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18th September 2004, 06:14 AM
Namaskaar...
Bus jazzbaaton ke umadhne se, shabd beh nikle...aur kuch yoon likha gaya...aap sabki nazar karti hoon...dhanyavaad... ‘Apni Jaan’ ik baar kaho tum Kyun udaas ho tum Yun pareshaan ho tum Dedo mujhe ranj O ghum Bus khush raho tum Rahe *kalpit khushi meri Paao jo chaaho tum Tumse haarti rahoon mein Mujhse Jeet te raho tum Chahe na raho paas par Duur jaane ka na kaho tum Chupa loon nazar O dil mein ‘Apni Jaan’ ik baar kaho tum Bus nibhate rahein chaahat Chahe na hamare raho tum Tumhari khushi se khush ‘Paras’ Muskurate nazar aate raho tum *in imagination gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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18th September 2004, 06:32 AM
 nice simple peom... keep sharing more gud stuff... khush rahyey... |
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18th September 2004, 09:03 AM
Paras ji....good morning..
jaise daily suraj ka nikalna lazmi hai aise hi mera bhi tumari post per aana lazmi hai...ha.n ho sakta hai kabhi kabhi kaale baadlo (business) me suraj na dikh paye aur udas yaha na aa paye...magar kabhi...kabhi.... paras ji bakhoobi sajaya hai shabdo me aapne apne zazbaato ko...main mehsoos kar sakti hu aapka pyar us apne k liye...samajh sakti hu uska aapki zindgi me hona na hona kya mayne rakhta hai...rab(god) se dua rahegi ki vo aapki zindgin me u hi samaya rahe...apke khayalo me...apke man me...apke armano ko u hi sazata rahe... aapke kalaam se ek gaane ki kaliya yaad aa raha hai..umeed hai tumhe pasand aayengi.. Kabhi..kabhi mere dil me khyal aata hei k jaise tum mujhe chahoge umer bhar u hi.. uthegi meri taraf pyar ki nazer u hi... Main jaanti hu ki tum gair ho...magr u hi.. kabhi kabhi mere dil me khyal aata hai.. inhi shabdo k saath izazet chahungi...aur meri daad kabool jaroor kijiyega....pls.. udas.. ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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18th September 2004, 10:25 AM
Paras ji...
Pyaar kya hota hai.. aapki ye rachna bakhoobi keh gayi.. jab kisi se aap jee jaan se pyaar karein.. to uski khushi ke saamne, apni khushi maayne nahi rakhti.. ya ye kahiye ki uski kushi me hi hum khush hote hain.. gar apne dil ki har khwaahish puuri ho, magar WO khush nahi, to kahaan muskuraa paate hain hum? Bohat khoob! chhoTe chhoTe ashaar.. gehre gehre jazbaat.. sadgi me lipTi khubsoorti...Dil ko chhuu gayi aapki ye rachna.. Yunhi likhte rahiyega.. |
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18th September 2004, 12:09 PM
Paras.....
