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22nd September 2015, 10:26 PM
Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !
dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke islaaH zaruur kkareiN, bil khasuus beh'r pe.
Daastaan-e-gHam kahii to aap bhi ruswaa huye
Aap hee batalaaiye, wo ehed saare kyaa huye
ehed= promise(s)/ commitment(s)
Baarhaa mujh ko nigaaheiN hausla deti rahiiN
vasl ki shab ka gumaaN Tha raaz saare vaa huye
vaa= open/ khule huye
Kyaa huyii taqseer aakhir iss dil-e-beemaar se
YuN muqaabil baiThkar wo kyun hain afsurda huye
taqseer= gustaakhi
muqaabil= saamne/opposite
afsurda= sad/gHamgeen
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chhupii baateiN na thiiN
Aaj gar haiN hum mile kyuN mouzu-e-charchaa huye
marasim= ta'aluqaat/ relationship
barmala= khullamkhulla/ in public view
Raahat-e-jaaN na mili ruswaaiyoN ke sheher meiN
Baais-e-taskeen Thay jo, aur gHam afzaa huye
baais-e-taskeen= raahat ya dilaasa dene wala
gHam-afzaa= gHam baDhaane wala
Zindagii kaa har taqaaza raft karne keliye
Baar-ha marte rahe hum aur phir zinda huye
raft= gone/past/done away with
Waqt ke haaThoN mile kuchh daagH kuchh naasuur bhi
Kal talak thay barhana jo aaj sar-bastaa huye
barhana= naked
sar-bastaa= hidden/ posheeda
'Ashna' ko gHam mile goyaa gHiza milne lagii
Bhuul kar duniya-o-dhande hum to beparawa huye
gHiza= nutrition
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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22nd September 2015, 10:29 PM
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Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !
dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke islaaH zaruur kkareiN, bil khasuus beh'r pe.
Daastaan-e-gHam kahii to aap bhi ruswaa huye
Aap hee batalaaiye, wo ehed saare kyaa huye
Baarhaa mujh ko nigaaheiN hausla deti rahiiN
vasl ki shab ka gumaaN Tha raaz saare vaa huye
Kyaa huyii taqseer aakhir iss dil-e-beemaar se
YuN muqaabil baiThkar wo kyun hain afsurda huye
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaataib un se be-pardaa huye
Raahat-e-jaaN na mili ruswaaiyoN ke sheher meiN
Baais-e-taskeen Thay jo, aur gHam afzaa huye
Aashna ko gHam mile goya gHiza milne lagii
gHamzada ki iss adaa pe log dildada huye
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Wah Sagar bhai bahut umda ghazal likhi hai aapne............
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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22nd September 2015, 11:34 PM
waah!! Sagar sahab...sabse pahle to main dili mubarakbaad dena chahoongi aapki behr par ki iss pahli koshish ke liye...ye khushi kya hoti hai maine haal hee me mahsoos ki hai...aap to mashaAllah kya khoob likhte hain...aur behr ne chaar chaand laga diye aapki ghazal me..
Apni ghazal ki shakl me khoobsoorat tohfa diya hai bazm ko aapne..purasar andaaz raha is baar bhi..aapki mehnat saaf jhalak rahi hai isme..
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..meri vocabulary me izafa bhi hua hai isme koi shak nahi.....
Sabhi hazrat ki ray aur daad zaroor milegi aapko...
Bahut sari daad meri taraf se...aur pahli kaamyaab koshish par rep+++ bhi...
yun hee kalam chalti rahe...
Khush rahiye..
Aur aate rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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24th September 2015, 08:08 AM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !
dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke islaaH zaruur kkareiN, bil khasuus beh'r pe.
Daastaan-e-gHam kahii to aap bhi ruswaa huye
Aap hee batalaaiye, wo ehed saare kyaa huye
Baarhaa mujh ko nigaaheiN hausla deti rahiiN
vasl ki shab ka gumaaN Tha raaz saare vaa huye
Kyaa huyii taqseer aakhir iss dil-e-beemaar se
YuN muqaabil baiThkar wo kyun hain afsurda huye
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateiN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaatib un se be-pardaa huye
Raahat-e-jaaN na mili ruswaaiyoN ke sheher meiN
Baais-e-taskeen Thay jo, aur gHam afzaa huye
Aashna ko gHam mile goya gHiza milne lagii
gHamzada ki iss adaa pe log dildada huye
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Wah Janaab Bahut khoob Bahut khoob !!
Meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaiyeGaa janaab har sher umdaa aur har misre ko aapne badi baariki se buna hai aapki ghazal par mehnat saaf nazr aa rahi hai. Yun to har sher la jawaab hai par 4th sher ki saani ek baar doobaara dekh le shayad thodi atak rahi hai....
Khoobsurat Matle se shuruaat ki hai aapne aur rawaangi behad umdaa hai is kalaam ki ek sher jo dil azeez raha aur jis par dil daraaz taur par muqarrar raha use bayaan kar raha hoon..
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateiN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaatib un se be-pardaa huye
kaamyaab ahle-qalam ka dastoor raha hai ki vo daad khud loot le aur aapne vo kaam kar dikhaaya hai dar-haqeeqat banayangi ko mehfil mein rakhte rahiYeGaa
Aapse ek aur darkhwaast karna chahunga ki agar aap mushkil alfaazon ka translation bhi de paaye aur humhare aur dost jo urdu ke gehre alfaazon se rubaruu nahi hai unhe bhi iska lutf mil paayegaa
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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24th September 2015, 10:25 AM
Sagar ji
Bohut achi koshish rahi aur pasand bhi aayi. urdu mein haath tang hai, aap mushkil words ke meaning bhi diya kijiye mere jaiso ke liye.
likhte rahiye.
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24th September 2015, 10:31 AM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !
dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke islaaH zaruur kkareiN, bil khasuus beh'r pe.
Daastaan-e-gHam kahii to aap bhi ruswaa huye
Aap hee batalaaiye, wo ehed saare kyaa huye
Baarhaa mujh ko nigaaheiN hausla deti rahiiN
vasl ki shab ka gumaaN Tha raaz saare vaa huye
Kyaa huyii taqseer aakhir iss dil-e-beemaar se
YuN muqaabil baiThkar wo kyun hain afsurda huye
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateiN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaatib un se be-pardaa huye
Raahat-e-jaaN na mili ruswaaiyoN ke sheher meiN
Baais-e-taskeen Thay jo, aur gHam afzaa huye
Aashna ko gHam mile goya gHiza milne lagii
gHamzada ki iss adaa pe log dildada huye
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wahhhhh....kya kamaal ki gazal pesh ki hai aapne, muje behr ki koi jaankaari to nahi hai par etna jaroor kahuNgi ki bade flow meiN padi gye yeh gazal...sabhi ashiyaar bahut khoobsurati se gazal meiN baandhe hai aapne, meri taraf se dheroN dher mubarakbaad kabool kijiye.
yu hi khoobsurat gazleN bazm ki nazar karte rhiye aur bazm ki rangeeni badate rhiye.
khoobsurat gazal par reps +++
khush rhiye
duaoN ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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24th September 2015, 09:56 PM
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Wah Sagar bhai bahut umda ghazal likhi hai aapne............
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Bohot bohot shukriya jenab.
Yunhi saaTh dete rahiye.
Sagar Aashna
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28th September 2015, 10:47 AM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Haazreen-e-mehfil ko mera adaab !
dosto, pesh kar raha huuN beh'r meiN apni pehli koshish. Ummid hai aapko pasand aayegii. ismeiN islaaH ki zaruurat hai, isliye usaatza hazraat se darkhwast hai ke islaaH zaruur kkareiN, bil khasuus beh'r pe.
