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1st November 2014, 05:47 AM
Payaam apna sunaana hai
Ye naghma ek bahaana hai
Akeli jaaN nahiN meri
Zamaane ko chalaana hai
Jhukaao sar wahiN be bas
JahaaN pe sar jhukaana hai
Akele dam main lad jaauN
Mukhaalif gar zamaana hai
K mujh meN waaqai dam hai
Ye duniya ko dikhaana hai
GuloN tum saath meN chalna
Mujhe unko manaana hai
Mohabbat kis qadar unse
Mujhe unko bataana hai
Tabassum dekh kar mujhko
Ye aalam kya suhaana hai
HaseeN ek lafz naakaafi
Wo zeenat ka khazaana hai
Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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1st November 2014, 01:36 PM
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Originally Posted by iftakhar_ahmad
Payaam apna sunaana hai
Ye naghma ek bahaana hai
Akeli jaaN nahiN meri
Zamaane ko chalaana hai
Jhukaao sar wahiN be bas
JahaaN pe sar jhukaana hai
Akele dam main lad jaauN
Mukhaalif gar zamaana hai
K mujh meN waaqai dam hai
Ye duniya ko dikhaana hai
GuloN tum saath meN chalna
Mujhe unko manaana hai
Mohabbat kis qadar unse
Mujhe unko bataana hai
Tabassum dekh kar mujhko
Ye aalam kya suhaana hai
HaseeN ek lafz naakaafi
Wo zeenat ka khazaana hai
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bahot khoob janaab,,, waahhh kya kahne aapki ghazal ke... mahfil loot li aapne saahab..... bahot aala
likhte rahen
Shaad.....
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1st November 2014, 08:40 PM
.....waah......Very nice ahmad ji....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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1st November 2014, 11:12 PM
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Payaam apna sunaana hai
Ye naghma ek bahaana hai
Akeli jaaN nahiN meri
Zamaane ko chalaana haiu
Jhukaao sar wahiN be bas
JahaaN pe sar jhukaana hai
Akele dam main lad jaauN
Mukhaalif gar zamaana hai
K mujh meN waaqai dam hai
Ye duniya ko dikhaana hai
GuloN tum saath meN chalna
Mujhe unko manaana hai
Mohabbat kis qadar unse
Mujhe unko bataana hai
Tabassum dekh kar mujhko
Ye aalam kya suhaana hai
HaseeN ek lafz naakaafi
Wo zeenat ka khazaana hai
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Ahmad Siddqui ji.....bahut umda ehsaas...accha lga aapko padkar, likhte rhiye aur bazm ki ronak banaye rakhiye
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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3rd November 2014, 07:34 PM
Bahut shukriya Janaab Sameer saheb.
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bahot khoob janaab,,, waahhh kya kahne aapki ghazal ke... mahfil loot li aapne saahab..... bahot aala
likhte rahen
Shaad.....
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Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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3rd November 2014, 09:01 PM
Hausla afzaai ka Bahut shukriya Madhu jee.
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.....waah......Very nice ahmad ji....
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Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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4th November 2014, 10:03 PM
Suneeta jee, bahut shukriya, bas yuN hi sath banaye rakhiyega.
Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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7th November 2014, 08:06 AM
बहुत अच्छे इफ्तिखार साहेब
उम्दा ग़ज़ल ..
दाद क़ुबूल फरमाएं
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7th November 2014, 11:45 AM
bohut hi umdah kalam hai Iftakhar ji.
Par eh sher bohut mast hai.
HaseeN ek lafz naakaafi
Wo zeenat ka khazaana hai
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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8th November 2014, 03:25 AM
Jaankar achha laga ke aapko ghazal pasand aai. Bahut shukriya Kshitiz jee.
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बहुत अच्छे इफ्तिखार साहेब
उम्दा ग़ज़ल ..
दाद क़ुबूल फरमाएं
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Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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10th November 2014, 07:17 PM
Mujeeb saheb, bahut nawaazish, shukriya hausla afzaai ke liye.
Dekho mera chehra, ye aqs-e-sadaaqat hai
Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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25th December 2014, 12:25 PM
Bohot.......bohot.....aacche
Behad umda peshkash
Daad kubul farmayen
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29th December 2014, 07:44 PM
Bahut shukriya Bhusan jee zarra nawaazi ka.
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Bohot.......bohot.....aacche
Behad umda peshkash
Daad kubul farmayen
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Iss duniya meN meri, pehchaan sharaafat hai
Duniya ke rasmoN se, anjaan meri duniya
Allah ka banda huN, Allah se nisbat hai
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