bohot achhe.............. khoob kahi tumne apni baat................ yun hii likhti rahoo....apni kalpnaa kii udaaN ko aasmaa jagah de na sahii alfaaZ mai piiRotii rahanaa.............prathnaa karnaa..sab kushal hoo.... Sanju!!!! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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18th September 2004, 12:19 PM
HI Paras Ji,
Bohot khubi say pyaar ka matlab utara hai apney is rachna mein. Dil mein ghar kar gaya aapka ek ek lafz. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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Re: ‘Apni Jaan’ ik baar kaho tum -
18th September 2004, 12:57 PM
WAH
KYA BAAT HAI PAARS bahooot hi sundar khayalat hai, itne naazuk jazbaaton ko tum jaisa hi hunarmand shaksh is naazuki se pesh kar sakta hai,,,bahoot khoon,,,Jagjeet Kaur ka gaya ek geet yaad aa gaya.. "tum apna ranj o gam apni pareshaani mujhe de do,,tumhe gam ki kasam yeh dil yeh veerani mujhe de do" hamari daad kubool kijiye,,,,sada khush rahiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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18th September 2004, 05:00 PM
Kyun udaas ho tum
Yun pareshaan ho tum Dedo mujhe ranj O ghum Bus khush raho tum Rahe *kalpit khushi meri Paao jo chaaho tum Tumse haarti rahoon mein Mujhse Jeet te raho tum Chahe na raho paas par Duur jaane ka na kaho tum Chupa loon nazar O dil mein ‘Apni Jaan’ ik baar kaho tum Bus nibhate rahein chaahat Chahe na hamare raho tum Tumhari khushi se khush ‘Paras’ Muskurate nazar aate raho tum Paras, Another wonderful piece of work.. Simple Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th September 2004, 05:04 PM
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18th September 2004, 05:10 PM
yun udaas ho tum
Yun pareshaan ho tum Dedo mujhe ranj O ghum Bus khush raho tum Rahe *kalpit khushi meri Paao jo chaaho tum Paras, A really wonderful work once again.. Really simple yet so touching.. Rahe *kalpit khushi meri Paao jo chaaho tum Tumse haarti rahoon mein Mujhse Jeet te raho tum Wah! Kya baat kahi hai yahan par to tumne.. I really loved these lines... Bus nibhate rahein chaahat Chahe na hamare raho tum Tumhari khushi se khush ‘Paras’ Muskurate nazar aate raho tum Beautiful thought! I just loved this post of urs Paras... This is really so good.... Do keep writing such wonderful things.... Tc n Keep Smiling always Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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18th September 2004, 07:01 PM
Paras ji..
Bahoot hi khoobsoorat..aur shaalin... Bikul aap ke dil ki tarah.. behad pasand aaya.. Pyaar sirf paane ka hi tou naam nahi hai.. Pyaar tou dene ka naam hai aur aap ne apne is ehsaas ko yahaaN apne lafzoN se sazaakar pesh kiya hai.. Yun hi iss mehfil ko pane qalam ki roshni se roshan rakhiye.. Taareef qabul kijiye.. Mayank |
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18th September 2004, 09:02 PM
Hello parasji
kaise hia aap? vaise to aap ka likha bahote bare pada hia lakine kabhi kuache kaha nahi.lakine aje kehte hia vaise to tarife jitni kare kame hia. abe take nahi kaha use ke liye mafe magte hai bahote hi aacha aure simple likha hia vary nice. shidha dil ko chu gaya. Mushkan |
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19th September 2004, 05:25 PM
Usman sahib...
meri post pe aane ka, use padhne ka bahut bahut shukriyaa... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th September 2004, 05:33 PM
Haan tau Udas...
ab tum meri post pe na aao yeh kaise ho? mujhe intezzar jo hota hai tumhari reply ka...aise lagta hai jaise tum mere kalaam mein chippi uski rooh ko pehchaanti ho... tumhari dua sar aankhon par...log milte hain log bichadte hain...kuch dil mein reh jaate hain... yeh gaana bhi bahut achha tumne likha...shayad yeh waali panktiyaan meine kabhi suni nahi...waise gana suna hua hai... Kabhi..kabhi mere dil me khyal aata hei k jaise tum mujhe chahoge umer bhar u hi.. uthegi meri taraf pyar ki nazer u hi... Main jaanti hu ki tum gair ho...magr u hi.. kabhi kabhi mere dil me khyal aata hai.. ab tum dost ho tau shukriya kisliey...bus tum aati raho...mera haq banta hai...lol... apna khayaal rakhna paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th September 2004, 05:40 PM
Afshan...
aapko yeh saada sa kalaam mera pasand aaya...tau zaroor achha hee likha hoga maine... jee bilkul theek kaha aapne...jab pyaar dukhi ho tau kuch bhi man ko nahin bhaata...inhi jazzbaton ko lekar likhne ki ichaa thee... yahan aane ke liye tahe dil shukrguzaar hoon... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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20th September 2004, 05:14 PM
Paras aapne alag likha hai....apne bhari bharkam andaaz se alag halke fulke...andaaz me...aapko parhna hamesha hi ek sukhad anubhav hota hai....
