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Sad Kisi Kali Ne Bhi Dekha Na Aankh Bhar Ke Mujhe - 3rd March 2004, 06:48 PM

Kisi kali ne bhi dekha na aankh bhar ke mujhe
Guzar gayee jaras-e-gul udaas kar ke mujhe

Mein so raha tha kisi yaad ke shabistaan mein
Jagaa ke chod gaye qaafile sahar ke mujhe

Mein ro raha tha muqadar ki sakht raahon mein
Udaa ke le gayaa jaadu teri nazar ka mujhe

Mein teri dard kii tugiyaaniyon mein doob gaya
Pukaarte rahe taare ubhar ubhar ke mujhe

Tere firaaq ki raatein kabhi na bhoolengi
Maze mile isi waqton mein umr bhar ke mujhe

Zara si der tharane de ai gam-e-duniya
Bulaa raha hai koi baam se utar ke mujhe

Phir aaj aayi thi ik mauj-e-havaa-e-tarab
Sunaa gatee hai fasaane idhar-udhar ke mujhe


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4th March 2004, 12:56 PM

vvenomouss Ji,


Bahut khoob likha hai Bhaiye. Har sher laajawaab hai. Ek se badhkar ek hain sare sher. Bahut hi durust shayri padhne ko mili.

Daad ke saath taareef kubool farmaiiega.

Hume behad apsand aaya.

Tc, bye

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5th March 2004, 08:18 PM

Hello Anjan Rahi
Aap ke post ka bahut shukriya ... aur mein ne aapki adhoori prem kahani padhi ... bahut pasand aayi ... aur use poori karne ki poori koshish karoonga...
Baharhaal... shukriya & bye...


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har sher kabile tarif hain vvenomouuss ji........
   
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