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19th February 2015, 01:31 PM
peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain
Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
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19th February 2015, 02:19 PM
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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain
Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
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Saarika jee... waaahhhhhhhhhhhh
kyaa kahne, ise kkahte hain Sau sunaar ki aur ek luhaar kii.....
muddat ke baad aapko padhna naseeb huaa, aur yaqeen maaniye itnaa accccha,, itna dil se aur itne sacche jazbaaton se aapne ye rachnaa likhi hai ke mann moh liyaa aapne ........
bahot si daad pesh karna chahungaa, aapke is adbhut prayaas ke liye....
likhtii rahen, aatii rahen...
Shaad....
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19th February 2015, 03:32 PM
hh waaah sarika jee bahut pyare ehsaas aur utni ki khoobsoorati se inko shabdon me baandha hai aapne...dil ko bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye kavita...
aage bhi aati rahein aur hame padhne ka mauka detedeti rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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19th February 2015, 07:08 PM
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Originally Posted by masti
peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain
Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
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Waah, bahut khoob Bhaabi... mazaa aa gaya yeh ehsaas padhkar... Woh pyaar ka intezaar, woh ikraar... waah!! Dil se daad kubool karen!!
Anu bhai should write a reply to this, bahut mazaa aayega
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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19th February 2015, 11:47 PM
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Originally Posted by masti
peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain
Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
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Sarika ji, namaskar !
Pehli dafeh aapko paRh raha hooN.
Bohot he umdah ehsasaat ko bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne apni iss peshkash ke zariye.
Aaindaa bhi aapki aisi he nayaab peshkash ke muntizar rakheinge.
Likhte rahiye, khush rahein.
Regards
Sagar Aashna
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Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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20th February 2015, 11:15 AM
Sarika jee
Namaste
Seedhe saral shabdon mein aapki yeh rachnaa khoob rahin... daad ...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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20th February 2015, 09:12 PM
Sairka ji ,
Piya milan ki khushi aur tadap dono ko bakhoobi darshaya aapne apni nazam meiN ..
Beautiful indeed ..
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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23rd February 2015, 01:32 PM
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Saarika jee... waaahhhhhhhhhhhh
kyaa kahne, ise kkahte hain Sau sunaar ki aur ek luhaar kii.....
muddat ke baad aapko padhna naseeb huaa, aur yaqeen maaniye itnaa accccha,, itna dil se aur itne sacche jazbaaton se aapne ye rachnaa likhi hai ke mann moh liyaa aapne ........
bahot si daad pesh karna chahungaa, aapke is adbhut prayaas ke liye....
likhtii rahen, aatii rahen...
Shaad....
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aapko acha laga matlab kuch theek thaak likh liyaa hoga maine. isi tarah aate rahiye aur housla badhaate rahiye.
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23rd February 2015, 01:34 PM
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hh waaah sarika jee bahut pyare ehsaas aur utni ki khoobsoorati se inko shabdon me baandha hai aapne...dil ko bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye kavita...
aage bhi aati rahein aur hame padhne ka mauka detedeti rahein..
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shukriya Madhu ji,
jab aap jaise achi shayraa tareef karti hai to dil khush ho jata hai.
Aati rahiye.
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23rd February 2015, 01:35 PM
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Waah, bahut khoob Bhaabi... mazaa aa gaya yeh ehsaas padhkar... Woh pyaar ka intezaar, woh ikraar... waah!! Dil se daad kubool karen!!
Anu bhai should write a reply to this, bahut mazaa aayega
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Shukriya Devar ji
Waise idea bura nahi hai, aaj kal gaye huein hain to mouka bhi hai aur dastoor bhi.
apki bhabhi
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23rd February 2015, 01:39 PM
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Sarika ji, namaskar !
Pehli dafeh aapko paRh raha hooN.
Bohot he umdah ehsasaat ko bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne apni iss peshkash ke zariye.
Aaindaa bhi aapki aisi he nayaab peshkash ke muntizar rakheinge.