aaj bhi beshaq dard ka ehsaas likha hai...per bahut pasanad aaya... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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20th September 2004, 09:17 PM
paras ji... namaskar
aaj pehli baar aapke kisi kalam pe reply kar raha hun abhi naya hi hun yahan... par janta hun aap yahan star shayar ho... pehle bhi pade aapke kayi kalam par kisi na kisi wajah se rply nahi kar paya.. ye bhi maine kal hi padh liya tha par rply aaj kar paa raha hun... behad sundar aur simple aksharon main aapne apne dil ke jazbaton ko rakha hai.... daad dounga to chota muh badi bat ho jayyegi.... par tareef kabool kare .... apne aap ko mitana chahta hun ... dil ko jalana chahta hun... tu bas ek bar mujhe apna keh de... marne se pehle ek bar mukana chahta hun.... apna khayal rakhiyega .... bohat acche se Saccha_(ŻĄŻ)_Pyar---»(kunal) har dil main SACCCHA_PYAR hota hai... phir kyun chup ke KUNAL tu rota hai .... |
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Re: ‘Apni Jaan’ ik baar kaho tum -
21st September 2004, 01:26 AM
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Pyar aur mohabaat ke ehsaas se mehak raha hai har lafz.. behad khoobsoorat!!.. yun hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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21st September 2004, 04:28 AM
yun hii likhti rahoo....apni kalpnaa kii udaaN ko aasmaa jagah de na sahii alfaaZ mai piiRotii rahanaa.............prathnaa karnaa..sab kushal hoo.... Sanju!!!! koshish karti rahoongi Sanjoo... aur sunaao tum kaise ho...meri shubhkaamnayein tumhare aur tumhare parivaar ke liye hain...wahan jaa kar khuub tarrakki karo...khuub dhan daulat banao aur udhaao...lol sab kushal hee hoga...vishwaas hai mujhe... ------------------- Hello Candyboy... aapko hamara kalaam pasand aaya...hamein behad khushi huyi...humne tau bus pyaar hamare liye kya hai use bayan kiya...shukriya daad dene kaa...hope to see you soon... --------------------- Priye Manoj.... tumhare aane se mujhe jaise ek mahir shayar se shabaashi mil jaati hai.... "tum apna ranj o gam apni pareshaani mujhe de do, tumhe gam ki kasam yeh dil yeh veerani mujhe de do" Bahut sundar hain yeh panktiyaan...I thought Jagjit kaur is a punjabi singer, isnt she? baki ki bhi ghazal mil sakti hai kya...? yahin post kar dena agar tumhare paas ho tau... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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21st September 2004, 04:53 AM
Hey Pulkit...
simple sa jawaab for simple see shayri...bahut khuub! take care... ------------------ Meena ji... kabhi tau maun tod diya karein aap is zarre ke liye bhi... ----------------- Arre waah! Pulkit itna pasand aaya tumhein...how very lucky for my kalaam... do(2) do(2) daads woh bhi Pulkit se....wow! Achha yeh batao kaunsi post pe tumne yeh nahi kaha....'I love this post of urs' lol...make up your mind, already...which one do you pick... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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21st September 2004, 05:01 AM
Namaskaar Mayank...
Bahoot hi khoobsoorat..aur shaalin... Bikul aap ke dil ki tarah.. behad pasand aaya.. Pyaar sirf paane ka hi tou naam nahi hai.. Pyaar tou dene ka naam hai aur aap ne apne is ehsaas ko yahaaN apne lafzoN se sazaakar pesh kiya hai.. Really very sweet of you to say all that...aapko kalaam pasand aaya tau hamara likhna aaj phir safal hua...Jee pyaar paane ka hi naam tau nahin hai, phir bhi paane kee laalsa kam kahan hoti hai? Daad ke liye shukriyaa...apna khayal rakhieyga ------------------- Mushkaan ji... aap pehli baar hamari post pe aayin...hamare liye muskaan aa gayi dard mein bhi...aapko kuch achha lage ya na...padhti zaroor rehna...shukriya... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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21st September 2004, 05:04 AM
apne aap ko mitana chahta hun ...
