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Gulaabee rang aksar boltaa hai -
19th December 2010, 06:43 PM
aadaab dosto kuchh dinon pahle aap ke yahaan se guzar huwaa to dil me aayaa kiun na main bhi aap ki is mahfil ka shareek e kaar ban jaaun ishq ki mahfil me ek ishqiyah ghazal leke haazir ho rahaa hun ummeed ki doaaon se nawaazen ge masood hassaas Merey rukh pe meraa dil doltaa hai Ye andar ho key baahar bolta hai rukh .... face Ye dil hai muntazir kiska meree jaaN Har ik aahat pe aankheN kholta hai muntazir.... intezaar me Ye kiska aks hai aankhoN me raqsaaN Ye kiskaa naam hai jo bolta hai aks .... parchhaaeeN .. raqsaaN ..naachtaa huwaa Mujhe hai zikr us ka had se pyaaraa Merey munh me wo ras ko gholtaa hai zikr ....... kisee ki baat karnaa Wo aankhoN se samaa ke dil me mery Meree dunya ko mujh se molta hai Usey hai payaar aankhoN ki zanaaN se Meraa man bhi usee sey doltaa hai Mai us se jab bhi dil ki baat kah duN Gulaabee rang aksar boltaa hai Merey afkaar ko dekey tabassum Hai aakhir koun mujh ko kholtaa hai afkaar.. kheyaalaat Mai us kee shaan me itnaa kahuN ga Ke wo lafzoN se motee roltaa hai Usee Hassaas tum rakkho nazar me use har shakhs apnaa boltaa hai |
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20th December 2010, 11:30 AM
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bahut khoob............................................ Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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20th December 2010, 11:56 AM
Merey rukh pe meraa dil doltaa hai Ye andar ho key baahar bolta hai rukh .... face Ye dil hai muntazir kiska meree jaaN Har ik aahat pe aankheN kholta hai Janab Masood Hassaas Saheb...! Boht Kamal Ghazal Kahi Aap Ne..... Ye 2 Sher To Dil Me Ghar Kr Gaye........ Aaap Ka Andaz-e-Bayan Boht KHooob Or Dil Me Utar Janay Wala Hai.... Khayalaat Or Alfaaz Ki Aap Ke Haan Koi Kami Nahi.... Tah-e-Dil Se Daad Hazir Hai Apni Muhabbat Se Qabool Farmayen.. Bas Aik Baat Kahun Ga....... Is Ghazal Me Aik Lafz "Bolta Hai" 4 Jaga Istemaal Hua Hai...... Sirf Ye Jana'na Chahun Ga Ke Kia Ye Ghazal Ke Zoaf Ko Zahir Nahi Krta...? Duaon Me Yaad Rakhiye Ga..... Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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20th December 2010, 05:17 PM
Ye dil hai muntazir kiska meree jaaN
Har ik aahat pe aankheN kholta hai too good masood ji.... bahut bahut khoob.... aapki is post ko padhne ke baad main to yahi kahungi ki aap ishq par hi llikha keejiye... isi bahane hume bhi acchi acchi gazle padhne ko milengi.. |
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21st December 2010, 02:05 AM
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bahot shukriya merey bhai khush rahen masood |
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21st December 2010, 07:48 AM
Merey rukh pe meraa dil doltaa hai
Ye andar ho key baahar bolta hai Masood Bhai .. Aadaab ! Tamaam Ghazal ke saath ... Yeh matlaa bahut khoob laga hume ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aate rahen aur likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st December 2010, 10:06 AM
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Kya bat hai masood saahb dard me toofaan machane ke baad aapko ishq ki galiyon me dekh raha hoon to jaise yakeen nahi aa raha hai. aapne to yahan pe bhi baazii maar lee huzoor... kamaal ke alfaaz kahan se intekhaab karte hain saahibe-aala.... hum to bas padhne me yoon magn ho jaate hain ki bas fir sab bhool jaate hain.. aapki ye koshish sare aankhon pe... aur hame bahot pasand aai hai. dil se daad kubool farmaaen... likhte rahen.. allah kare zore-kalam badhta hi jaae.. shaad... |
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21st December 2010, 04:41 PM
