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Love Yaad bhi nahi karta... - 26th September 2014, 09:59 AM
Dosto pata nahi isse Gazal section me post karna thik hai bhi ya nahi...
SDC par hi ek Gazal writing ka article padha tha...to ye pahli koshish ki hai...Pata nahi isse gazal kaha bhi ja sakta hai yaa nahi...
Aap sabhi se guzarish hai...iski khaamiya'n mujhe bataye taki main apni agli koshish me thoda behatar kar saku..

Yaad bhi nahi karta aur bhulata bhi nahi hu
Vo jo chhod gaye unko bulaata bhi nahi hu'n..

Aadat si padh chuki hai lazzat-e-ghumo ki yu'n
rota bhi hu'n aur ashq dikhaata bhi nahi hu'n...

Rakhta hu dhyan lab pe vo ek naam na aaye
par vo hi naam dil se mitaata bhi nahi hu'n...

ab bhi sambhal rakkhe hai uske tamaam khat
padhta bhi nahi unko, jalaata bhi nahi hu..

Vo jo chhod gaye unko bulaata bhi nahi hu'n...

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30th October 2014, 10:38 PM
Ye bilkul ek ghazal hai, bas behr meN halki chook hai, waise ashaar achhe haiN.

Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
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31st October 2014, 01:53 PM
Adab Lekhraj ji,

Is chhoti si damdaar Ghazal ke liye dil se daad qubool kijiye.

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Ye bilkul ek ghazal hai, bas behr meN halki chook hai, waise ashaar achhe haiN.
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Adab Lekhraj ji,

Is chhoti si damdaar Ghazal ke liye dil se daad qubool kijiye.

Mujeeb Parwaaz
aap dono ka bahut bahut shukriya...

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31st October 2014, 09:38 PM
Bahut khooblekhraj ji...mubarakbaad apko ek achchi gazal ke liye..


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25th December 2014, 12:14 PM
Bohot khoob lekhraaj ji
Bohot umda pehkash hai..
Waaaaaaah kya ravani hai

Daad kubul farmayen


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26th December 2014, 11:02 AM
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Bahut khooblekhraj ji...mubarakbaad apko ek achchi gazal ke liye..

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Bohot khoob lekhraaj ji
Bohot umda pehkash hai..
Waaaaaaah kya ravani hai

Daad kubul farmayen

App dono ka bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji aur Bhushan Ji..

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26th December 2014, 09:10 PM
Bahut pyar bhari lagi aapki gazal Ashish .. Good effort .. Aage bhi likhte rahiye
aur bazm ki raunaq badate rahiye .

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bahot khoob Lekhraj saahab...........................

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Bahut pyar bhari lagi aapki gazal Ashish .. Good effort .. Aage bhi likhte rahiye
aur bazm ki raunaq badate rahiye .

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10th January 2015, 04:38 AM
bohot achhi ghazal Lekhraj ji. Ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye.
Aate rahiyega.

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