dil ko jalana chahta hun... tu bas ek bar mujhe apna keh de... marne se pehle ek bar muskurana chahta hun.... Waah! Kya khuub hamare kalaam ko aage badhaaya hai aapne...kunal...sorry maine 'mukana' ko 'muskurana' kar diya...shayad yahi kehna chahte thhe yahan aap...but correct me if it is not right...aur hamein 'star' bataane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...lekin humse kahin jyaada hunarmand shayar hain yahan...aap unhein zaroor padhein... Aur kunal aap hamari or se apne avtaar ke liye daad kabuul kijiey...such a happy go lucky pirouetting elephant...felt like dancing along with him...i watched it several moments and it brought a smile to my face... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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21st September 2004, 09:47 AM
Paras ji...Namaskaar...
Lol jab tak main pahunchi...ap offline ho gayi...aapke pm per gayi to vaha mail box full hai...offffffffffffoooooo bahut pareshani hoti hai...jab itna kuchh likha jaye aur baad me pata chale mail box full hai...aisa mehsoos hota hai...jaise kisi naachte hua bacche ko kheech k chaata maar diya ho aur uske face fir dekhne laayek hota hai...aisa hi kuchh mera haal hota hai...jab itna likh kar jawab milta hai mail box bhara hua hai..bari koft hoti hai.... anyways.......ffffffuuuuuuuuuuu lol is baat ko me fu kar k ura deti hoo aur aage barti hu aapke resp. per.. paras meri behen mujhe bhi...mujhe bhi intzal lehta hai na tumala...meli post pal bhi aao na...pleed....pls... are bhai kaise nahi pehchanungi kalaam me chhipi ruh ko...akhir main bhi to jab par rahi hoti hu...usi dard ko apne ander mehsoos jo kar rahi hoti hu....kehte hai na...ghayal ki gati ghayal jane...aur pars ki gati paras jaane...ha.ha.ha..means main.....bhai.. are bhai ye kabhi-kabhi wala gana pura sunna hai to hindi-urdu wale forum per jao aur kadeer ji ka thread hai..kabhi kabhi mere dil me khayal aata hai...pura gana likha hai...ek-ek shabd ander ghus jaata hai..paro to jaano.....? aur dekho jab mujhe kisi pe bahut pyar aata hai to main use baccha ya beta kehti hu...isliye.....kehti hu....bacche...mere bacche bilkul jaroorat nahi hai formality karne ki means thanx kehne ki... ha.n itni formality jaroor karna ki meri thread per aaya karo varna maine socha hai ki ab likhna-wikhna sab chhor du....yaar koi seriously leta hi nahi meri post ko....2-4 resp. mil jaate hai...bus....yaar tassalli nahi hoti na....bahut khoon peene ki bahut gandi aadat jo daal gaya...vo....sanjoo....aur kaun.... achha lamba ho gaya na reply....chalti hu... ok bye....take care...bas khush raho...khush raho..aur bahut khush raho...urs-udas Quote:
 ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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22nd September 2004, 06:25 PM
Parastaar G Adaab,
Kafi kalaam aise hain jise paDhne se mehroom reh gaya... aapka yeh kalaam bhi meri masrufiyat ka shikaar hote hote reha aur jab paDha to laga ke iss kalaam par gar tagaful ka patthar rakh deta to shaayad ek masoom nanhi si jaan lene ke baraabar hota.. bohot khuubsurat likha hai aapne......khaas kar yeh jhumlaat ... Rahe *kalpit khushi meri Paao jo chaaho tum Tumse haarti rahoon mein Mujhse Jeet te raho tum inhe paDh kar kuch aisa mehsoos hota hai, jaise ek patthar dil shaks ke saamne koi deewani, dabbdabaayee aankheN liye use dua de rahi hai... aur woh us pagli ke chupp hote hi ek halki si muskurahat ke saath....peeth dikha kar chaala jaata hai..iss baat par bhi woh khush ho jaati hai............ likhte rahiyega.... Talib. |
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22nd September 2004, 09:40 PM
Priye Priyaa,
well ek baar mein keh diyaa...it is a nice tongue twister nahin...tum kaisee ho...chalo yahin mulaqaat ho jaati hai...tumhein pasand aaya...khushi huyi...apna khayal rakhna... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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22nd September 2004, 09:42 PM
Udaas...