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aadaab shakeel bhai ap ki inaayaton mohabbaton ka be had shukriyaa jo baat aap ne ki hai us se farhat mili kiun ki omooman yahaan waah waahi ka maosam apnee jaolaaniyon pe rahtaa hai is liye jab aisee koi baat saamne aatee hai to ehsaas hotaa hai ki koi to hai jiske liye ghazal ka likhnaa kaamyaab thehraa shakil bhai sheree ma"aaeeb me ye baat to shaamil nahi hai is liye ye baat laaeqe eytenaa nahi hai taaham jab aap ne kahaa hai tomain panaa matmahe nazar waazeh kar dun ki mofakkereen ka is me ekhtelaaf hai kuchh hazraat ise z"of kahte hain to khuchh hazraat ka kahnaa hai ki ye bhi shair ka kamaal hai ki ek hi lafz ko mot'addad tareeqe se istemaal pe qaadir hai aor ek hi khiyaal ko mukhtalif andaaz me baratne ka fan aashnaa hai janaab aslam noor saahab ek din chaat pe the unhon ne kahaa zaraa dekh ke bataayen sher kaisaa hai .. aor sher likhaa ..allah jaane us sher me kitnee kashish thee ki belaa eraadah main ne waheen barjastah ghazal kah dee aor aslam bhai se kahaa ki ye ghaza aap ki hai aap ise le len unhon ne badee apnaaiyat se khuddaariyat ki benaa pe shukriyaa ke saath manaa kar diyaa yahee wajah hai ki ye ghazal ek mashohoor site pe ,, ek ghazal aslam noor ke naam ,,, se aaj bhi maojood hai dossree baat meree hiss ne wahi baat kahee thee jo ki aap ne sochaa magar chunki kheyaalaat achhe the is liye un ashaar ko ghazal me rahne diyaa warna do sher kam kar ke ye shiq bhi naa paid ki jaa saktee thee teesri baat mujhe is radeef me mazeed alfaaz mile bhi nahi jo ki meree kam ilmi ke sewaa kuchh nahi hai ab aap ko bataaun ki ek ghazal ke 3 sher kahaa hun magar talaashe bisyaar ke baad bhi qaafiyaa dasteyaab nahi ho rahaa hai aap bhi sunen merey wajood ko khushyoN ka taoq detee hai haseen aap ki muskaan hai jo zerey lab panap raha hai merey dil ki aarzoo ban kar merey khayaal me gar saanjh to sawerey lab mujhe sokoon ki waadi pe dastaras deke merey jonooN pe teree aarzoo bhi pherey lab main us moqaam ka khowaahaaN hun ishq me jaanaaN ki meree peyaas ko mahsoos karen terey lab is ghazal ke liye mujhe sirf ek lafz mil raha hai ,, merey,, aage kuchh samajh me nahi aara hai agar aap kuchh madad kar sakte hon to nawaazish ho gee ghazal ko jis baareeki se aap ne dekhaa hai main us ke liye ehsaan mand hun allah aap ko jazaaye khair de mainaap ke jawaab ka inrezaar karungaa taaki tabaadul e aaraa se istefaadah kiyaa ja sake mukhlis masood hassaas |
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22nd December 2010, 12:25 PM
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Asslam-o-Alaikum…! Janab Masood Hassaaas Saheb… Umeed Hai Aap Kheriat Se Hon Gay….. Or ALLAH Hamesha Aap Ko Kheriat Se He Rakhay....Sir Beshak Aap Ka Kalam Bharpur Or Hr Pehlu Se Mukammal Hai….Main Ne Aap Se Faqat Apni Rahnumayi Ke Liye Aisa Pucha ThaKe Aik He Lafz Bar'ha Istemaal Krnay Se Ghazal Ki Saakht Pr To Asar Nahi Parta…?Or Aap Ki Ye Baat Bilikuk Baja Hai Ke Aik Hee Lafz Ko Mukhtalif Tareeqay Se Adaa Krna Bhi Aik Khooobi He Hai.Or Main Ne Boht Se Baray Shoraa Ke Kalaam Me Bhi Ye Baat Dekhi Hai Chunanchay Bilashuba Aap Jo Likhtay Hain Wo Mukammal he Hota Hai…. Dusri Baat Aap Ne Ghazal Ke Qafia Ke Liye Madad Ka Kaha Hai….. merey wajood ko khushyoN ka taoq detee hai haseen aap ki muskaan hai jo zerey lab panap raha hai merey dil ki aarzoo ban kar merey khayaal me gar saanjh to sawerey lab mujhe sokoon ki waadi pe dastaras deke merey jonooN pe teree aarzoo bhi pherey lab main us moqaam ka khowaahaaN hun ishq me jaanaaN ki meree peyaas ko mahsoos karen terey lab Masood Saheb…..! Bilashuba Ye Ghazal Shahkaar Hai Or Boht Munafarid Qafia Or Radeef Hai………… Agr Ye Mukammal Ho Jaye To Ye Shahkaar Ban Sakti Hai Is Ke Liye Mere Zehn Me Kuch