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18th July 2012, 11:45 AM
Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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18th July 2012, 01:33 PM
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
aapka naam to nahi janta par itna zaroor kahunga ki ye panktiyaaN mujhe kuch yaad sa dila gayiN..........khair, koi baat nahi.......apki is acchi peshkash par meri taraf se Daad kabool karein .....!!!
aapka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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19th July 2012, 09:59 AM
shukriya secret admirer ji aapne mujhe padha aur haunslaa afzaayi ki
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ye wala bhi bahut achha hai par pata nahi kyuN i feel like ki ye aapka bahut pehle ka likha hai ..
khair
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Abid Afzal Majaaz ki taraf se daad qabool kijiey.
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6th August 2012, 02:18 PM
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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WaaH ! UmdaaH ..................... !!!!!!!!!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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6th August 2012, 10:45 PM
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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bahut khoob masti ji ........aap hi ko dedicate kuch panktian.........
main bhi kr sakti hoon roushan tera naam
kya huaa jo main ek beti hoon
main bhi dila sakti hoon
kalpna chawla jaise, sunita willium jaise
sania mirza jaise, sarojni naydu jaise
indra ghandhi jaise aur raani jhansi jaise
tere naam ko ek pehchaan
kya hua jo main ek beti hoon
sadion se main deti aai tere vansh ko ek naam
kya hua jo main ek beti hoon
kabhi maa, kabhi beti,
kabhi patni, kabhi pemika
kabhi sati kabhi switari
kabhi apsra to kabhi devika
mere sab roopo,n ko kiya toone bhi to salaam
kya hooa jo main ek beti hoon
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
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Behen bohut hi acha likha hai aapne ne,
aaj ke zamane ko dekh ke , main har behen se yahi kenha chahta hun,
jiyo toh aise jiyo ,
ke izzat ki baarish hojaye ,
doh din ki bhi agar zindagi ho,
toh babul tere naam kar jaye..
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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4th September 2012, 09:58 PM
shukriya aap sabka isey padne aur mera housla badaane ke liye.
kshitz pata nahi aapko aisa kyun laga magar ye purana nahi hai.
rashmi ji & ehtishaamulhaq ji aapke khyalat jaan kar bohut accha laga kaash sab log is baat ko aur beti ke dard ko samjhe. aaj ke zamaane mein bhi pade likhe logon ki iss tung soch par gussa aur sharm donon aati hai, aur sabse zyada dukh tab hota hai jab ye soch kisi aurat ki hoti hai.
kuch hi din pehle kisi ko beti hone par mubarakbaad di par us insaan ka chehra aise utra tha jaise koi chhuut ki bimaari aa gayi ho, mera mubarakbaad dena bhi jaise bura laga, tabhi ye khayaal aaya.
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Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
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atyadhik samvedansheel..... no words to speak with, i am just speechless.
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atyadhik samvedansheel..... no words to speak with, i am just speechless.
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Shukriya Shaad ji.......................
Yeh mere dil ke bohut kareeb hai.
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WaaH ! UmdaaH ..................... !!!!!!!!!!!
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Shukriya Naresh ji..........Maafi chahungi der ke liye bohut kam aati thi yahan isliye aapka shukriya adaa na kar paayii.
AAp jaise umdaa shayar ne isey padaa aur apna aashirvaad diya, iskey liye dil se aapka ek baar phir shuriyaa.
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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Bohat khoob sarika ji. ..dil ko chu lene waale ehsaas hain...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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Kaash ki ma baap samajh sakte ki ladkiyan bojh nahin hoti, nazuk si ladkiyan apno keliye to apni sari khushiyan qurbaan karne taiyar hojati hain, har ek roop me har kadam par kabhi beti kabhi behen kabhi ma kabhi premika bankar qurbani deti hain, ek ladki hone ki wajahse zindagi bhar ladki hone ka karz utarti rehti hain phir bhi kahin na kahin kami reh jati hai qki wo to ladki hai.
Sarikaji afsos hua jaankar us aurat k bare me jisne ladki ko janam di aur usse mu mod li jab janam dene wali maa k ye ehsas hain to bakiyon ko kya kehna, Khuda ki di hui rehmat hoti hain betiyan inse mohabbat karni chahiye.
Sarikaji apke har ek shabd me dard aur afsos hai, ye rachna mere dil ko chu gai.
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28th June 2014, 10:22 PM
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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Sarika ji MAA SHAA ALLAH aap ne bahoot hi khobsoorat ahsaasoN se labrez ye nazm....dil maiN utar jane wali...ye shayad...dil se nikalne wali awaaz...ajab si feel paida karne wale alfaz...waah....betiyoN ke baare meiN kehna hi dil ko itna emotional kar deta hai....sach meiN jo betiyaaN ma baap ke liye kar sakti haiN wo......
lekin samaaz ki dharna...inke prati aisi kyuN hai...samajh se parey hai.....bahut ho behtareen peshkash ...daad....is par ek Qatta aapki nazm ko smarpit...
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विदा हुईं जो बेटियां तो दिल को लू गयीं,
परदेस क्या गयीं बाबुल की निकल रू गयी ।
खामोशियाँ जो छायीं थीं रुख्सती के वक़्त,
हलक के शब्द ला ज़ुबाँ पे दिल को छू गयीं ।
__________हर्ष महाजन
sabhaar
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Bohat khoob sarika ji. ..dil ko chu lene waale ehsaas hain...
