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On side lines wait … 1403–2k13 - 22nd March 2013, 11:20 PM


Solitary lonesome days
bit by bit cast aside by measured waves
Life you private most of stargazers sight
Hold close to heart thoust
So much color and wind and healthy laugh
power and pelf and righteous staff
your smiles hid in me are tender sons
to raise to hold to cuddle and want
climb thine stalk like twirls of a plant
entwine in elusive full hearted bait
obscure by measure on side lines wait
your slick and charming body’s gleam
with promise and linger of another realm
thine promise and pledge is but a farce
laying to waste and ravage and piteous sparse


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Solitary lonesome days
bit by bit cast aside by measured waves
Life you private most of stargazers sight
Hold close to heart thoust
So much color and wind and healthy laugh
power and pelf and righteous staff
your smiles hid in me are tender sons
to raise to hold to cuddle and want
climb thine stalk like twirls of a plant
entwine in elusive full hearted bait
obscure by measure on side lines wait
your slick and charming body’s gleam
with promise and linger of another realm
thine promise and pledge is but a farce
laying to waste and ravage and piteous sparse


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Such a wonderful wonderful feeling reading this . the use of archaic words perhaps adds more to the solitariness and memoriam in this .

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Very beautiful poem indeed.

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Such a wonderful wonderful feeling reading this . the use of archaic words perhaps adds more to the solitariness and memoriam in this .

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Solitary lonesome days
bit by bit cast aside by measured waves
Life you private most of stargazers sight
Hold close to heart thoust
So much color and wind and healthy laugh
power and pelf and righteous staff
your smiles hid in me are tender sons
to raise to hold to cuddle and want
climb thine stalk like twirls of a plant
entwine in elusive full hearted bait
obscure by measure on side lines wait
your slick and charming body’s gleam
with promise and linger of another realm
thine promise and pledge is but a farce
laying to waste and ravage and piteous sparse


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Sorry for coming late on this thread doctor sahab....

Your poem is too good... as always...




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Solitary lonesome days
bit by bit cast aside by measured waves
Life you private most of stargazers sight
Hold close to heart thoust
So much color and wind and healthy laugh
power and pelf and righteous staff
your smiles hid in me are tender sons
to raise to hold to cuddle and want
climb thine stalk like twirls of a plant
entwine in elusive full hearted bait
obscure by measure on side lines wait
your slick and charming body’s gleam
with promise and linger of another realm
thine promise and pledge is but a farce
laying to waste and ravage and piteous sparse


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Sub'hanAllah!
Words are in shortage Sir to describe the feelings that this poem generates, the depiction of emotions in words and expression are in a league of their own, truly a gem, the poem. All we can say are the humble words... Thank You for delighting us with your craft!


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Sorry for coming late on this thread doctor sahab....

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Hmmmmmmmm..... now where was that bit that I was going to highlight?


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Sorry for coming late on this thread doctor sahab....

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Zainy mate you always welcome pal....
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Ahmad your presence is the highlight here ....!!!
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Hahahaha...edited...before its too late....




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