hui umar meiN hum ne bhai bana ke rakha hua hai kam se kam uska to khyaal kijiye warna aapka takhallus bhai jaan se daadi jaan rakhna padega  !ek shayar ki haisiyat se to tareef hi karni padegi magar ek bete ki haisiyat se yehi guzarish hai ki kuch hasta khelta nazrana pesh kiya jaye .. ! baki apke hunar par kisko shaQ ho sakta hai ! bahut khushnasibi ki aate aate aapse mulakat ho gayi warna doorbhaash yantar ki madad se aapko yahaN bulana padta ! baki apna khyaal rakhiye ! tareef ke sath |
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31st August 2006, 05:51 PM
hee hee hee...Kshitiz theek karo zara inko...china ke paani mein koyi contamination tau nahi thee?
Arre meri maa... jab bhi likhti hain...dil pe sataak chot!!!! kahan se laayin aisa hunar? Bhai jaan ho..bhaiyyon wali baatein karo...  luv you... aaj ke liye sirf yours paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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31st August 2006, 07:04 PM
Meena ji sab aap ko didi bulate hai mai bhi bulata hu.
bahu j sundar geet lakhyu chhe,jema saachi vaat darshavi tame tamaari kala no bahu j prabhavshaali parichay aapyo chhe...... tamari aa site par aavava ni frequency ghati gayi laage chhe,vyastata ne kaarne bahu j sundar didi aavi j rite lakhi ne tamaari kala thi amne parichit karavata rahejo. tamaari tabiyat nu dhyan raakhjo ane aavta rahesho avi aasha raakhu chhu jayshri krishna manu |
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31st August 2006, 11:49 PM
very nice meena aap ne kis kamal se apnay jazbaat bayan kiye hain bohat acha laga
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1st September 2006, 01:29 AM
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dear meena dd, aa poem ane "maari vyathaa" vaanchi... khoob j saras lakhyu chhe pan aa shu? aatli udaasi kem? tamo bahu badlaayi gayaa chho? bas anhi etlu j kahu chhu ke aa sundar rachna maate maari bharpoor daad kubulsho ane aam j lakhtaa rehsho... do take good care of yourself and keep smiling. |
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14th September 2006, 09:07 AM
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Meri Shrdh, der se javaab de rahi hu , maafi chahti hu. zindgi to shayed achhi hi hoti hai .. hum hi oose kharaab kar dete hai apne jine ke tariko se ... pata nahi... tumhari Meena |
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14th September 2006, 10:46 AM
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Mere Ainae, aaj tumse panga nahi lena tha... tumhari dead line paas aa gayi thi to subah hi yaha aa gayi hu . (waise bedil ne kaha k dekhiye to sahi ekbaar ke Manna bhai kaya karte hai waha agar aap nahi gayi to.. ) par muje woh nazara dekhne ka saahas nahi karna tha..  tumhare jawaab padhe meri baat par jo tumne kaha hai... jara...akhon se akhein mila ke dekh .. tujhe saab apna .. nazaar ayega.. jiski na hoogi himmaat woh... saaree aam ..sab ke samne apni nazar zhukayega khair.. yah to waqt hi humae jawaab de deta hai .. kya apnapan hai or kya begana tha... kahi tum bhi sahi ho to kahi mai bhi galat nahi.. haan woh baat alag hai ke hum agar begano se koi ummid bana de to kaise apnapan nazar aa sakata hai? har pahchan lene wala apna to nahi hota na? ----------------------------- aur rahi baat..woh raste wali aur zinadgi ki nakaamiyabi ki .. too use sirf itna kahunga .. ke.. rastee.. kabhi hoote nahi khud ..bana ne padte hai .. karna padta hai sangarsh .. kaanto ko daman se chaatne padte hai .. jisse keahto.. hoo dead end....picche mudke palat ke dekho.. ek naya rasta..nazar ayega.. bus..app karo shuruvaat apne ..app ..kaatan ka rasta.. phoolon ki sej ban jayega.. tumhari baat par ek geet yaad aa gaya... hum dono ki pasand ka... Rook jana nahi tu kahi haar ke... 100% tum sahi ho. ------------------------------------------ hmmm abb aate hai apki akhri lino ..pe.. i knw. app kahoge.. ke. .sala.. khud too sudharta nai hai dusro ko nisihaat deta hai per kya kareein bhai hum too aise hi hai.. ,haahaha.. maut na kisi ke bullane pe.. aai na ayeegi.. agar aisa hota too saari duniya khatam hoo jayegi.. maat..raah dekh uski ussee ana hai taab ayegi.. bus..karti raho aise karam ke.. usse bhi.. apni saanse thaam ni pade.. tumhare pass ane se .. pehle.. khud hi wohh roo padee.. . Manish Maharaj ki Jay .. majaak bahut ho gayi.. sach mai Manaa.. tumhari yah aakhri baat tumhare pass ane se .. pehle.. khud hi wohh roo padee.. . dil ko hila gayi... ------------------------------ Mannaa.. kabhi nahi socha tha k tum yaha is post par aa jaaoge.. or nahi socha yahi meri galti hui... tumhe to aana hi tha... tumhari koi baate bhulti nahi ... ( ab yah tana nahi maarna.. ke bhulte nahi ho par maante kaha ho? ) bahut kuch kahna hai par shayed abhi mera maun rahna hi bahetar hoga.. tumhariiiiiiii Meena |
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14th September 2006, 10:59 AM
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Meri priy sukanya, abhi tumhe padhna bhi to muje baki hai . koshish karungi k jaldi hi tumhe bhi padh paau. shukria meri rachna pasand karne k liye waise tumhare vichaar sahi hai . humae aaj mai jina chahiye oos se bhi badhakar mai kahungi k humae aaj ko banana chahiye tumhari di |
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14th September 2006, 11:03 AM
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mere Mushi dost, aapki daad or dua dono mere sar aankho par. apna khayal rakhiyega Meena |
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Meri Prii bachaa... yah sirf shayri hai yunh maan lo or apne dil ko na dukhaao khush raho haan mai baat nahi kar paayi thi oos din. sorry beta tumhari di |
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14th September 2006, 11:10 AM
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aap sabhi ke hote huae mai kabhi akeli nahi ho sakti. koi shak nahi. waaqai mai aap sab meri aankh ke taare hai. tumhari didi |
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14th September 2006, 11:12 AM
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Mere Pulkit, tumhari is baat par Manaa ne kaha tha k yah galatfahmi mai mat raho bhai.. waise tum sahi ho . yah mai jaanti hu. lol tumhari Didi |
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14th September 2006, 11:52 AM
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13th November 2007, 02:38 PM
diiiiiii..........ahsaas dil ko tadpa gaye........yu hi likhti rahiye.
regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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