i m so sorry...believe me...main ab ki baar zaroor tumhari post pe reply karoongi...pehli fursat pe hee...tumhein tau malum hai na meri problem aajkal...but haan tum bahut achhi ho...muaaf kar hee dogi meri iss gustaakhi ko... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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22nd September 2004, 09:43 PM
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yeh to bachpan se sunti hun.. jab mein 1st mein thi.. to meri teahcer mujhe "he priye" keh ke bulaati thi.. 2nd mein hui thi.."Priye Priya.." aur har saal hi.. nayi teacher kuch naya saath laga ke kehti.. lolz... ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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22nd September 2004, 10:01 PM
inhe paDh kar kuch aisa mehsoos hota hai, jaise ek patthar dil shaks ke saamne koi deewani, dabbdabaayee aankheN liye use dua de rahi hai... aur woh us pagli ke chupp hote hi ek halki si muskurahat ke saath....peeth dikha kar chaala jaata hai..iss baat par bhi woh khush ho jaati hai............ likhte rahiyega.... Talib Sahib.... lagta hai ki aapko yeh self sacrificing hindustaani aurat kee tasveer bahut bhaati hai...hai na? mere hisaab se yeh kamzori hai humaari...haan jee bilkul aap kaise tagaful aashna ho jaate...? hamne bahut naraaz hona thaa...ki dekho humne itna achha likha aur aapne daad nahin dee... waise jo aapne yeh tasveer kheinchi hai na...dabdabaayi aankhein...aur pathar dil shaks kee...hamein apne hee avtaar kee yaad dilaati hai...lol...aur Priye Manoj ne bataaya ki is tasveer ka naam 'pujaran' hai...yani 'parastaar' hai na taajub kee baat...? lekin yeh jo peeth dikhaane wali baat hai na...hamein bilkul pasand nahin aayi...yeh shakhs aise kyun hote hain...i think they don't know what is good for them... aapke jawaab ka hamesha intezzar rehta hai...kabhi kabaar zehmat kar liya karein...koyi harj nahin... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Re :Apni jaan ek baar kaho tum. |
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Re :Apni jaan ek baar kaho tum. -
25th September 2004, 07:59 PM
paras meri behan
lafzi takraar khoob hai is tehreer mein. God bless you. musharrafhusain |
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very sweet composition |
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very sweet composition -
25th September 2004, 09:04 PM
Namaskar Paras
Aapke Rachna padee bahut khoob likha hay aapne.Aapne motiyon se Lafzon mein apnee rachna ko piroya hay.tooo..........good.Aapke itney pyari kavita dekh bahut accha laga.bahut pyare lafz hain. Sada kush rahiye |
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Re: Re :Apni jaan ek baar kaho tum. -
26th September 2004, 01:32 PM
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Bus keh dete na...yeh kya bekaar ki tukbandi kee hai tumne paras...lol...jabardasti lafzi takraar is tehreer kee kehna zaroori tau nahin thaa...par aap bhai hai...dil nahin todna chahte...haan jaanti hoon... meri muskurahat nahin ruk rahi...lol... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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26th September 2004, 01:34 PM
Sukanya jee...
aap apna qeemti waqt nikaal yahan aayin aur mere likhne ko saraaha...tahe dil se aapki aabhaari hoon...shukriyaa bahut bahut... paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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