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my 1st love letter -
25th May 2009, 11:10 AM
hi friends...... sabki life mei kuch khaas moments aate hai.... kal maine life ka 1st love letter likha... aap logo ke saath share karna chahti hu.... padhke zaroor bataiyega ke kaisa tha.. and kyaa ye love letter hota hai ye bhi batana.. kyunki mujhe ye bhi nahi pata ke love letter actually hota kaisa hai... naa kabhi likha naa kisika padha and naa hi dekha
My feelings for u AND only u.........u have been someone like wat shud i really say.....poori life mei ek khalbali si macha di aapne.......so...only and only for u my jaan...written frm my heart to my heartbeats...just to let u feel how special u r for me....love u a lot darling.....shayris aaj tak bohat likhi..... logo ke saath share bhi ki.....par kissi ko itna lucky nahi banne diya k kissike liye likhu..... aap wo pehle the aur aap hi rahenge.....aapke alawa koi us jagah aaya to maa papa ke liye..... par aap ki kissike saath koi tulna nahi...... aap hai toh main hu jaanu..... warna mai kyaa?... par kabhi kissi ko us singhasan pe nahi bithaya jispe aapko hi baithne ka haqq hai..... you are my everything..... b wid me even after my heartbeat stops..... i dont love u frm the centre of my heart.. but i love you whole heartedly..... jeeyungi toh aapke saath..... marungi toh aapke saath..... khudse pehle aapko jaane naa dungi..... uppar bhi pareshaan karungi..... u know y??? coz i love u ......... I LOVE YOU MY LOVE Raat ke taare si tilmilati si Sagar ki gehraai mei doobi si Pedo se thitholi karti si Bethe bethe kuch sochti si Aapki yaado mei baithi si Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si… Palke kuch jhukaayi si Hoth daatho ke beech dabaayi si Dabi si muskaan muskurati si Anguliyo ko ladaati si Tann mei uthti bechaini si Mai kuch khoyi khoyi si… Mann mei chalti asmanjas si Pait mei chalti khalbali si Pairo mei ek kampan si Chalte chalte mai rookti si Khawabo mei kuch khoyi si Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si… Aapko chup se dekhte si Naa ho paas to dhoondhti si Sab kuch khaas mai karti si Payal ki jhankaar si Kangan ki khankaar si Khanakti hui aapki khanak si Pyaar mei pagli hoti si Aapke ehsaas mei khoti si Kuch mai khoyi khoyi si……. ............ aapki aur sirf aapki..... khanak  |
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26th May 2009, 09:32 PM
Surprising no one commented on this.
Nice, but too sweet. Its like what Simon Cowell said on 'Britains got talent', "7 sugar cubes in a cup of coffee." Maybe more  |
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26th May 2009, 10:55 PM
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mai toh sharam se paani paani ho rahi thi k 21 saal ki ho gayi hu aur ek love letter likhna nahi aata mujhe...... shame on me...... well thanks a lot dear........ aapko pata nahi hai mujhe yaha aapko paakar kitni zaada khushi hui hai.......... thanks again |
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26th May 2009, 11:04 PM
Khanak dear
mujhe nahi pata love letter kaise likhte hain ...nahi to main bata deti ...kya hai na sweety yeh mobile aur email ke jamane mein ab royal mail aana band ho gayi hai ....gar letter aata hai ya to phone ka bill ya fir gas ka ....Love letter to kabhi aata hi nahi  tumhara yeh pyaar bhara khat bahot achha hai .....badi khubsoorati se tumne dil ki baat ko ...bayaan kiye ho ...aapki woh  kya SDC ki member hai ...?jo unkeliye itni pyaari pyaari nazam poem aap likh rahe ho roz roz .....aise dikha jaye to ehesaas mujhe bahot pasand aayi aur tumhari yeh masoom love letter bhimujhe bhi tarqeeb sikha dena taki main bhi kuchh likh paun Zindagi bemaza ho gayi hai take care Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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26th May 2009, 11:15 PM
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yaar aaj aap log nahi jaante mai kitni khush ho gayi hoo............ saath mei mere love letter ko 2 compliments...... thanku and haa he is not here on sdc............ he is a complete busy man..... though takes out time 4 me... lovely na??? anyways thanks diya once again......... waise mujhe bhi yahi toh problem thi k i dont know ye love letters kaise hote hai so aap logo ki help maangi....... ab mom chachi logo se toh ye pooch nahi sakti na......... bye diya... cya t cre |
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26th May 2009, 11:36 PM
LOVE LETTER>........................................... .......
