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dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise. - 10th May 2015, 12:43 AM

Hum ro ro ke aansoon bahaaien to kaise
Koi ro raha hai bhulaen to kaise

Wo le Gaye sang khushiyan humari
Unhe wapas Ab hum bulaaein to kaise

Chadi dhool rishton par chadar si banke
Galatfehmiyon ko hataaien to kaise

Woh roothe hain hum se hum roothe hain unse
Ab ek doosre ko manaaien to kaise

Hawaaon mein ab tak hain unke he kisse
Hum apni kahaani sunaaien to kaise

Wo jo aag dil mein lagaakar Gaye hain
Unhe aasuon se bujhaein to kaise

Na wo bewafa hain na hum bewafa hain
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise.
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise, dikhaaein to kaise??


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10th May 2015, 08:20 AM

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Hum ro ro ke aansoon bahaaien to kaise
Koi ro raha hai bhulaen to kaise

Wo le Gaye sang khushiyan humari
Unhe wapas Ab hum bulaaein to kaise

Chadi dhool rishton par chadar si banke
Galatfehmiyon ko hataaien to kaise

Woh roothe hain hum se hum roothe hain unse
Ab ek doosre ko manaaien to kaise

Hawaaon mein ab tak hain unke he kisse
Hum apni kahaani sunaaien to kaise

Wo jo aag dil mein lagaakar Gaye hain
Unhe aasuon se bujhaein to kaise

Na wo bewafa hain na hum bewafa hain
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise.
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise, dikhaaein to kaise??

Waah waaah waah sarika ji......kya expression hai kya rawani hai...
.bahut khoob kalaam likha pesh kiya hai aapne.. .

Likhti rahiye........



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Hum ro ro ke aansoon bahaaien to kaise
Koi ro raha hai bhulaen to kaise

Wo le Gaye sang khushiyan humari
Unhe wapas Ab hum bulaaein to kaise

Chadi dhool rishton par chadar si banke
Galatfehmiyon ko hataaien to kaise

Woh roothe hain hum se hum roothe hain unse
Ab ek doosre ko manaaien to kaise

Hawaaon mein ab tak hain unke he kisse
Hum apni kahaani sunaaien to kaise

Wo jo aag dil mein lagaakar Gaye hain
Unhe aasuon se bujhaein to kaise

Na wo bewafa hain na hum bewafa hain
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise.
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise, dikhaaein to kaise??
Pur asar kalaam hua hai yeh. Ek sawaal mein kitna dard kitne ehsaason ko dabaaye hue yeh kalaam bin bole sab keh raha hai. Bahut umdaa Sarika.



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kyaa baat hai saikaa jee...... bahot khoob sher pesh kiye hain aur utni hi masoomiyat se sawaalon ko bhii pesh kiyaa hai aapne..... merii taraf se bahot si daad aapki khidmat me pesh hain.... qubool kijiyegaa....

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Waah waaah waah sarika ji......kya expression hai kya rawani hai...
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Pur asar kalaam hua hai yeh. Ek sawaal mein kitna dard kitne ehsaason ko dabaaye hue yeh kalaam bin bole sab keh raha hai. Bahut umdaa Sarika.
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Wo jo aag dil mein lagaakar Gaye hain
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waaah waaah waaah ...

bohat hii asar-daar alfaaz haiN ....



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kyaa baat hai saikaa jee...... bahot khoob sher pesh kiye hain aur utni hi masoomiyat se sawaalon ko bhii pesh kiyaa hai aapne..... merii taraf se bahot si daad aapki khidmat me pesh hain.... qubool kijiyegaa....

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Hum ro ro ke aansoon bahaaien to kaise
Koi ro raha hai bhulaen to kaise

Wo le Gaye sang khushiyan humari
Unhe wapas Ab hum bulaaein to kaise

Chadi dhool rishton par chadar si banke
Galatfehmiyon ko hataaien to kaise

Woh roothe hain hum se hum roothe hain unse
Ab ek doosre ko manaaien to kaise

Hawaaon mein ab tak hain unke he kisse
Hum apni kahaani sunaaien to kaise

Wo jo aag dil mein lagaakar Gaye hain
Unhe aasuon se bujhaein to kaise

Na wo bewafa hain na hum bewafa hain
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise.
Dil cheer ke apna dikhaaein to kaise, dikhaaein to kaise??
Wah Sarika ji.. Bohot kamaal ka kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.
Itna dard... Har ek sheyr lajawaab.
Bas daad he daad.
Khush raheiN. Likhti raheiN.


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waaah waaah waaah ...

bohat hii asar-daar alfaaz haiN ....

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