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20th April 2010, 03:50 PM
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MASHALLAH!!!!...kya khoobsurat sher kaha hai aapne baagi saheb.. Kisne loota khushi se hameiN, kaun dey gaya hameiN yeH gham Kisne dee ummedeiN humein, kaun kar gaya yeH ankh nam...nm Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Jo anjaam ke liye sochna -
20th April 2010, 04:01 PM
Jo anjaam ke liye sochna bhi nahi chahate hai
fir kya pahchaan hogi teri duniya ki nazar me. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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20th April 2010, 10:58 PM
Dil dard ki intehaan se tadap raha hia kwahish
Na woh ishq ka zaher dete, na yeh haal hua hota 
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Saath dete jaao -
21st April 2010, 06:43 AM
Saath dete jaao zindagi kaa kaam aaye ya na aaye
uske gam ki koi had nahi jo tumhare saamne muskuraye. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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22nd April 2010, 12:37 AM
Zindagii ko kareeb se dekho
Iska chehra tumhe rula dega ............... Not Mine 
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(#3526)
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22nd April 2010, 01:36 PM
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 kya hua sameer ji?????Pm maaro agar koi baat ho to... zindagi ka chehra chahe kitna bhi bhayanak ho... Zindagi ko chhornaa aasaan nahi hota... Agar zindagi se yu dukhi hota buland... To Dosto k Dilo me tera makaaan nahi hota.... Bade dino baad kuch likha aaj... Aur shayad theek thaak likh diya   |
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22nd April 2010, 04:39 PM
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 Munkeen hi nahi karna zindagi tafsira tera tu hi bata de is pe hai kya mashwara tera
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22nd April 2010, 04:51 PM
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tafsira bole to ???'khudii ko kar Buland itnaa.. K har taqdeer se pehle... Khuda bande se khud puuche... Bata teriii razaa kya hai .....  ( nm ) |
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22nd April 2010, 04:55 PM
Yee looo.....
Zidd ji ab us writer ko pakad k gudgudi karenge shayad |
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22nd April 2010, 04:57 PM
bhai itna besura sher kiska hai ye janna chahta tha........koi proper shayar to aisa likhne se raha
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(#3532)
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22nd April 2010, 05:05 PM
Its not fair zidd ji....
wo sher mera tha aapne mujhe besura kyu bola?? Ab aap koi sura sher pesh karo to jaanu.... |
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22nd April 2010, 05:29 PM
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aap galat mat sochiye....waise apna sher aap kisi ko dijiye nahi...khas kar sameer ko |
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22nd April 2010, 06:22 PM
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aap bhi khoob ho mohtaraam zidd ji.. Matlab mera tha... to achha ho gaya aur sameer ka tha... to besura... waise ye mujhe bhi nahi pata k kiska tha... Aap sameer ko ched rahe they aur mai aapko... I mean ched nahi raha tha aapko... Bass aise he mazzaak kar raha tha.. Khair ab guftagu zyada ho gayi shayad.. Ek sher maar du nahi to kha m kha.....  Haan to arz hai..... Irshaad to bolo yaar.... Koi ni... Mai bina irshaad k he maar deta hu... Boy: bewafa tere pyaar me barbaad ho gaya... Teri yaad me jal jal k raakh ho gaya... Girl: e yaar teri kurbaani bekaar na jayegi... Wo raakh bhej de, bartan dhone k kaam aayegi... [/b][/color] |
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(#3535)
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Jara hosh-e-hasrat -
22nd April 2010, 09:23 PM
Jara hosh -e-zameer ki hasrat se aake mila karo
Gar hai irada nek to insaaniyat dil me rakha karo. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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(#3536)
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22nd April 2010, 10:30 PM
kehte kuch aur hain.... karte kuch aur hain.....
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zindagi -
23rd April 2010, 07:09 AM
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23rd April 2010, 02:08 PM
Zidd sahab main nahi tha to aap khinchai karne ke mood mein the...
Chaliye dekhte hai aaj koun kiski khinchai karta hai........ Aap bhi online ho aur main bhi..... to baat hai ! hai Naa ........ Quote:
Leti hai woh aaj bhi mera naam kabhi kabhi ...................... mine
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(#3539)
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23rd April 2010, 03:12 PM
Tark-e-talluqaat peh roya na tuu na main
par uske baad chain se soya na tuu na main......nm . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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Mai bana lunga -
23rd April 2010, 04:09 PM
Mai bana lunga khud ko meel ka patthar ek din tere liye
zindagi ke rasto ka hisaab to mil jayega ek din tere liye. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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Na jaane kab |
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Na jaane kab -
24th April 2010, 03:35 PM
Na jaane kab badalega insaan apni soch ko
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24th April 2010, 04:01 PM
zhinga lala hurrr hurrr
Hum bewafaaa.... Hargiz na they.... Par hum wafaaaa... Kar na sake..... Hurrrr hurrrrr |
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Zindagi ki surat dekhanewale |
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Zindagi ki surat dekhanewale -
24th April 2010, 08:59 PM
Zindagi ki surat dekhanewale
jara meri had to bata ke jaa ek baar mil is kadar aake mujhe aur ek naya rasata bata ke jaa. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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25th April 2010, 10:40 AM
Na jane kaunsi fehmi hai logo ko....