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Kaash ki ma baap samajh sakte ki ladkiyan bojh nahin hoti, nazuk si ladkiyan apno keliye to apni sari khushiyan qurbaan karne taiyar hojati hain, har ek roop me har kadam par kabhi beti kabhi behen kabhi ma kabhi premika bankar qurbani deti hain, ek ladki hone ki wajahse zindagi bhar ladki hone ka karz utarti rehti hain phir bhi kahin na kahin kami reh jati hai qki wo to ladki hai.
Sarikaji afsos hua jaankar us aurat k bare me jisne ladki ko janam di aur usse mu mod li jab janam dene wali maa k ye ehsas hain to bakiyon ko kya kehna, Khuda ki di hui rehmat hoti hain betiyan inse mohabbat karni chahiye.
Sarikaji apke har ek shabd me dard aur afsos hai, ye rachna mere dil ko chu gai.
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Sach kaha aapne Naaz ji
Kab samjhenge log ki jis din hum apni soch badal lenge us din samaj badal jayega, uss din beta beti baraabar ho jayenge. "Khuda ki rehmat hoti hai betiyan" bilkul sach kahaa magar jo taraste hain unko kabhi kabhi nahi milti hain betiyan, uske liye bohut kismat chahiye.
yaad hai mujhe when I was carrying Suhani, anubhav (Mast) used to pray everyday for a daughter koi galti se bhi keh de ki beta ho gaya toh? Gussa aa jata tha unko. Suhani ke hone har jaise ki samaaj ka ek warg aata hai duaein dene aur paise mangne toh jab anu ne unhe 2100 rs. diye toh woh bolne lage ladki hai isliye ye le rahi hu ladka hota to double leti, anu ka gussa satven aasmaan par pohunch gaya aur unke muh se nikla ladka hota toh iske aadhe bhi naa deta
Shukriya.
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Sarika ji MAA SHAA ALLAH aap ne bahoot hi khobsoorat ahsaasoN se labrez ye nazm....dil maiN utar jane wali...ye shayad...dil se nikalne wali awaaz...ajab si feel paida karne wale alfaz...waah....betiyoN ke baare meiN kehna hi dil ko itna emotional kar deta hai....sach meiN jo betiyaaN ma baap ke liye kar sakti haiN wo......
lekin samaaz ki dharna...inke prati aisi kyuN hai...samajh se parey hai.....bahut ho behtareen peshkash ...daad....is par ek Qatta aapki nazm ko smarpit...
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विदा हुईं जो बेटियां तो दिल को लू गयीं,
परदेस क्या गयीं बाबुल की निकल रू गयी ।
खामोशियाँ जो छायीं थीं रुख्सती के वक़्त,
हलक के शब्द ला ज़ुबाँ पे दिल को छू गयीं ।
__________हर्ष महाजन
sabhaar
Harash Mahajan
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Bohut Bohut Shukriya Harshji.
Aur bohut hi khubsoorat likha hai aapne, dil se daad kabool kijiye.
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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Sarika aapko padhna bahut achcha lagta hai mujhe kyun ki aapke ehsaas mere dil ke bahut kareeb hote hain...jaise kisi ne bas mere khayalon jo awaaz di ho...is baar bhi vahi hua.... dil kush ho gaya padhkar..bahut kuch badla hai samaaj mein par ab bhi bahut baki hai...betiyon ko apne hak ke liye..ab bhi bahut struggle karna hai...aur aisi kavitayein...logon ke dilon ko zaroor jhakjhorti hongi....
Likhti rahiye...aise hee...
khush raho....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Dekh ke jise ho gaye the udaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Jiske aane se tooti, har aas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Apnon ke liye nahi thi kabhi khaas
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Bojh samajhne ka hai riwaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Dee seekh sada chup rehne ki,
chheeni mujhse meri aawaaz
haan main toh ik beti hoon
Baapu ki chinta ka kaaran,
bhai ke sehti hoon mijaaz
Haan main toh ik beti hoon
Tum samjho mujhko sadaa paraaya
tum mein basti par meri saans
haan main toh ik beti hoon
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Dear Sarika..................lafz nahi hai mere paas...aik aik lafz dil ko chuu gya...!
god bless u dear
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Originally Posted by Rashmi sharma
bahut khoob masti ji ........aap hi ko dedicate kuch panktian.........
main bhi kr sakti hoon roushan tera naam
kya huaa jo main ek beti hoon
main bhi dila sakti hoon
kalpna chawla jaise, sunita willium jaise
sania mirza jaise, sarojni naydu jaise
indra ghandhi jaise aur raani jhansi jaise
tere naam ko ek pehchaan
kya hua jo main ek beti hoon
sadion se main deti aai tere vansh ko ek naam
kya hua jo main ek beti hoon
kabhi maa, kabhi beti,
kabhi patni, kabhi pemika
kabhi sati kabhi switari
kabhi apsra to kabhi devika
mere sab roopo,n ko kiya toone bhi to salaam
kya hooa jo main ek beti hoon
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Rashmi ji....Sarika ki rachna ka aapne bakhoobi jawaab diya...aap dono ko padna accha lga.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Sarika aapko padhna bahut achcha lagta hai mujhe kyun ki aapke ehsaas mere dil ke bahut kareeb hote hain...jaise kisi ne bas mere khayalon jo awaaz di ho...is baar bhi vahi hua.... dil kush ho gaya padhkar..bahut kuch badla hai samaaj mein par ab bhi bahut baki hai...betiyon ko apne hak ke liye..ab bhi bahut struggle karna hai...aur aisi kavitayein...logon ke dilon ko zaroor jhakjhorti hongi....
Likhti rahiye...aise hee...
khush raho....
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Sach keh rahi hain abhi aur bohut waqt lagega mansikta badalne mein. Badlaav to aa raha hai magar gati bahut dheemi hai.
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