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aitbaar khud par se to kya khuda se bhi uthh chuka hai
wakt ki karwat ka intezaar karna bhi ek wakt ki baat thi
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waqt waqt ki sab baat hai
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waqt waqt ki sab baat hai
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wakt bhi kam hai or aankh bhi nam hai
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wakt bhi kam hai or aankh bhi nam hai
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nice one
aankh nam hai honth bhi sukhaa hua
tod kar dil poochte hai kya hua
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nice one
aankh nam hai honth bhi sukhaa hua
tod kar dil poochte hai kya hua
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shukriya dost
zidd ye hai larazte labon ke fariyaad mere
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shukriya dost
zidd ye hai larazte labon ke fariyaad mere
naam usi ka aaye jab khuda ki ibaadat karun
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aa dil dukhaane ke liye aa ,kash
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aa dil dukhaane ke liye aa ,kash
mere paas saikDo dil hote
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saikdo dil ki kya jarurat, wo ek baar laut to aaye aakash
zakhmi dil nikaal ke saamne rakh denge unka dil behlaane ko
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saikdo dil ki kya jarurat, wo ek baar laut to aaye aakash
zakhmi dil nikaal ke saamne rakh denge unka dil behlaane ko
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aakaash set nahi hua line me
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aakaash set nahi hua line me
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ok jii koshish karta hun..
saikdo dilon ka pyaar aakash khud me samaaye baitha hai
wo laut ke to aaye hum khud ko hi unke hawaale kar denge
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mai tere dil me rahoon ya teri aankho me rahoon
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Nazar se Nazar ki baaten ho rahi hai
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Nazar se Nazar ki baaten ho rahi hai
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Lagta hai agaz ho raha hai mohabbat ka,
azad paNchhi bhi qaid hone ki dua kar rahe haiN....
"Life laughs at you when you are unhappy...
Life smiles at you when you are happy..
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Life salutes you when you make others happy!!"
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Teri nazar ke parwaaz me bayaan baaki hai
abhi tere yakeen kee asal uadaan baaki hai.
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abhi tere yakeen kee asal uadaan baaki hai.
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bahut sahi kaha aapne..
rehna ajay hi zindagi ka falsafa nahi parwaaz
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bahut sahi kaha aapne..
rehna ajay hi zindagi ka falsafa nahi parwaaz
seekhta wo hi hai jo gir ke uthna jaanta ho
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Nice one .............. akash
Humari haden aakaash talak ajay hai
Hum Parwaaz hai adhure Insaan nahi
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
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Nice one .............. akash
Humari haden aakaash talak ajay hai
Hum Parwaaz hai adhure Insaan nahi
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shukriya ji..
apka sher bhi bahut khoob raha
mumkin nahi koi meri hadon ko bandh sake parwaaz
adhure sapno ko poora karne wala aakash hun main
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Badhne ka dar har seema ko tod deta hai aakash
baagi hai tevar chahat ke jiski jami me nami hai.
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Badhne ka dar har seema ko tod deta hai aakash
baagi hai tevar chahat ke jiski jami me nami hai.
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jis chahat me josh-o-junoon naa ho shamil Ajay,
us mohabbat me fir wo sukoon-o-lazzat kaha......
lamha....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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jis chahat me josh-o-junoon naa ho shamil Ajay,
us mohabbat me fir wo sukoon-o-lazzat kaha......
lamha....
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bahut khoob lamha jee..
mohabbat me junoon se haasil hua kise yahaan lamha
roz hoti hain ibadatein laakhon dil e sukoon paane ko
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25th May 2010, 06:35 PM
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bahut khoob lamha jee..
mohabbat me junoon se haasil hua kise yahaan lamha
roz hoti hain ibadatein laakhon dil e sukoon paane ko
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good one Aakash....
gar karni hai haasil mohabbat aur paana hai mehboob, Aakash
to khel jao apni jaan ki baazi aur lad guzro apne khuda se.....
lamha.................
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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good one Aakash....
gar karni hai haasil mohabbat aur paana hai mehboob, Aakash
to khel jao apni jaan ki baazi aur lad guzro apne khuda se.....
lamha.................