Chalte-2 raasta bhool jate hain.... Talashte rehte hain kisi chehre ko... Aur Khud ki he pehchaan bhool jate hain.... |
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Maine dekhi hai rangat |
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Maine dekhi hai rangat -
25th April 2010, 03:51 PM
Maine dekhi hai rangat duniya ki tumhe abhi pata kya hai
Paala pada nahi hai tera abhi zindagi se puch khata kya hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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25th April 2010, 05:43 PM
Tamaam umra tera intazaar karr lenge...
Magar ranj ye hai k zindagi kam hai.... (nm) |
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Teri haqqiqat kya |
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Teri haqqiqat kya -
25th April 2010, 07:04 PM
Teri haqqiqat kya khul gayi meri nazar ke saamne
kaise jhukata hua chalaa aaya vo mujhko hi thamne. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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26th April 2010, 11:43 AM
raja ko sab jante hain,isiliye wo raja hua karta hai... Jo chup chup k jeeta hai,wo dagabaaz hua karta hai... Jo auro ko gira k uuncha ho wo neta ... Aur jo gire huo ko thaamke uuncha ho wo pra'n'eta hua karta hai... |
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26th April 2010, 02:33 PM
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yeh sher Sudarshan Faakir sahab ka hai... unki ghazal 'Aadmi Aadmi ko kya degaa, jo bhi degaa khuda degaa..... Mera qatil he mera munsib hai, kya mere haq mai faisla degaa...' I am not a poet and dont write my self but i am passionate about poetry and will post the sher that i like... aur kahin per sar ko jhukaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. tu chahhey to bhar de daata tu chahhey toh khaali rakh, aur kahin daaman phailaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. aankh utthakar main na dekhoon jiss se mera dil na mile, sab se rasman haath milaana mere bas ki baat nahi.... |
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26th April 2010, 02:55 PM
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chadhai per qamar sab ko jhuka kar chadhana padta hai... gumon ki dhoop main bhi muskura ke chalna padta hai, ye duniya hai yahan chehra saja kar chalna padta hai..... aur kahin per sar ko jhukaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. tu chahhey to bhar de daata tu chahhey toh khaali rakh, aur kahin daaman phailaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. aankh utthakar main na dekhoon jiss se mera dil na mile, sab se rasman haath milaana mere bas ki baat nahi.... |
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26th April 2010, 04:23 PM
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welcome to Sdc Sanjeev saheb............... Yeh rahi poori ghazal... Aadmii aadmii ko kyaa degaa jo bhii degaa vahii Khudaa degaa meraa qaatil hii meraa munsib hai kyaa mere haq mein faislaa degaa zindagii ko khariib se dekho iska chehraa tumhen rulaa degaa hamse puchho dostii kaa silaa dushmanoN kaa bhii dil hilaa degaa ishq kaa zehar pii liyaa 'Faakir' ab masiihaa bhii kyaa davaa degaa -.Sudarshar Faakir.. Quote:
SDC ka rule hai...jo aapne nahi likha hai uske saath "not mine"..ya "nm" likha kijiye... ummid hai yahaaN aapka safar accha guzrega... YeH To Muhabbat Hai, Kisi Ko Mili Dhoop, To Kisi Ko Chaaya Hai Mehboob Ko Aapka Nahin, Kisi Aur Ka Saath Raas Aaya Hai..NM Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th April 2010, 05:11 PM
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Kya ye lines aapki hain huzooor e wala ? btw .. Aapki entry to ekdam zhakkaazs hui hai... aage dekhte hain, kaha tak saath rehte hain Kuch lines mai b likh deta hu... Btw mai zyadatarr apni lines likhta hu... Kadd ka hisaab mujhse kya karoge janaab... Hum khade khade tubelight laga dete hain.... Aur ghamo me muskura ke jeena... Hum logo ko sikhlaate hain... |
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Zindagi ne he mujhe -
26th April 2010, 07:59 PM
zindagi ne he mujhe aise haalaato me paalaa hai
pahala kadam rakhte he maine hosh sambhala hai. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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26th April 2010, 08:58 PM
Hosh walo ko khabar kya....
Bekhudi kya cheez hai.... Ishq keeje...fir samajhiye... Zindagi kyaa cheez hai.... (nm) |
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zindagi ko samjhne ke -
26th April 2010, 10:33 PM
zindagi ko samjhne ke liye sirf ishq kaafi nahi hai dost
aaj ki duniya daulat aur hunar ke peeche chalti hai dost. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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27th April 2010, 12:50 AM
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sab juda ho jayein lekin gum juda hota nahi... (nm) aur kahin per sar ko jhukaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. tu chahhey to bhar de daata tu chahhey toh khaali rakh, aur kahin daaman phailaana mere bas ki baat nahi.. aankh utthakar main na dekhoon jiss se mera dil na mile, sab se rasman haath milaana mere bas ki baat nahi.... |
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Mere haque me -
27th April 2010, 04:38 PM
Mere haque me kuch nahi tere bas me kuch nahi
kaha se mile nishan zindagi ke is soch me kuch nahi. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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28th April 2010, 06:12 PM
Na maiN pagal huN ,na woh mera Deewana hai
Phir uske bina zindegi kyuN tanha tanha hai ....NM Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Aaj kal ki hawa aise |
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Aaj kal ki hawa aise -
28th April 2010, 09:00 PM
Aaj kal ki hawa aise rukh badalti hai waqt ke saath-saath
matlab pura hua aur karvat badal gayi seerat bhi unki. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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Kashti ka rukh -
29th April 2010, 03:18 PM
Kashti ka rukh hi milta nahi waqt ke saagar me aajkal
saahil bhi tanha sa rahta hai apni khamoshi me aajkal http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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