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मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ (revised version)
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fir se ek koshish ki hai
jab baki logon ki creation phadta hoon to smjh mai hi nahi atta hai ki itni gherai knha se leyate hai log apne alfazoon mai
meri bas koshish hai ki apni soch ko lafzoon mai kaid kar sakoon
roman hindi ke liye sorry usme typing mere liye bhut mushkil hai


मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ

मै अँधेरे मै जलते बुझते रौशनी का परवाना हूँ
हर पल एक सादगी की शमा पे मरता हूँ

मै लबों से निकलती
अधूरी बात का मुज्मा हूँ
हर पल खामोश आँखों से नाश-औ-नुमा कहता हूँ

मै मुझे ढूढते मेरे हमसफ़र का निशाँ हूँ
हर पल पा ले मुझे इसी उम्मीद मे रहता हूँ

मै तेरे दर की चोखट का सवाली हूँ
हर पल कासाह-ऐ-गदाई लिए तुझसे सवाल करता हूँ

मै एतिमादे इलाही का मसरूर मुसल्सिलाह हूँ
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मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
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7th December 2010, 09:05 AM

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fir se ek koshish ki hai
jab baki logon ki creation phadta hoon to smjh mai hi nahi atta hai ki itni gherai knha se leyate hai log apne alfazoon mai
meri bas koshish hai ki apni soch ko lafzoon mai kaid kar sakoon
roman hindi ke liye sorry usme typing mere liye bhut mushkil hai


मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ

मै अँधेरे मै जलते बुझते रौशनी का परवाना हूँ
हर पल एक सादगी की शमा पे मरता हूँ

मै लबों से निकलती
अधूरी बात का मुज्मा हूँ
हर पल खामोश आँखों से नाश-औ-नुमा कहता हूँ

मै मुझे ढूढते मेरे हमसफ़र का निशाँ हूँ
हर पल पा ले मुझे इसी उम्मीद मे रहता हूँ

मै तेरे दर की चोखट का सवाली हूँ
हर पल कासाह-ऐ-गदाई लिए तुझसे सवाल करता हूँ

मै एतिमादे इलाही का मसरूर मुसल्सिलाह हूँ
हर पल
तेरी इबाबत मै नामूरोदे-ज़फ़ा सहता हूँ

मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ


janaab yasir bhai ko hamaraa pyaar bhara aadaab... janab aapki koshish badee asardaar rahi.. aur aapse ye kisne kah diya ki aapki tahreer me gahraai nahii miyaan is kalaam ke bhi kai sher bahot hi gahrii baat kah gaye hain... Roman hindi likhne se ta-alluq ye hotaa hai ki kai members hamare aise hote hain jinhe hindi nahii aati hai lekin jab aap roman hindii me likhte hain to wo unki nazar me bhi aa jaata hai aur unhe bhi aapko padhne ka mauka miltaa hai.. ummeed kartaa hoon aaage se aap unhe bhi padhne ke mauke dete rahenge..

is ummdaah kalaam ke liye daad haazir hai.. likhte rahen yoonhi.. khush rahen.

shaad...


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fir se ek koshish ki hai
jab baki logon ki creation phadta hoon to smjh mai hi nahi atta hai ki itni gherai knha se leyate hai log apne alfazoon mai
meri bas koshish hai ki apni soch ko lafzoon mai kaid kar sakoon
roman hindi ke liye sorry usme typing mere liye bhut mushkil hai


मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ

मै अँधेरे मै जलते बुझते रौशनी का परवाना हूँ
हर पल एक सादगी की शमा पे मरता हूँ

मै लबों से निकलती
अधूरी बात का मुज्मा हूँ
हर पल खामोश आँखों से नाश-औ-नुमा कहता हूँ

मै मुझे ढूढते मेरे हमसफ़र का निशाँ हूँ
हर पल पा ले मुझे इसी उम्मीद मे रहता हूँ

मै तेरे दर की चोखट का सवाली हूँ
हर पल कासाह-ऐ-गदाई लिए तुझसे सवाल करता हूँ

मै एतिमादे इलाही का मसरूर मुसल्सिलाह हूँ
हर पल
तेरी इबाबत मै नामूरोदे-ज़फ़ा सहता हूँ

मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ

bahut khoob............................................. ..


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janaab yasir bhai ko hamaraa pyaar bhara aadaab... janab aapki koshish badee asardaar rahi.. aur aapse ye kisne kah diya ki aapki tahreer me gahraai nahii miyaan is kalaam ke bhi kai sher bahot hi gahrii baat kah gaye hain... Roman hindi likhne se ta-alluq ye hotaa hai ki kai members hamare aise hote hain jinhe hindi nahii aati hai lekin jab aap roman hindii me likhte hain to wo unki nazar me bhi aa jaata hai aur unhe bhi aapko padhne ka mauka miltaa hai.. ummeed kartaa hoon aaage se aap unhe bhi padhne ke mauke dete rahenge..

is ummdaah kalaam ke liye daad haazir hai.. likhte rahen yoonhi.. khush rahen.

shaad...
bht bhut shukriya hosla afzayii ke liye
roman hindi se apka taluq hai ki english ke allphabet ko use kar ke post kare jaise phele post karte the na ki hindi tywriter font ok tht will not a problem woh to likhna zyada asan hai
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bhai app ek hi comment kyn dete hai maine humesha dekha hai app bas bhut khoob likhte sach bata raha hoon mujhe tareef zayda galtiyon ko batne wala chahye plz agar ho sake to meri kamiyon ko batane ke koshish karye taki mai bhi kuch apne trike ko sudhar sakoon orr mre dil ki baat zyada se zyada logon tak phuch sake


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मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ


Janaab .... bahut umdaa soch ke saath kaha yeh khayal hume bahut pasand aayaa aapkaa.. tamaam tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage ... tahe dil se daad haazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !




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मै समंदर के साहिल की रेत का ज़र्रा हूँ
हर पल एक नयी लहर के साथ बहता हूँ


Janaab .... bahut umdaa soch ke saath kaha yeh khayal hume bahut pasand aayaa aapkaa.. tamaam tehreer ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage ... tahe dil se daad haazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
bhut bhut shukriya naresh bhai
appko achcha laga hume behad taslli mili bhut bhut shukriya
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