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acha to aisa baat hai.. to lijiye
har lamha usse milne ka gila nahi karta aakash
aankhein band karte hi usey paa leta hun main
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25th May 2010, 06:53 PM
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acha to aisa baat hai.. to lijiye
har lamha usse milne ka gila nahi karta aakash
aankhein band karte hi usey paa leta hun main
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hmmmmmmmm...... not bad
lijiye aapke sher ka jawaab hamare andaaz me............
itna socha hai tujhe Shaam-o-sahar
khud par bhi tere hone kaa Gumaan hota hai....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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25th May 2010, 07:17 PM
Kisko pata tha pehlu mein rakha dil aisa paji bhi hoga
Hum to samjhjte the koi hum jaisa ki haji bhi hoga
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
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hmmmmmmmm...... not bad
lijiye aapke sher ka jawaab hamare andaaz me............
itna socha hai tujhe Shaam-o-sahar
khud par bhi tere hone kaa Gumaan hota hai....
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kya baat hai jee..
ab ye hi silsilaa sar e aam hota hai
jami pyasi rehti jab aakash rota hai
kaise bujhegi pyas do dilon ki lamha
ek kuch mila nahi or dusra khota hai
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Hum to samjhjte the koi hum jaisa ki haji bhi hoga
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umar ek aisi hoti hai ke jis main dil ko
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kya baat hai jee..
ab ye hi silsilaa sar e aam hota hai
jami pyasi rehti jab aakash rota hai
kaise bujhegi pyas do dilon ki lamha
ek kuch mila nahi or dusra khota hai
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good one Aakash.................
kal raat chand hu ba hu tuj jaisa tha
wohi husn, wohi ghuroor or wohi doori......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
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good one Aakash.................
kal raat chand hu ba hu tuj jaisa tha
wohi husn, wohi ghuroor or wohi doori......
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its awesome
"Kon Takoun Main Raha, Kon Sar-e-Rah Guzaar";
"Shehar Kay Saaray Charaghon Ko Hawa Jaanti Hay.
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Gahare samandar khamosh hote hai jose-e-junoon me aakash
utha de gar waqt ki lahar to karvat badal jaati pal zindagi bhi .
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25th May 2010, 11:49 PM
Hinai dashat ne abr e siya se motiya ro li
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Koi lamha bhi kabhi laut kar nahee aaya
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26th May 2010, 03:58 PM
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Koi lamha bhi kabhi laut kar nahee aaya
Woh shaks aisa gaya phir nazar nahee aaya
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Bite lamhe dobara aaya naih karte...... Jaane wale lauta nahi karte...
Hum milte to roz hai har shaks se... Par phir milne ka wada nahi karte...
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
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Bite lamhe dobara aaya naih karte...... Jaane wale lauta nahi karte...
Hum milte to roz hai har shaks se... Par phir milne ka wada nahi karte...
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wada kar ke bhi toh yaha koi nibhata kaha hai
log chale jate hai par unki yaad jata kaha hai
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Bite lamhe dobara aaya naih karte...... Jaane wale lauta nahi karte...
Hum milte to roz hai har shaks se... Par phir milne ka wada nahi karte...
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aapne takleef kyu ki hum to aane wale the
hum samajh aur soch kar hi dhoka khane wale the
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aapne takleef kyu ki hum to aane wale the
hum samajh aur soch kar hi dhoka khane wale the
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Rait mai ghar banata hai pagal
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Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
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26th May 2010, 05:39 PM
humne dil hi todd dala dhadkano ke khauf se
apni basti hi mita daali baarishon ke khauf se
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humne dil hi todd dala dhadkano ke khauf se
apni basti hi mita daali baarishon ke khauf se
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ai kaash tu bhi sunta kabhi aahaton ki goonj
tu bhi meri tarha se kabhi dhoondhta mujhe
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Na Chhedo Humein hum Sataye Howay Hain
Mohabbat Ke Sadmein Uthaye Howay Hain
Uthaao Khanjar Aur Qatal Karo Humein
Badi Muddat Say Sar Jhukaye Howay Hain
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Na Chhedo Humein hum Sataye Howay Hain
Mohabbat Ke Sadmein Uthaye Howay Hain
Uthaao Khanjar Aur Qatal Karo Humein
Badi Muddat Say Sar Jhukaye Howay Hain
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Ye sir jhuke mehboob ke zaano par khushnaseebi hogi
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kaat kar zuba kehne laga zalim
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Har baar sar jhuka kar apni mohbbat kaa inteha na liya kar
ek baar kaha tere siwa koi nahi baar-2 hamse na pucha kar.
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