Likhte rahiye, khush rahein.
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aapne mujhe pehli baar padaa magar main apko Anu(mast) ke zariye humesha sunti hun aur hum dono ko hi aapka likha behad pasand aata hai.
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23rd February 2015, 01:40 PM
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Sarika jee
Namaste
Seedhe saral shabdon mein aapki yeh rachnaa khoob rahin... daad ...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee
Duaaon ke saath ijaazat
Aapka
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24th February 2015, 02:00 PM
Himmat Afjaayi ke liye bohut bohut shukriya Sanjay ji....................
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25th February 2015, 02:14 PM
woh aa rahe hain ..
woh kab aa rahe hain ...
waaaaaaaaaah Sarika jee .. waaaah..
kia kehny.... lafz lafz mohabbat kii chaashni mein dooba hua hy ...
aap ne meHfil ko bohat hii dil-fareeb o pur-asar kalaam sy nawaaz hy...
khaaksaar ki taraf sy dherooN daad qaabol kejiye..
likhty rahiye...
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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26th February 2015, 11:29 PM
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woh aa rahe hain ..
woh kab aa rahe hain ...
waaaaaaaaaah Sarika jee .. waaaah..
kia kehny.... lafz lafz mohabbat kii chaashni mein dooba hua hy ...
aap ne meHfil ko bohat hii dil-fareeb o pur-asar kalaam sy nawaaz hy...
khaaksaar ki taraf sy dherooN daad qaabol kejiye..
likhty rahiye...
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Tareef ke liye shukriya hassan ji.....................
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27th February 2015, 05:14 PM
bohat hi aalaa nazam likhi hai aap ne bohat pasand aye
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
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bohat hi aalaa nazam likhi hai aap ne bohat pasand aye
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6th March 2015, 11:09 PM
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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain
daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain
Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
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Behad khoob lijiye kehte hai ki pyaar ek tarfa nahi hota, to is dil ki bechaini bhi sun lijiye
aarzo-e-mohabbat machal si rahi hai
bhanwre bhi ab gungunaa rahe hai
yeh do chaar din ab guzrenge kaise
woh chilman ke lamhe behakaa rahe hai
kya dekhenge unko ya bolenge unse
inhi uljhanon mein jiye jaa rahe hai
tasaavur bhara hai is dil ka taraana
khwaabon mein mohabbat kiye jaa rahe hai
unke dil ki halat bhi hai kuch ajab si
tabhi to woh kehte haiN woh aa rahe haiN
ki wo aa rahe haiN ki wo aa rahe haiN
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9th March 2015, 05:16 AM
bhabhi ye kavita mujhe us waqt ki yaad dilaa raha hai, jab humare anu bhaiya gathbandhan meiN nahin bandhe the, kamobesh ise tarah ki aashiqana fiqr meiN unki jyada kavitayeN hoti thi, yakeenan unhone aapko poori tarah se apne raNg meiN raNg diya hai... wo aa rahe haiN, vo ss rahe hain, kya baat...
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20th March 2015, 06:56 PM
Sarika ji namaste
Aapki ye peshkash behad pasand aai..daad kubul kijiyega
Duao ke sath
Bhushan
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bhabhi ye kavita mujhe us waqt ki yaad dilaa raha hai, jab humare anu bhaiya gathbandhan meiN nahin bandhe the, kamobesh ise tarah ki aashiqana fiqr meiN unki jyada kavitayeN hoti thi, yakeenan unhone aapko poori tarah se apne raNg meiN raNg diya hai... wo aa rahe haiN, vo ss rahe hain, kya baat...
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Shukriya Taish ji
shayad aap sahi keh rahe hain, kaafi rang chad gaya hai shayad.
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8th April 2015, 11:39 AM
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Sarika ji namaste
Aapki ye peshkash behad pasand aai..daad kubul kijiyega
Duao ke sath
Bhushan
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Bohut bohut shukriya apka meri iss choti si koshish ko pasand karne ke liye.
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