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Love ye jo dil ka rishta hai.... - 11th September 2014, 06:44 PM

Alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....



अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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11th September 2014, 07:40 PM

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Alag adaaz me jaise
..........chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me..................
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi.......
This is something more than awesome Madhu ji...bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai...


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11th September 2014, 09:56 PM

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Alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....
I think madhu g..this one is ur best creation....khaas baat ye hain aap dil se likhti hain...aisa lagta hai jaise sb kuch meri aankhon ke saamne hee hua hai..i can feel ur emotions.....ye amazing part hai aapka...dil ka rishta hai aapka aapki poetry se....aru loved it....



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Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....


waahhh! waaahh! waaahhh! Madhu jee,

Aap ka andaaz-e-sukhan bohat hi alag hai,
aur ehsaasat ko jis taraH alfazooN ki shakal meiN
aap nazm tarteeb deti haiN.. waqai qaabil-e-tareef hai..

Bohat si daad iss intehaayi khoobsorat kalaam ke liye...

Likhti rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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12th September 2014, 03:17 PM

Wah Madhuji,

Badi achhi rawani ke saath ehsaasat ko bayaan kiya hai.
Mubarak ho.

eh stanza to bohut touching hai..

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....

Agli peshkash ka intezaar hai

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Boht Umda! - 14th September 2014, 09:57 PM

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alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
Mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
Main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo dil ka rishta hai.....
khoobsoorat khyaalat ka izhaar kia apne boht umda tareeqe se
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Alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....
Madhu Ji,
Every para explains intense feelings..
Very well written..
:-)
wish to read more..
Keep writing..
Take Care..


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Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
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This is something more than awesome Madhu ji...bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai...
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19th September 2014, 07:57 PM

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Alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....

bahot hi ruumani andaaz rahaa aapka Madhu saahiba.....
aur sabse acchii baat mujhe ye lagiii ke aapki kalaam me dheere dheere rawaanii aa rahii hai..... pahle misre ko padhkar flow bahot accha laga mujhe... bas thoda mashq jaarii rakkheN.... Insha Allaah sudhar aata rahega

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'Jo dil ka rishta hai' Madhuji you always amaze me, ye nazm jo aapne likhi hai kaafi revealing hai ek aisi baat hai isme jisse again kahin na kahin mai relate karti hun, aapke ehsaas aur gehri soch hamesha mjhe hypnotise kar dete hain....yunhi likhte rahiye madhuji aapko padhna achcha lagta hai
Thanks a lot..naaz ji..ye nazm mere dil k bahut kareeb hai...
Aur mujhe bahut khushi huyi ki aspko b pasand aayi.....
Bas aise hi apna sath banaye rakhiye...aapke comments. .
Likhne ka ek naya josh dete hain....



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Gehre ehsaasaat liye huwe ek pyaaree nazm !! Dheron daad Madhu ji !


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I think madhu g..this one is ur best creation....khaas baat ye hain aap dil se likhti hain...aisa lagta hai jaise sb kuch meri aankhon ke saamne hee hua hai..i can feel ur emotions.....ye amazing part hai aapka...dil ka rishta hai aapka aapki poetry se....aru loved it....
Bahut bahut shukriya...arvind ji...aapko ehsaas pasand aaye I m glad..jee dil ka rishta to hota hee hai ek poet ka apni poetry se..aapke dil tak mere poem pahunchi....meri khushnaseebi...
Yoon hi sath dete rahein...
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Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....


waahhh! waaahh! waaahhh! Madhu jee,

Aap ka andaaz-e-sukhan bohat hi alag hai,
aur ehsaasat ko jis taraH alfazooN ki shakal meiN
aap nazm tarteeb deti haiN.. waqai qaabil-e-tareef hai..

Bohat si daad iss intehaayi khoobsorat kalaam ke liye...

Likhti rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,
Maaf kijiyega bahut dino me jawaab de rahi hoon hassan jee..
par jis tarah shuruaat se aapne hamesha mera sath diya hai..main dil se aapki shukraguzar hoon...
aate rahein...
khush rahein.....



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Wah Madhuji,

Badi achhi rawani ke saath ehsaasat ko bayaan kiya hai.
Mubarak ho.

eh stanza to bohut touching hai..

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....

Agli peshkash ka intezaar hai

Cheers!
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
bahut shukriya mujeeb sahab....
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Alag adaaz me jaise
kanwal chupke se khilta hai...
Vo aisi ada se mahfil me
sabse milta hai....

Gher leta hai andhera,
shaam ki tanhai satati hai..
Falak pe chamkte chaand sa vo
Tab mujhse aake milta hai...

Dard ankhon me kai
uske bhi samaaye hai..
Mohabbat hi dikhi mujhko
jab bhi hans k milta hai...

Akele thak hi jati main
Gam e zindgi ki rahon me...
Nahi hai hamsafar vo phir bhi
hamesha sang chalta hai....

Uski duniya alag hai,
mere bhi alag hain afsaane...
Dard e Mohabbat ka rang
phir b milta julta hai...

Use tanhai lubhati hai..
mujhe sukoon deti hai khamoshi..
main kahti nahi kuch b
vo sari baatein samjhata hai....

Ise ab naam doon koi
itni kanha samajh mujhme...
Rang sabhi pyare hain iske
ye jo Dil ka rishta hai.....


Dear Madhu Bala....tumhari yeh poetry pad kar etna hi kahungi maiN ki...
Pyar ka dard hai meetha meetha pyara pyara

dil ke rishte bhi ajeeb hote hai...jo nahi mil paate zindgi meiN wahi dil ke kareeb hote hai

bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai pyar ko bhi aur dard ko bhi...khush rho dear


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.....Sunita Thakur.....

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Madhu Ji,
Every para explains intense feelings..
Very well written..
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wish to read more..
Keep writing..
Take Care..
thank u demon prince ji....i wish ki aap fir se meri poetry par zaroor aayein...
bahut arsa hua..aapko yahaan dekhe....

take care...n keep coming....



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11th September 2015, 11:34 AM

Madhu jee

Namaste

Aapko yeh poorani koshish par nazar paDhii..bahot khoob ehsaas... daad ...

Likhte rahiye


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Gehre ehsaasaat liye huwe ek pyaaree nazm !! Dheron daad Madhu ji !
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salamat rahein...



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Dear Madhu Bala....tumhari yeh poetry pad kar etna hi kahungi maiN ki...
Pyar ka dard hai meetha meetha pyara pyara

dil ke rishte bhi ajeeb hote hai...jo nahi mil paate zindgi meiN wahi dil ke kareeb hote hai

bahut khoob bayaan kiya hai pyar ko bhi aur dard ko bhi...khush rho dear
thank you di...sahi kaha aapne...jo nahi milta vo dil ke kareeb hota hai...
ehsason ko samajhne ka shukriya...

sath deti rahiyega...

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bahut hi sunder aur gehre ehsaas pesh kiye hai aapne madhu jee....................


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Namaste

Aapko yeh poorani koshish par nazar paDhii..bahot khoob ehsaas... daad ...

Likhte rahiye


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Wah wah.....superb....

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