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8th March 2009, 03:59 PM
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doston ki dastaan jab waqt sunata hai doston sang bitaya waqt yaad aata hai bhool jate hai hum duniya ki gamon ko jab hume aap jaisa dost yaad aata hai _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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8th March 2009, 08:57 PM
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8th March 2009, 09:17 PM
to keep the beauty & meaning of the thread 'sher ka jawaab sher me.n deejiye', it is requested to all member that, please give reply to 'sher' with a 'sher' only (not with four liners, qitaa, Ghazal, nazm etc etc). I hope all members will cooperate me to maintain beauty and dignity of the site in all level.
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9th March 2009, 02:41 PM
PALKON MEIN CHHUPA KAR YAADON KI,JALTI HUI SHABNAM HANSTE HAIN
AASAAN TO NAHI HAI TERE BINA HANSNA,LEKIN HUM HANSTE HAIN. PRASHANT VASL (from his latest shayri collection:LAUT-TE-HUYE) http://www.bookcafe.in/itemdesc.asp?...445702&eq=&Tp= |
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10th March 2009, 06:07 PM
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jaise humjoli mein me guzra karti thi kabhi......! Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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10th March 2009, 06:19 PM
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is raah-e-muhabbat me.n tuu saath agar hotaa har ghum pe gul khilate Khushbuu kaa safar hotaa [Alam Tab Tashna]  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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10th March 2009, 06:35 PM
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pehle se hi toota hoon, jo chua tune to bikhar jaoonga...!!!! Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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10th March 2009, 06:41 PM
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yun khoye teri yaad mein ki khud ko bhula dia jaise ke hum ko khud say koi waastaa na ho "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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10th March 2009, 09:32 PM
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"jab te teri bahho.n ka sahara milla hai, khuda ko sajda karna hum bhool gaye" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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10th March 2009, 10:21 PM
aye khuda aankhon ko kuch aisi khudai de,
jidher daikhu udher wohee dikhai de, kaash aisa asar ho jaye aaj hawa main, ki unn ko pukaru aur sirf unhi ko dikhai de..... |
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11th March 2009, 11:20 AM
Hey.........................Rinksssss....
You just have to write Two lines......  (Wo dikhai dikhai baad mein... Line likho sirf do...) |
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11th March 2009, 02:57 PM
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E-KHUDA aaj ankho ko kuchh aisi BEENDAAI de.... Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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gairon se kaha tumne, gairon se suna tumne kabhi humse bhi kuch kehte, kabhi humse bhi kuch sunte.. nm |
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12th March 2009, 04:51 PM
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khuda hai mera DOST aur usi ki di hui zindagi hai, Mera jeena,mera mera,her SAANS uski bandagi hai, woh aur honge jo pyaar ko farokhtt kerte hai, mein hu ishq uska woh meri tishnagi hai................................kkkhantahir Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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12th March 2009, 05:04 PM
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dost toh kai mil jate hai tanha zindagi mein mang kar dekhenge ik rafeeb bandagi mein _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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12th March 2009, 05:58 PM
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Tu badalta hai to yu be sabab meri ankhain mere hathon ki lakeeron se ulajh jati hain .... nm "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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12th March 2009, 06:19 PM
Tu meri dost mera armaan hai, shayad apni ehmiyat se anjaan hai,
mujhse kabhi rooth kar mat jana, kyunki meri duniya tere bina veeran hai..... ! Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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12th March 2009, 06:25 PM
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Zindagi se bas yahi gilla hai mujhe ae dost tu bohaat dair se mila hai mujhe ae dost.... lamha "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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12th March 2009, 06:33 PM
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Yun shikwe shikayat na kar e mere dost, Ki hum mile to sahi, ye kya kam hai.....! SK Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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12th March 2009, 06:43 PM
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ai dost tum se tark-e- ta'alluq ke baa-vajuud mahasuus kii hai terii zaruurat kabhii kabhii [Sahir Ludhianvi] "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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12th March 2009, 09:56 PM
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koi dost hai na raqeeb hai, tera shaher kitna ajeeb hai, yaha kiska chehra padha karu, yaha sabke sir pe saleeb hai...........nm Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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12th March 2009, 10:39 PM
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"mere hanste chehre par na jana dost, pad kar dekhoge to dard ki ek kitaab hoon maiN" -nm .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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12th March 2009, 10:59 PM
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yeh toh ek parda hai gham e dil chhipane k liye..nm  Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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12th March 2009, 11:04 PM