Daastaan-e-gHam kahii to aap bhi ruswaa huye
Aap hee batalaaiye, wo ehed saare kyaa huye
Baarhaa mujh ko nigaaheiN hausla deti rahiiN
vasl ki shab ka gumaaN Tha raaz saare vaa huye
Kyaa huyii taqseer aakhir iss dil-e-beemaar se
YuN muqaabil baiThkar wo kyun hain afsurda huye
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateiN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaatib un se be-pardaa huye
Raahat-e-jaaN na mili ruswaaiyoN ke sheher meiN
Baais-e-taskeen Thay jo, aur gHam afzaa huye
Aashna ko gHam mile goya gHiza milne lagii
gHamzada ki iss adaa pe log dildada huye
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waahhh janaab waahh..... behad haseeb matlaa se aaghaaz karte hue aapne anjaam tak abkhubii pahuchaaya hai Saagar saahab.... aapki is ghazal ko padh kar ham yaqeen maniye aapke mureeedd ho gaye..... kyaa khoob likhte hain aap.... bahut shaandaar.......... likhte rahiye...
duaaon ki darkhaast.....
Shaad....
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28th September 2015, 11:00 AM
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waah!! Sagar sahab...sabse pahle to main dili mubarakbaad dena chahoongi aapki behr par ki iss pahli koshish ke liye...ye khushi kya hoti hai maine haal hee me mahsoos ki hai...aap to mashaAllah kya khoob likhte hain...aur behr ne chaar chaand laga diye aapki ghazal me..
Apni ghazal ki shakl me khoobsoorat tohfa diya hai bazm ko aapne..purasar andaaz raha is baar bhi..aapki mehnat saaf jhalak rahi hai isme..
Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe..meri vocabulary me izafa bhi hua hai isme koi shak nahi.....
Sabhi hazrat ki ray aur daad zaroor milegi aapko...
Bahut sari daad meri taraf se...aur pahli kaamyaab koshish par rep+++ bhi...
yun hee kalam chalti rahe...
Khush rahiye..
Aur aate rahiye...
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Aapki khoobsurat basaartoN ka kamaal hai mohtrama Madhu ji jo aapko iss qadar pasand aayi meri yeh koshish. MaiN aapka behad mashkoor-o-mamnoon huN.
Aap jaise qadardaanoN ki wajah se hee yeh kalam chalti hai.
SaTh dene keliye ek baar phir se tah-e-dil se shukriya.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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28th September 2015, 11:58 AM
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Wah Janaab Bahut khoob Bahut khoob !!
Meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaiyeGaa janaab har sher umdaa aur har misre ko aapne badi baariki se buna hai aapki ghazal par mehnat saaf nazr aa rahi hai. Yun to har sher la jawaab hai par 4th sher ki saani ek baar doobaara dekh le shayad thodi atak rahi hai....
Khoobsurat Matle se shuruaat ki hai aapne aur rawaangi behad umdaa hai is kalaam ki ek sher jo dil azeez raha aur jis par dil daraaz taur par muqarrar raha use bayaan kar raha hoon..
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chupii baateiN na thii
Aaj bhi ho luuN mukhaatib un se be-pardaa huye
kaamyaab ahle-qalam ka dastoor raha hai ki vo daad khud loot le aur aapne vo kaam kar dikhaaya hai dar-haqeeqat banayangi ko mehfil mein rakhte rahiYeGaa
Aapse ek aur darkhwaast karna chahunga ki agar aap mushkil alfaazon ka translation bhi de paaye aur humhare aur dost jo urdu ke gehre alfaazon se rubaruu nahi hai unhe bhi iska lutf mil paayegaa
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Mast sahib, sab se pehle to bohot bohot shukriya iss qadar hausla afzaayi keliye. Yaqeen maaniye, aap jaise dost hausla afzaayi karte haiN to likhne ka mann bhi karta hai. Aur lagta hai hum shayari ki taraf raagHib ho rahe haiN.
Bohot bohot SHUKRIYA sahab.
Aapne ek nuqt'a rakha Thaa 4th sher ke saani ko lekar. Toh bhai mujhe yeh kehte huye fakhar mehsuus ho raha hai ke mere dost ne itni gHaur se mutaalya kiya meri iss koshish ka aur ussmeiN jo kami lagii uski be-jhijak nishandehi bhi ki.
Aapke uss nuqt'e pe gHaur karte mujhe bhi laga ke sher kuchh bikhra hua saa hai. Toh sahab maine uss meiN tarmeem karne ki soch lii.
Meri darkhwast hogi mods se ke iss meiN edit kar ke misra change kar deiN.
