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ham sunaayeN to kahaani aur hai
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terii bazm-e-tarab men soz-e-pinhaaN leke aayaa huN
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terii aarazuu terii justajuu me.n bhaTak rahaa thaa galii galii
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yeh qafas hii mujhko aziiz hai maiN jii to looNga qaraar se
mujhe ab chaman meN na le chalo maiN Dara huaa hooN bahaar se

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terii aarazuu terii justajuu me.n bhaTak rahaa thaa galii galii
merii daastaa.N terii zulf hai jo bikhar biklhar ke sa.Nvar ga_ii
jyoN tyoN ''Asad'' ko laaye the us kii gali se ham
Khaana_Kharaab raah meiN phir se machal gaya

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justuju jiski thee usko tou na paya humne
is bahanae se magar dekh lee dunia humne

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jyoN tyoN ''Asad'' ko laaye the us kii gali se ham
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yeh qafas hii mujhko aziiz hai maiN jii to looNga qaraar se
mujhe ab chaman meN na le chalo maiN Dara huaa hooN bahaar se


bahaar ayi to jaise ek baar
lauT aaye hain phir adam se
vo Khvaab saare, shabaab saare
jo tere honTon pe mar miTe the
jo miT ke har baar phir jiiye the
nikhar gaye hain gulaab saare
jo terii yaadon se mushkbu hain
jo tere ushshaaq kaa lahu hain

ubal paDe hain azaab saare
malaal-e-ahavaal-e-dostaaN bhi
Khumaar-e-aaGosh-e-mahavashaaN bhii
Ghubaar-e-Khaatir ke baab saare
tere hamaare
savaal saare, javaab saare
bahaar ayi to khul gaye hai.n
naye sire se hisaab saare


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aah ko chaahiye ik umr asar hone tak
kaun jiitaa hai teri zulf ke sar hone tak
un ka vada wafa hoga maana magar
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un ka vada wafa hoga maana magar
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zindagii men to sabhi pyaar kiya karte hain
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us ne kahaa tha pyaar se paagal bas ek baar
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maiN dil kaa dard hooN, kyuN mujh ko le aaya hai aankhoN meiN?
maiN chaahooN bhii to terii chashm-e-tar meiN reh nahiiN saktaa

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Pathther chhipe hai isme ki Moti kise khaber,
Dil toh samandaro se bhi gehre hai DOSTO.................NM

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Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
   
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maiN dil kaa dard hooN, kyuN mujh ko le aaya hai aankhoN meiN?
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raat bhar deeda e namnaak mein lehraate rahe
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Dhundhh ujhrahe hue logon men vafaa ke motii
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apnee ankhon ke samandar mein utar jaane de mujhe
tera mujrim hon dub ke mar jaanae de mujhe

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gali gali meri ruswayion ka saathi ho

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vo mere naam ki nicbat se mautabar thehre
gali gali meri ruswayion ka saathi ho


Maham ji, aapkos sher ke jawaab mein sher likhna hai aur apna sher post karne ke baad kisi doosre member ke jawaab ka intzaar karna karna, aap ek saath 2 sher post nahi kar sakte.

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"kaun yaad karta hai kisi ko umr bhar,
waqt ke saath doondle se chehre b bhool jate haiN"
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Maham ji, aapkos sher ke jawaab mein sher likhna hai aur apna sher post karne ke baad kisi doosre member ke jawaab ka intzaar karna karna, aap ek saath 2 sher post nahi kar sakte.

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"kaun yaad karta hai kisi ko umr bhar,
waqt ke saath doondle se chehre b bhool jate haiN"
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Maham ji, aapkos sher ke jawaab mein sher likhna hai aur apna sher post karne ke baad kisi doosre member ke jawaab ka intzaar karna karna, aap ek saath 2 sher post nahi kar sakte.
Hazur, mein ne mukhtalif posters ke ashaar ke javab mein ashaar kahe hein , na ke apne hee sher ke baad sher pe sher post kiye hein ,

anywayz that made sense to me and besides that bas jiske sher parhe zehan mein jaavab aye aur mein likhtee gayee aur mere khayal mein buahat khub javab diye hein jinse mein khud hee bauhat lutfandoz hoee , kher if it does nt make sense to u that i posted replies to different coupltes than U RE THE LAST WORD cuz its ur forum, , ho sakta hei yehe rule ho is larhi ka jis se mein naawaaqif thee ,

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Hazur, mein ne mukhtalif posters ke ashaar ke javab mein ashaar kahe hein , na ke apne hee sher ke baad sher pe sher post kiye hein ,

anywayz that made sense to me and besides that bas jiske sher parhe zehan mein jaavab aye aur mein likhtee gayee aur mere khayal mein buahat khub javab diye hein jinse mein khud hee bauhat lutfandoz hoee , kher if it does nt make sense to u that i posted replies to different coupltes than U RE THE LAST WORD cuz its ur forum, , ho sakta hei yehe rule ho is larhi ka jis se mein naawaaqif thee ,

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maiN bhii ''Maham'' saahiba kii baat se ittefaaq rakhta hooN....muKhtalif ash'aar ka jawaab ek saath dene meN mujhe ko_ii harz nahiiN lagtaa....baaqi intezaamiya-e-bazm ka hukm sar-aaNkhoN par...

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25th August 2009, 01:20 PM
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aap kii yaad aati rahii raat bhar!
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zindagi jeene ke liye to ik pal hi kafi hai
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jeene ki aarzoo meiN mare ja rahe haiN log,
marne ki aarzoo meiN jiye ja raha hooN maiN

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tere aane ka dhoka sa raha hai
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raat ke sannaaTe meN ham ne kya-kya dhoke khaaye haiN
apnaa hi jab dil dhaRhka, ham samjhe woh aaye haiN

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raat ke sannaaTe meN ham ne kya-kya dhoke khaaye haiN
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dil dhadakne ka sabab yaad aaya
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aisa gum hooN teri yadooN kay biya_banoN meN
dil na dhaRhke to sunaii nhiiN detaa kuchh bhii

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aisa gum hooN teri yadooN kay biya_banoN meN
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waqt-e-ruksat nala-e-dil aisi sada dene lage
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waqt-e-ruksat nala-e-dil aisi sada dene lage
sunne wale raat katne ki dua dene lage
raat baaqii thii jab wo bichhRhe they
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mai jahannam ki dua karta hu kuch is tar;ah
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aadat hii banaa lii hai tum ne to ''Muniir'' apnii
jis shahar meN bhii rahna uktaaye hue rahnaa

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tumhare shahar ka mausam bada suhana lage
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maiN khule dar ke kisii ghar ka hooN saamaaN pyaare
too dabe paaoN kabhii aa ke churaa le mujh ko

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