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parde parde me.n aataab achchhe nahii.n aise a.ndaaz-e-hijaab achchhe nahii.n -Daag Dehlvi .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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"aataab" what it's mean?? |
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"aataab" what it's mean?? -
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isme kuchh parda nasheeno k bhie naaam aate hai..........nm Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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13th March 2009, 11:48 AM
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13th March 2009, 11:56 AM
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parde mein aksar dil fareb huwa karte hai _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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13th March 2009, 04:17 PM
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mein itna bada ohda leker nahi jee sakta mein abhie chhota hu mujhe chhota hi rehne di jiye. bade hone per jimme daari aa jaati hai. waise naarazgi ki wajah samajh mein nahi aayi.  Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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13th March 2009, 04:21 PM
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DIL farebi ka perde se koi ta'alluq hi nahi, humne toh apno mein bhi RAQEEB paaye hai..........kkkhantahir Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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13th March 2009, 07:09 PM
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najane kon se rut main bichar gae wo loog jo apne dil main bohat ehtraam rakhte the nm "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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13th March 2009, 07:20 PM
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Aur apne bachho.n ka achha sa naam rakhte the . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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14th March 2009, 03:44 AM
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aap cool hai thnx 4 correction without it meaning wouldnt be clear in the sher hum duffer hai typing error karte haipliz dont take it wrongly Regards Praneeta Quote:
Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB vo khud pardo mein chupe farebi huwa karte hai _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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14th March 2009, 07:38 PM
Dhunda karte hai jo apno mein hi RAQEEB [/quote]vo khud pardo mein chupe farebi huwa karte hai Pust Housle Wale Tera Saath Kya dange ae 'dost' Idhar Aaja Hum Tujhe panaah denge  ***shifa***Fizaai.n rukti hain raaho.n par,jinse hum guzrai.n ghatayai.n aaj bhi jhuk kar salaam karti hain har shab ye suna hai falak se kuch pariya.n wafa ka chand hamare hi naam karti hain.!!! |
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14th March 2009, 07:41 PM
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AAPKA dil dukha uske liye muaafi, aage se aisa nahi honga,mujhe theek laga isiliye meine aisa kiya. JO doosro ko RAQEEB kaha kerte hai,woh bade badnseeb hua kerte hai, HANS ker dikhate hai FARAAKH DILI, aur dil se gareeb hua kerte hai, FAREB kerne wale toh Ankho se kaajal bhie chura lete hai, jo keh sake kisi ko apna woh toh bade khushnaseeb hua kerte hai.. kkkhantahir Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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14th March 2009, 07:50 PM
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Pust Housle Wale Tera Saath Kya dange ae 'dost' Idhar Aaja Hum Tujhe panaah denge[/quote] theek hai sahab theek hai sambhalo is sher koSEH savaar hi girte hai MAIDAAN-E-JUNG mein, woh tifl kya ladenge jo ghutno k bal chale.............nm(yeh tha aapke sher ka jawaab) aur yeh rahi humaari tareef DAST toh DAST hai DARIYA bhie na chhode humne, BEHR-E-ZULMAT mein dauda diye ghode humne........allama iqbaal sahab. note:BEHER_SAMANDER/and ZULMAT_ANDHERA. yeh meaning nahi batata toh sher sir pe se chala ja ta.  Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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14th March 2009, 07:53 PM
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ye kis ne pukara hai adam itni chah se ehsaas bartari se khuda ho gaya hu main ***shifa***Fizaai.n rukti hain raaho.n par,jinse hum guzrai.n ghatayai.n aaj bhi jhuk kar salaam karti hain har shab ye suna hai falak se kuch pariya.n wafa ka chand hamare hi naam karti hain.!!! |
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14th March 2009, 07:57 PM
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theek hai sahab theek hai sambhalo is sher koSEH savaar hi girte hai MAIDAAN-E-JUNG mein, woh tifl kya ladenge jo ghutno k bal chale.............nm(yeh tha aapke sher ka jawaab) aur yeh rahi humaari tareef DAST toh DAST hai DARIYA bhie na chhode humne, BEHR-E-ZULMAT mein dauda diye ghode humne........allama iqbaal sahab. note:BEHER_SAMANDER/and ZULMAT_ANDHERA. yeh meaning nahi batata toh sher sir pe se chala ja ta. [/quote]hmmmmm......MASHA ALLAH... vo sar khole hamaarii laash par diivaanaavaar aaye isii ko maut kahate haiN to yaa rab baar-baar aaye ''Qamar'' Jalalvi ***shifa***Fizaai.n rukti hain raaho.n par,jinse hum guzrai.n ghatayai.n aaj bhi jhuk kar salaam karti hain har shab ye suna hai falak se kuch pariya.n wafa ka chand hamare hi naam karti hain.!!! |
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14th March 2009, 10:32 PM
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JAB jahan mein tha toh jaha'n mera tha, ab na poonchta hai koi mujhko, kerke supurd-e-khaaq............kkkhantahir Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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22nd March 2009, 08:22 AM
bewafai tum na karoge hamein maloom hai yeh
khaaq ho jayenge ham tumko khabar hone tak.... nm Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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22nd March 2009, 11:01 AM
wafa hi ki hai bewafaai humne kabhie seekhi nahi,
maidhan-e-hashr mein bhie tera peencha na chhodenge...........kkkhantahir Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./ |
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