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~Darling,i'll love u till the end of time~ -
4th August 2005, 07:25 PM
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When the night is dark & the moon is high, i sit by my window and often sigh, ur absence always pinches me, i gaze up the moon and often see, the moon in the stars,lives alone, i realize my state as the sky has shown, i'm alone in this world,without u my dear, with anyone my feelings,i cannot share, living without u is like living in the hell, only u can understand my feelings well, dont test my patience,its limit now, its time for u to see how, in your absence,i strive hard to live, what i've asked for,only u can give, distance is one thing that keeps us apart, one thing for sure,u'll always be in my heart, YOU are my life dear,please be mine, darling i'll love u till the end of time....................... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ urs, KASAK Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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4th August 2005, 07:59 PM
dear kasak,
i can just say tht u snatched my thoughts tht were there in my mind. well these days even my mind is distracted for sumone very close i can say, tht i keep on waiting to hear a word frm his side. well awesome. just loved reading ur thoughts. yes distance is one thing tht keeps apart but then wen u meet crossing all the miles tht moment is the life of urs i can say. u feel so gud n hqappy. well just loved reading this. awesome. keep flowing ur thoughts ahead too. keep sharing more often with us. take care n always keep smiling. god bless u  urs jas  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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4th August 2005, 08:01 PM
THANK U SO MUCH DI,
main bahut dino se hindi ki shayriyaan hi likh rahi thi, is baar socha ki english ka bhi try maara jaye.... i'm obliged that u liked my thoughts.... apki, KASAK Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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4th August 2005, 08:16 PM
YOU are my life dear,please be mine,
darling i'll love u till the end of time aur agar tumhara na bana to, bas pyar yahiN khatam ??? :P well sorry na jane ye khayalaat kahan se aa gaye ... aaj socha kyuN na apne chehre pe muskaan layi jaye.. to thoda sa majaak kar liya .. umeed hai aap bura nahi maneNgi ... aur agar kisi bhi tareeke se aapko thes pahuNchi ho to muafi ka talab gaar huN...waise mere sawal pe gaur karna ... khair padh ke accha laga... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th August 2005, 08:18 PM
wah it was just 2 gud dear loved each and every line of it.just keep writing the same way.
tumhara LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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4th August 2005, 08:24 PM
nahi kunal bhaiya.....
aisi koi baat nahi hai.......... end of time matlab 'QAYAAMAT' NA...... uske baad to khuda hi jaanta hai kya hoga...... jahaan tak hamara bas hai......wahaan tak to main use pyar kar hi sakti hoon na.......... apki baat ka mujhe bilkul bura nahi laga..... apse seekhne ko mile isse badi khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai? luv, KASAK Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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4th August 2005, 08:32 PM
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aaj kafi arse bad tumhein khush paya. janti hoon ki yeh khusi ka nakab jo tumne odha hai, i can still feel the pain behind it. but u know aaj ek quote yaad aa gaya. ITS BETTER TO HIDE UR HEARTACHES AND WOES UNDER A PLEASANT SMILE. happy to see u replying everyone n being among every one. sab sang rahoge to gamn se shayad pare raho. neways take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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4th August 2005, 08:37 PM
tum meri baat samjhi nahi; tumne likha
YOU are my life dear,please be mine, baat tumhare pyar ki nahi.. baat hai uske pyaar ki.. agar wo tumhara nahi hua to... tab kya karogi... jaisa tumne likha please be mine... well maiN tumhe kya seekhauNga .. na kalam pakadna janta huN ... na rishtey... na jindgi.. ek shakhs jiske wajood pe sawalon ka dher hai.. tumhe kya samjhayega,, kya sikhayega... bas ek cheez sikha sakta hai tumhe... ki jisse mohbbat karna use chorna nahi.... na duniya maiN reh kar .. na duniya ke baad... kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th August 2005, 08:40 PM
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khushi ka nakaab koun nahi odta... dil se khushi aaj ke jamane main milti nahi... par phir bhi .. bhagwaan ne muh diya hai.. khane liye to bhi .. dant dikhane ko bhi....  to dant dikhao maje udao... gham ko goli maro aaj tum... dhichkiyauN dhichkiyauN dhichkiyauN... hahahaha tumhara apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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4th August 2005, 08:51 PM
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urs tq mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….
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5th August 2005, 10:56 AM
Meri Ninni Sis..........
a good post.....from the bottom of the heart.......a true feelings of love.......... tc.......... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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5th August 2005, 11:55 AM
When the night is dark & the moon is high,
i sit by my window and often sigh, ur absence always pinches me, i gaze up the moon and often see, the moon in the stars,lives alone, i realize my state as the sky has shown, i'm alone in this world,without u my dear, with anyone my feelings,i cannot share, Very well expressed Kasak...! living without u is like living in the hell, only u can understand my feelings well, dont test my patience,its limit now, its time for u to see how, in your absence,i strive hard to live, what i've asked for,only u can give, distance is one thing that keeps us apart, one thing for sure,u'll always be in my heart, Very beautifull...! YOU are my life dear,please be mine, darling i'll love u till the end of time....................... Nice one...! Dear Kasak! A sweet and simple expression.. Loved reading it.. do accept my praises on writing this... Keep the god work up....Take Care sis...Keep smiling... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th August 2005, 11:03 PM
hello kasak ji,very well written.....it was grt readin ur thoughts...
n kunal bhai...vat happ to u... always seem to be unhapy... agar aapko kalam pakadna nahi aata to vat abt every one else...we cant even read... look for some thin +ve in life...u'l know tht life is beautiful well...if i hurt u i am sorry take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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8th August 2005, 04:50 PM
Ninni Sis.....
reply karna bhool gayi........... tc........ **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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10th August 2005, 08:44 PM
thanx to all of u.......
aap logo ko meri poem pasand aayi,mere liye isse zyada khushi ki baat aur kya ho sakti hai..... aman bhaiya.....aaj bahut dino baad online aayi hoon yaar..... sabse pehle yahi reply kara hai..... 'rukaawat ke liye khed hai  'luv, KASAK Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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4th March 2013, 07:33 PM
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Too good kasak ji...beyond words can describe... I never knew u write english poems as welll.... Pls keep writing dear..... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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