tum toh tution start karlo, learn to write love letters, saari ladkiyan seekh lengi tumse...............................kya mast likha hai tumne..................... waise kon khushnaseb hain woh, jinke liye apki kalam ne yeh phool barsaye hain................. Quote:
Nalin Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe, Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe, Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka, woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe  Please Honor me and my creative writing by visitng my website @ www.nalin-mehra.blogspot.com |
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27th May 2009, 09:14 AM
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well thanks a lot........ woh khushnaseeb ek bohat hi pyaare se insaan hai jo mujhse bohat saara pyaar karte hai lekin phir bhi din mei atleast ek baat par daat dete hai par i guess pyaar mei to ye sab chalta rehta hai... aur waise bhi unhe wapas manaana bhi mai jaanti hoo........ but nalin ji its really so gud to see ur reply....... thankss a lot |
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27th May 2009, 02:01 PM
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I must say you are a great bluffer.... keep goin... Lagey raho.... (What da world is comin to... galz feel ashamed of being naive and innocent huh...!) OH GOD...........PLZZZZ JALDI QAYAMAAT AAJAYE  |
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27th May 2009, 02:31 PM
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27th May 2009, 02:43 PM
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 Jo barosey ke khabil hi nahi ... usse pyar ka izhaar hi kyun kar rahi ho |
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27th May 2009, 02:48 PM
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usne kaha tha aayega Qayamat tak kaash ki Qayamat ho aur vo aajaye Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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27th May 2009, 02:51 PM
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but shayad aap is pyaar ko samajh nahi paayenge......... maine ye letter bohat pyaar se likha tha and mera dil naa dukhe isliye wo jhoot toh nahi bol rahe ye hi dekhna chahti thi......... ...unpe mai us ishwar se zaada bharosa rakhti hoo in fact mere liye toh unki comparision ishwar se bhi nahi kyunki mere liye wo hi mere ishwar hai........ and aapse is baat ka suggestion to maine maanga hi nahi k mai kispe bharosa karu and kisse apne pyaar ka izhaar karu |
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27th May 2009, 03:04 PM
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plzz dear stop giving me ur suggestions....... i dnt need any frm u... aap jo ho theek hai... yaha i dnt know how do people bear u??? jo bhi ho lets get it completed... ok? so... never ever try to disscuss on my matters... well thanks anyways and gudbye |
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ham sab duniya me shirf ek duje ka sahara hai....mai samzta hu inshan ki jindagi me ek sahara aisha hota hai jo uski takdir hoti hai lekin jo chala gaya so chala gaya takdir thori legay ... ham ne to sab be vajha sab kho diya hai.. fir bhi aaj ek ekele saqsh ki tarha ji rahe hai jab kabhi koi kami mahesus hoti hai to aap sab logo se mil leta hu.... ishi tarha bus jindagi haste gaate bita lete... hai.. ~~~ta umr gujar gayii sirf unke intzaar meiN hum vo phool hai jo loot gaye bahaar meiN~~~ Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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27th May 2009, 03:42 PM
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ummeed hai aap aagey kabhi shikayat ka maukha nahi denge... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th May 2009, 04:17 PM
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jab diya aapse baat nahi karna chahti hain, to aap is tarah thread per unka naam le lekar unhe pareshan na kare to behtar rahega maine pm karke bhi aapko warn kiya..agar dubara aap aysa karenge to i will have to take strict action agaist you......... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th May 2009, 05:25 PM
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27th May 2009, 05:37 PM
bahutkhoob likha hai.........!!!!
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27th May 2009, 05:58 PM
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hahahaaaa............................. baqs rocks Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 06:06 PM
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27th May 2009, 06:16 PM
Oooohhhhhhhhh.......Ouch... someone is being sarcastic ....
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27th May 2009, 06:20 PM
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ye achanak ........ tehzeeb kahan se tapak padi tere phitte muh se Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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I loved it |
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I loved it -
27th May 2009, 06:26 PM
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Well Khanak Agar ise love letter kehte hain......... to Ae Khudaya to mujhe aaj hi kisi se Mohabbat kara de Jokes apart dear.. ! its really awesome ............ u know.......... i've fallen in love wid ur letter Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 06:32 PM
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tou "E" likh diya |
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27th May 2009, 06:34 PM
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Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 06:36 PM
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hahahahaa..................... Oh God............. tere ghar waale kaise jhelte hain tujhe...........? Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 06:53 PM
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Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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27th May 2009, 07:16 PM
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29th May 2009, 11:14 PM
hmmmmmm.. love letter...
 bhari mehfil meiN... haila publicly ye kya howing ji.. waise.. is love letter ko jara aur pyar ke honey pot meiN dubana padega den it will b perfact 4 ur man.. par joo bhi kaho.. haiN bada hi dilchasp aur mazedar... lagta haiN.. kisi ke pyar ka ekdam gehra aasar haiN, aap par.. chaliye har koi aap ko yaha samjhais de raha haiN, too hum bhi aap ko aapne andaaz meiN kuch kahate haiN, jara gaur farmaiyega.... yeh jo tum mehfiL me kiya karti hooN " uff " bada hii gaZab kiya karti hooN baNd jubaaN kii batooN ko yuh tum ek buland aawaz bana diya karti hooN sUn loo yeh joo tum kiya karti hooN Khanak bada hi galat kiya karti hooN bayan-e-mohabbat toh likha karti hooN par yuh mehfiL me sazaya Q karti hooN.. -- OMi Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein....... |
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