Qafiyay Aa Rahay Hain…..Shayed Ke Aap Ko Kuch Madad Mil Sakay…. Ghairay, Dairay,Munh Andheray, Luteray,Saperay,Mere Mila Hai Mere Gunahon Ko Daman-e-Rehmat Dua Ke Waasitay Kholay Jo Munh Andheray Lab Mere Hawaas Pe Dalay Huay Hain Dairay Lab Nazar Ke Naag Ko Be-sudh Karen Saperay Lab Ye Kuch Meri Koshish Hai……Kuch Tabdeeli Ke Baad Agr Aap Ke Qabil Ban Saktay Hain To Kalaam Me Shamil Kr Lijiye Ga….Aap Ne Is Ghazal Me Aik Sher Kaha Hai………. merey wajood ko khushyoN ka taoq detee hai Haseen Aap Ki Muskaan Hai Jo Zere Lab Is Sher Ke Pehlay Misray Se Main Mutma'en Nahi Hun……..Jahan Tak Mera Ilm Hai Lafz"Taoq" Gham Ke Liye Istemaal Hota Hai…..Gham Ka Taoq………..Agar Aap Taoq Ki Jaga Kuch Or Lafz Lagyen To Ziada Behtr Lagay Ga….Jesay Mere Wajood Ko Khushiyon Ka Haar Tere Lab Isi Tarha Ke Agr Kuch Or Mutbadil Lafz Aap Ke Zehn Me Hon To Aap Wo Istemaal Kren To Ziada Theak Lagay Ga ALLAH AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY ALLAH HAFIZ Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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22nd December 2010, 04:53 PM
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aadaab kiyaa baat hai shakeel bhai bahot khoob ... do sher kiyaa kahaa aap ne is zameen ka haq adaa kardiyaa ... shaandaar .. bahot khoob ... janaab sachhi baatto yahee hai ki aap ne jin alfaaz ki taraf ishaaraah kiyaa hai wo bahot hi peyaare hain main is silsile me aap ka shukr guzaar hun allah kare kabhi tabiyat ka mailaan is jaanob ho aorghazal ki takmeel amal me aajaaye mukhlis masood |
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22nd December 2010, 05:29 PM
masood bhaa'ii:
Aadaab! waah waah! bahot hi Khoob.. Pyaar bhare ehsaas dil mei.n Ghar kar gaye.n! yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n aage bhee! KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n duaao.n ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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23rd December 2010, 12:10 AM
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aadaab shipraa ji aji aap kaho aor ham na likhen aisaa kaise hogaa bas dekho ab kab mood bantaa hai aap itnee mohabbat se kah rahee hain to ab to main likhte hi post karne aaun gaa bas aap aise hi apnee daad se himmat badhaatee rahen dekhnaa ek din mainbhi achhi ghazal likh lun gaa dhanewaad shipra ji aap ka dost masood |
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25th December 2010, 01:49 AM
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aadaab mehraa ji aap ka jitnaa bhi shukriyaa adaa jaaye kam hai aap har kisee ko daad dete hain aor use doaa bhi dete hain jis se saaf pataa chaltaa hai ki aap ek saaf hi nahi balki bade dil ke maalik hain bahot shukriyaa saahab mukhlis masood |
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25th December 2010, 01:52 AM
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shaad bhai hahahahahahhahahahaah are nahi yaar aisaa kiyaa kar diyaa main ne ki toofaan aa gayaa hai .. yaar ye to aap ki mohabbat hai ki aap mujhe itnaa maan sammaan de rahe ho warnaa main kiyaa meree aoqaat kiyaa magar jis mohabbat se aap ne ghazal ko aor mujhe nawaazaa hai main us kaa aabhaaree hun mukhlis masood |
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25th December 2010, 01:56 AM
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aadaab dhaval bhai bas ji ye aap ki mohabbat hai aor kuchh nahi .. main kuchh bhi god gaad detaa hun aap ki mohabbat hai ki aap use taaj mahal banaa dete hain shukriyaa saahab masood |
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26th December 2010, 03:26 PM
hassas sahab ... badee hi khoobsurat aur ras bharee ghazal lagee aapkee. saare aashaar behad umdah the, par inpar to dil hi atak gayaa ...