4th sher meiN yuN likhna chaahunga:
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chhupii baateiN na thiiN
Aaj gar haiN hum mile kyuN mouzu-e-charchaa huye
Iske alawa 2nd sher ko hatana chahta huN. Please remove it.
2nd sher ki banawat se mein mutmaiyan nahi huN, jaldbaazi meiN likha gaya Tha.
Maqta se pehle do ash'aar ka izaafa karna chahta huN.
Zindagii kaa har taqaaza raft karne keliye
Baar-ha marte rahe hum aur phir zinda huye
aur
Waqt ke haaThoN mile kuchh daagH kuchh naasuur bhi
Kal talak thay barhana jo aaj sar-bastaa huye
aur aakhir meiN
Maqte ka saani bhi badalna chahta huN. Agar ijaazat ho toh.
'Ashna' ko gHam mile goyaa gHiza milne lagii
Bhuul kar duniya-o-dhande hum to beparawa huye
Itni si tarmeem agar respected mods kar dengae to maiN mashkuur rahunga aur meri hausla afzaayi hogi.
Thanks a ton.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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28th September 2015, 04:21 PM
Sab kuch baqamaal hai .. bohat hi dilfareb ghazal raqm ki hai bhai jaan .. pehli koshish bohat hi aala hai.. jiske hisaab se ghazal bohat sahi jaan padti hai.. thoda sheron ke khayaal main mutafarriqiat laayeN to aur behtar hoga .. baaki sab accha hai .. bhadiya hai ..
Sifar
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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30th September 2015, 08:04 PM
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Mast sahib, sab se pehle to bohot bohot shukriya iss qadar hausla afzaayi keliye. Yaqeen maaniye, aap jaise dost hausla afzaayi karte haiN to likhne ka mann bhi karta hai. Aur lagta hai hum shayari ki taraf raagHib ho rahe haiN.
Bohot bohot SHUKRIYA sahab.
Aapne ek nuqt'a rakha Thaa 4th sher ke saani ko lekar. Toh bhai mujhe yeh kehte huye fakhar mehsuus ho raha hai ke mere dost ne itni gHaur se mutaalya kiya meri iss koshish ka aur ussmeiN jo kami lagii uski be-jhijak nishandehi bhi ki.
Aapke uss nuqt'e pe gHaur karte mujhe bhi laga ke sher kuchh bikhra hua saa hai. Toh sahab maine uss meiN tarmeem karne ki soch lii.
Meri darkhwast hogi mods se ke iss meiN edit kar ke misra change kar deiN.
4th sher meiN yuN likhna chaahunga:
Thay marasim barmala ko_ii chhupii baateiN na thiiN
Aaj gar haiN hum mile kyuN mouzu-e-charchaa huye
Iske alawa 2nd sher ko hatana chahta huN. Please remove it.
2nd sher ki banawat se mein mutmaiyan nahi huN, jaldbaazi meiN likha gaya Tha.
Maqta se pehle do ash'aar ka izaafa karna chahta huN.
Zindagii kaa har taqaaza raft karne keliye
Baar-ha marte rahe hum aur phir zinda huye
aur
Waqt ke haaThoN mile kuchh daagH kuchh naasuur bhi
Kal talak thay barhana jo aaj sar-bastaa huye
aur aakhir meiN
Maqte ka saani bhi badalna chahta huN. Agar ijaazat ho toh.
'Ashna' ko gHam mile goyaa gHiza milne lagii
Bhuul kar duniya-o-dhande hum to beparawa huye
Itni si tarmeem agar respected mods kar dengae to maiN mashkuur rahunga aur meri hausla afzaayi hogi.
Thanks a ton.
