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Smile Kya khabar thee waqt aisa aayega - 17th April 2002, 05:42 PM

Dosto ek taaza ghazal ke ashar pesh-e-khidmat hain.
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GHAZAL

Kya khabar thee waqt aisa aayega
Apni hi dhadkan se dil ghabrayega

Jo bhi hoga waqt bus kar jaayega
Khauf Kab tak waqt se tu khayega

Jaise jaise dard badhta jayega
Zindagi meiN lutf aata jaayega

Milney waali yuN koi manzil nahiN
Raastey kab tak badalta jayega

Raat dhalte hi wo sab kho jayengi
Parchhaiyon ke ishq meiN kya paayega

Sach se bhi pehchaan karke dekh le
Dil bharam se kab talak behlaayega

MeiN na kehta tha yehi ik din PRAVEEN
Aadmi se aadmi ghabrayega

aapki rai aur tassuraat ka muntazir

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Bahut khoob...
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Thumbs up Bahut khoob... - 18th April 2002, 04:16 PM

Adaab Praveen ji!!

Aapki ghazal parhke lagta hai ki aap puraane likhaari haiN..I mean pehle se likhte aa rahe haiN...bahut hi khoob likha hai aapne!! I hope aap se kuch seekhne ko milega especially beher Maine apni kuch koshishein 'Aapki shayri ' forum mein Post ki hai..ho sake to nazar-e-karam farmaaiyega..shukriya!!

Sabhi Ashaar qabeel-e-taareef hai lekin ye ashaar behud pasand aaye...


Jaise jaise dard badhta jayega
Zindagi meiN lutf aata jaayega

Milney waali yuN koi manzil nahiN
Raastey kab tak badalta jayega

Raat dhalte hi wo sab kho jayengi
Parchhaiyon ke ishq meiN kya paayega

Sach se bhi pehchaan karke dekh le
Dil bharam se kab talak behlaayega


Wah Wah!!

aur bhi sunate rahiyega...!

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Smile Aapka bahut-bahut Shukriya - 19th April 2002, 04:19 PM

Adaab Shumaila ji.

Kafi paini nazar hai aapki. Ji haan mein kaafi arsey se likh raha hoon. Ek din achanak Sahir Ludhiyanvi ki shayri search karte karte urdustan aur is site ka pata chala aur uske baad se meine socha ke yahan ke doston ke saamney apney ashaar pesh karoon. Aur bus tab sey aap logon ki company mil gayee hai.

Aapne bade hi khoobsoorat andaaz mein tareef kii hai. Iska mein tahe dil se shukriya ada karta hoon. Umeed hai mere ainda kalam bhi aap padhengi aur un par apni rai likhengi.

Badi hi achchi baat hogi agar shayri ke muamle meiN maiN aapke kaam aa sakoon. Aap jo bh jaanna chahti hon bus likh bhejen. Mein apni taraf sey har mumkin koshish karoonga ke aapke kaam aa sakoon.

Phir ek baar bahut shukriya ada karte hue

Aapki ghazal meine padhi hai uske baarey mein apki post mein hi likh raha hoon so usey dekh lein.

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1st May 2002, 08:44 AM

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aadaab

Ghazal paDhii.......aur jo lutf aaya voh to hum hi jaaneN......ek beh'tariin aur may'aari Ghazal kehne pe hamari mubarakbaad....!!


agar ek ash'aar ki taariif kareN to ye doosre ke saath ziyaadtii hogi......tamaam Ghazal bahar aur khayaal ke hawaale se ek umdaa kavish hai.....bohat khoob....!!

yuuN mehsoos huaa jaise bahar ki maala meiN waznii lafz chun-chun kar piroye gaye hoN......jeete rahiye...!!




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der ho gayi thodi si...
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der ho gayi thodi si... - 6th May 2002, 11:31 PM

adaab praveen ji...haan thodi der ho gayi aapki ghazal par apni rai pesh karne mein....vaise humne padh to li thi bahut pehle lekin reply karne ke liye fursat nahi mili..............to aapki is ghazal ke baare mein to hum bas itna hi kahenge ... "wah wah, bahut khoob!".....

Kya khabar thee waqt aisa aayega
Apni hi dhadkan se dil ghabrayega

Jaise jaise dard badhta jayega
Zindagi meiN lutf aata jaayega

....ab aur kya kahe....im speechless!!....


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kabhee ham unko, kabhee apane ghar ko dekhte haiN

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maasha allah kya taaleem paai hai
har sabdh mein samudra si gahraai hai

dil ki baton ko vakt ne daraaya hai
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Thumbs up Shukriya tareef ka - 7th May 2002, 11:31 PM

Janab Maikash saheb

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Aapne is kavish ko jis tarah saraha uske liye aapka behud shukriya. Ummed hai ke aainda ashaar par bhi aap ghour farmayeNge aur apni rai se nawazenge. Aur is qalam ka hausla badhatey rahengey. Duaon ke saath.

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Thumbs up Re: der ho gayi thodi si... - 7th May 2002, 11:35 PM

Adaab Anamika ji

Chaliye der se to sahi aapke khayalaat to ham tak pahunche. Kyunke Shayri.com ki galiyon mein aapke saath sabse pehla tabadla-e-khayal hua to na sirf aapki nayee takhliqat ke intezaar rehta hai balke ye janne ka bhi ke hamara kalam aapko kaisa laga.

Aur jis tafseel se aap apni rai rakhti hain wo bhi apne aap mein ek alag baat hai. To aapki tareef ke jawab meiN baar-baar yeh hi kahonga – bahut bahut shukriya. Duaon ke saath.

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Thumbs up Shukriya - 7th May 2002, 11:37 PM

Hello Soulmate

Shukriya, thanks, dhanyawaad… tareef karne ka aapka andaz behud alag aur khoobsoorat hai. Takhleeq ko pasand karney aur us par aapke khoobsoorat khayalaat ke liye bahot shukriya.

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aap ka likha to hamesha hi acha hota hai ab issey zyada kya kahoon
Kya khabar thee waqt aisa aayega
Apni hi dhadkan se dil ghabrayega

Jo bhi hoga waqt bus kar jaayega
Khauf Kab tak waqt se tu khayega......... aapka yeh kalam bhi kamaal hi hai
   
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shukria - 11th November 2003, 06:08 PM

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aap ka likha to hamesha hi acha hota hai ab issey zyada kya kahoon
Kya khabar thee waqt aisa aayega
Apni hi dhadkan se dil ghabrayega

Jo bhi hoga waqt bus kar jaayega
Khauf Kab tak waqt se tu khayega......... aapka yeh kalam bhi kamaal hi hai
Waah Kya baat hai mango ji

Bohat peehe se aap khoj laayee haiN is ghazal ko.
Dek kar bohat achcha laga.
Aapki daad aur aur hosla afzayee ke liye mamnuun huuN.

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