Wo aankhoN se samaa ke dil me mery Meree dunya ko mujh se molta hai Mai us se jab bhi dil ki baat kah duN Gulaabee rang aksar boltaa hai Usee Hassaas tum rakkho nazar me use har shakhs apnaa boltaa hai dheron daad aur duaaon ke saath ... zarraa |
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6th January 2011, 05:13 PM
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janaab zarrah saahab aap ki mohabbat hai ki aap ne inashaar ko izzat bakhshi khodaa aap ko ajr de masood |
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6th January 2011, 07:40 PM
Merey rukh pe meraa dil doltaa hai
Ye andar ho key baahar bolta hai Usee Hassaas tum rakkho nazar me use har shakhs apnaa boltaa hai Masood Bhai, Ghazal ki jitni tareef ki jaye kam hai, lekin quoted ashaar ko khaas pazeeraayi na dii jaye to waqai in ashaar ki haq-talfii ho gii, janab yeh ashaar ko mere dil meiN ghar kar gaye, bohat hi umda tareeqe aur nihaayat hi nazaakat k saath aap ne yeh likhay, jo k mujhe hamesha yaad rahien gay, aur mujhe ye 2 ashaar itnay pasand aaye k is k mutaliq bata nahi sakta.... Aise hi kamaal kartay rahieN, DuaooN k saath ijaazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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7th January 2011, 03:03 PM
behad hi achi ghazal likhi hai Masood ji aapne,bahut hi ache ehsasaat
khush rahen |
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7th January 2011, 05:48 PM
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Beautiful !!!!!! its amazing,,,,,,I think wonderful post ,,,,thanks lot for share with us,,,,, with regards, sneha, |
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11th January 2011, 04:38 PM
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aadaab hassan bhai daad dene ka fan koi aap se seekhe jis faraakhdilee se aap ne daad di hai wo bazaate khud kisee ghazal ki mahkaar se kam nahi hai is me wo nazaakat paayee jaatee hai jo ghazal ka roop maanaa jaataa hai main tahe dil se shukr guzaar hun mukhlis masood hassaas |
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11th January 2011, 04:41 PM
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sneha ji aap ne daad kiyaa di dil jhoom jhoom gayaa lagaa ki kaheen se koi muralee ki taan sunaayi de rahee hai jis ki lai pe dil be bas ho ke sharaabhi ban gayaa ho main aap ka shukr adaa karun gaa is ummeed ke saath ki ye saath yun hi banaa rahe gaa mukhlis masood hassaas |
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12th January 2011, 11:53 AM
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Thanks lot for reply my post so I'm very happy....,,,,,,,,,, with regards,,,,, sneha  |
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16th January 2011, 04:13 PM
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aji sneha saahab sirf aap hi khush nahi hain balki haqeeqat yah hai ki aap ki daad ki mihaas main aaj tak apne andar mahsoos kar rahaa hun ummeed ki aate rahen ge doaan ke saath masood hassaas |
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