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Dusro ki khusiya dekh, ham apna hi aashiyaana jalate rahein -
2nd October 2007, 02:08 PM
Muddato se wo aayena dikhate rahein,
ham khud ko khud se chupate rahein. dusro ki khusiya dekh dekh ke, aashiyana apna hi jalate rahein. kaha to chal diya sara zamana, ham khichdi apni bethe pakate rahe. yun dard dil mein bahut hai magar, duniya ko gud-gudate hasate rahein. kabhi to uthegi huk dil mein "Aftab", yahi soch kar gazale sunate rahein.  |
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3rd October 2007, 12:26 PM
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hi taqdeer ji ..nice poem i must say..thanx 4 sharing.. 
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3rd October 2007, 12:32 PM
thank you anamika
mujhe aapke replies pakar khusi hui |
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4th October 2007, 11:35 PM
gud shairing
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5th October 2007, 03:17 AM
Bahut khoob dost!
Bakhoobi dard bayaan kiya hai aapne.. Aapki is rachna ko padh kar bas ek bahut purana sher yaad aa gaya.. writer kaun hain nahi jaanti.. par jisne bhi likha hai kamaal hi kiya hai.. "Log kehte hain mujhe aadat hai muskuraane ki.. Woh nahi jaante, yeh bhi ek ada hai gam chupaane ki.." Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. aise hi likthe rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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5th October 2007, 11:57 AM
hi,
priya thank you... mujhe kabhi kabhi aesa lagta hai ki me kuch nahi likh paunaga.. mujhe ab apne aap par bharisa nahi raha aap log jab istarah replies karte ho to na jane kyun dil me ek khalbali si mach jati hai.... thank you priya aapka khayal rakhna.. |
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