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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain - 19th February 2015, 01:31 PM

peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain

Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?


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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain

Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?


Saarika jee... waaahhhhhhhhhhhh

kyaa kahne, ise kkahte hain Sau sunaar ki aur ek luhaar kii.....

muddat ke baad aapko padhna naseeb huaa, aur yaqeen maaniye itnaa accccha,, itna dil se aur itne sacche jazbaaton se aapne ye rachnaa likhi hai ke mann moh liyaa aapne ........

bahot si daad pesh karna chahungaa, aapke is adbhut prayaas ke liye....
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19th February 2015, 03:32 PM

hh waaah sarika jee bahut pyare ehsaas aur utni ki khoobsoorati se inko shabdon me baandha hai aapne...dil ko bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye kavita...
aage bhi aati rahein aur hame padhne ka mauka detedeti rahein..



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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain

Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
Waah, bahut khoob Bhaabi... mazaa aa gaya yeh ehsaas padhkar... Woh pyaar ka intezaar, woh ikraar... waah!! Dil se daad kubool karen!!

Anu bhai should write a reply to this, bahut mazaa aayega


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19th February 2015, 11:47 PM

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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain

Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?

Sarika ji, namaskar !
Pehli dafeh aapko paRh raha hooN.
Bohot he umdah ehsasaat ko bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne apni iss peshkash ke zariye.
Aaindaa bhi aapki aisi he nayaab peshkash ke muntizar rakheinge.
Likhte rahiye, khush rahein.
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20th February 2015, 11:15 AM

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Seedhe saral shabdon mein aapki yeh rachnaa khoob rahin... daad ...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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kyaa kahne, ise kkahte hain Sau sunaar ki aur ek luhaar kii.....

muddat ke baad aapko padhna naseeb huaa, aur yaqeen maaniye itnaa accccha,, itna dil se aur itne sacche jazbaaton se aapne ye rachnaa likhi hai ke mann moh liyaa aapne ........

bahot si daad pesh karna chahungaa, aapke is adbhut prayaas ke liye....
likhtii rahen, aatii rahen...

Shaad....
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hh waaah sarika jee bahut pyare ehsaas aur utni ki khoobsoorati se inko shabdon me baandha hai aapne...dil ko bahut bahut pasand aayi aapki ye kavita...
aage bhi aati rahein aur hame padhne ka mauka detedeti rahein..
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Seedhe saral shabdon mein aapki yeh rachnaa khoob rahin... daad ...yuunhi bazm ki raunaq badhaate rahiye aage bhee

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25th February 2015, 02:14 PM

woh aa rahe hain ..
woh kab aa rahe hain ...


waaaaaaaaaah Sarika jee .. waaaah..

kia kehny.... lafz lafz mohabbat kii chaashni mein dooba hua hy ...
aap ne meHfil ko bohat hii dil-fareeb o pur-asar kalaam sy nawaaz hy...

khaaksaar ki taraf sy dherooN daad qaabol kejiye..

likhty rahiye...


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waaaaaaaaaah Sarika jee .. waaaah..

kia kehny.... lafz lafz mohabbat kii chaashni mein dooba hua hy ...
aap ne meHfil ko bohat hii dil-fareeb o pur-asar kalaam sy nawaaz hy...

khaaksaar ki taraf sy dherooN daad qaabol kejiye..

likhty rahiye...

Tareef ke liye shukriya hassan ji.....................


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peele Patton ke mausam phir aa rahe hain
sard Raton ke taare bhi tadpa rahe hain
dil hai ki phir keh raha hai ye mujhse
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

saja Doon yeh galiyan sajaa Doon choubaare
sajaa loon main khwaabon ke silme sitaare
Andhero mein ban ke diye aa rahe hain
ke wo aa rahe hain ke wo aa rahe hain

daalu main jhumke aur pehnu mein kangna
nihaarun ye babul ka pyara sa anganaa
karaane Vidaa wo humein aa rahe hain
ki wo aa rahe hain ki wo aa rahe hain

Beete kitne saawan, beete Kitne falgun
iss dil mein rahi bas yahi ek uljhan
ki wo aa rahe hain to Kab aa rahe hain
kab aa rahe hain woh, kab aa rahe hain?
Behad khoob lijiye kehte hai ki pyaar ek tarfa nahi hota, to is dil ki bechaini bhi sun lijiye

aarzo-e-mohabbat machal si rahi hai
bhanwre bhi ab gungunaa rahe hai
yeh do chaar din ab guzrenge kaise
woh chilman ke lamhe behakaa rahe hai

kya dekhenge unko ya bolenge unse
inhi uljhanon mein jiye jaa rahe hai
tasaavur bhara hai is dil ka taraana
khwaabon mein mohabbat kiye jaa rahe hai

unke dil ki halat bhi hai kuch ajab si

tabhi to woh kehte haiN woh aa rahe haiN
ki wo aa rahe haiN ki wo aa rahe haiN



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bhabhi ye kavita mujhe us waqt ki yaad dilaa raha hai, jab humare anu bhaiya gathbandhan meiN nahin bandhe the, kamobesh ise tarah ki aashiqana fiqr meiN unki jyada kavitayeN hoti thi, yakeenan unhone aapko poori tarah se apne raNg meiN raNg diya hai... wo aa rahe haiN, vo ss rahe hain, kya baat...
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shayad aap sahi keh rahe hain, kaafi rang chad gaya hai shayad.


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Sarika ji namaste

Aapki ye peshkash behad pasand aai..daad kubul kijiyega

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