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Jagdish ji pehle to maaufi chahta hoon der se changes kar paaya aur aapke bataaye huye sher padh kar dil masroor hai, jis hunar se aapne is ghazal mein izaafah kiya hai aur na sirf aapke kaamil shayar hone ki bayaani hai par aapki deen-daaree ki misaal hai. Bahut khushi hai mujhe ki humari mehfil mein aap jaise shayar maujuud hai....
yunhi likhte rahiYe aur fayz-yaab rahiYe
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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1st October 2015, 04:18 AM
sagar miyaaN, aadaab arz hai
bhai, Ghazal khoob huii hai, aur aapne kahaa hai to maane leta hooN ke yeh aapki beher meiN aapki pehli kohshish hai vagarnaa padhne ke baad aisa qata'ii jaan nahiiN paDta ke aapko wazan meiN she'r raqm karne meiN koi diqqat pesh aati hogi
ba-har-haal, bohat aala Ghazal hui hai saahab, aap maubarakbaad aur hazaar mooNh daad ke haqdaar haiN, qabuul farmaiiye
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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1st October 2015, 09:36 AM
Jagdish bhai ,
bahut achchi ghazal likhi hai aapne .. AAp se guzarish hai ki difficult urdu words ke mayne neeche astrik se likh diya kareiN jisse hum jaise log jo urdu meiN thora kamzor haiN aap logon ki koshish ka poora luthf utha sake ...
Jaise yahan word taskeen aur marasim ke mayne mujhe maloom nahi, so it se relating sher mujhe samajh nayi aye ..
Regds
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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1st October 2015, 11:46 AM
Muaziz qaar'yeen ko mera adaab !
Sab se pehle maiN taakhiir keliye maazrat chaahuNga. Waqt ki qillat ke chalte aap se ruubaruu nahi ho paaya.
Aap dostoN ka itna achha response dekh kar yaqeenan bohot baDi hausla afzaayi huyii hai meri, uskeliye tah-e-dil se shukriya.
Hasb-e-istadaa-e-arbaab-e-zouq, kuchh mushkil alfaaz ke maaine likhne ki koshish kar raha huuN. Ummeed hai aap sab ko iss ghazal se mazeed lutf-andoz hone meiN madad milegii. Aur phir aap sab ke taasuraat aur besh-qeemti aara ka intezaar rahegaa.
ehed= promise(s)/ commitment(s)
vaa= open/ khule huye
taqseer= gustaakhi
muqaabil= saamne/opposite
afsurda= sad/gHamgeen
marasim= ta'aluqaat/ relationship
barmala= khullamkhulla/ in public view
baais-e-taskeen= raahat ya dilaasa dene wala
gHam-afzaa= gHam baDhaane wala
raft= gone/past/done away with
barhana= naked
sar-bastaa= hidden/ posheeda
gHiza= nutrition
Respected moderators are requested to incorporate these word-meanings after each she'r at the relevant places enabling the esteemed readers to understand each n every she'r in a better way.
Taqseer muaaf
Regards
Sagar Aashna
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Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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1st October 2015, 12:23 PM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Muaziz qaar'yeen ko mera adaab !
Sab se pehle maiN taakhiir keliye maazrat chaahuNga. Waqt ki qillat ke chalte aap se ruubaruu nahi ho paaya.
Aap dostoN ka itna achha response dekh kar yaqeenan bohot baDi hausla afzaayi huyii hai meri, uskeliye tah-e-dil se shukriya.
Hasb-e-istadaa-e-arbaab-e-zouq, kuchh mushkil alfaaz ke maaine likhne ki koshish kar raha huuN. Ummeed hai aap sab ko iss ghazal se mazeed lutf-andoz hone meiN madad milegii. Aur phir aap sab ke taasuraat aur besh-qeemti aara ka intezaar rahegaa.
ehed= promise(s)/ commitment(s)
vaa= open/ khule huye
taqseer= gustaakhi
muqaabil= saamne/opposite
afsurda= sad/gHamgeen
marasim= ta'aluqaat/ relationship
barmala= khullamkhulla/ in public view
baais-e-taskeen= raahat ya dilaasa dene wala
gHam-afzaa= gHam baDhaane wala
raft= gone/past/done away with
barhana= naked
sar-bastaa= hidden/ posheeda
gHiza= nutrition
Respected moderators are requested to incorporate these word-meanings after each she'r at the relevant places enabling the esteemed readers to understand each n every she'r in a better way.
Taqseer muaaf
Regards
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meanings likhne ka shukriya sagar ji....
ghazal edit kar di gayi hai dekh lein...
aate rahiyega...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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