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kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe......(gazal) - 26th July 2006, 04:04 PM
dosto app sab ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar.....apni nai gazal ke saath haazir hoon umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi.......


kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe,
majhdhar main chhorna koi unse seekhe.....

shama pe mitke shayad usko pa longa,
ye bharam parwane ka torna koi unse seekhe.......

sunsaan se veerane main koi na aiyega,
pathron se sar forna koi unse seekhe.......

jalake chiraag andhere se ghar main,
hawaon ko udhar morna koi unse seekhe.....

aasman ko bichha ke bister ki tarha,
zamee ko khud pe orhna koi unse seekhe......

ujjar ke 'veer' ki hasti huie zindagi ko,
baharon se nata jorna koi unse seekhe........

umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi..........raj.......

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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26th July 2006, 06:23 PM
hi raj..

that was an amazing posting.. kahi dil ko choo si gai aapki ye gazal.. likhte rahiyega..

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thanx - 26th July 2006, 11:36 PM
kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe,
majhdhar main chhorna koi unse seekhe.....

shama pe mitke shayad usko pa longa,
ye bharam parwane ka torna koi unse seekhe.......

sunsaan se veerane main koi na aiyega,
pathron se sar forna koi unse seekhe.......

jalake chiraag andhere se ghar main,
hawaon ko udhar morna koi unse seekhe.....

aasman ko bichha ke bister ki tarha,
zamee ko khud pe orhna koi unse seekhe......

ujjar ke 'veer' ki hasti huie zindagi ko,
baharon se nata jorna koi unse seekhe........




raj apka gila sahi hai ki mai apki post par reply nahi karti par kya karu mere pass na to koi shabd hote hai aur na hi mujhe aap jaise shayero ki taareef karna ata hai aap ki har peshkash to qabil-e-taareef hoti hai jinko saraahne ke liye mujhe shabd hi nahi milte iss liye jabh bhi apki post par reply karne baithti hoon kuch der sochne ke baad waise ki waise hi chali jati hoon lagta hai ki jo soch rahi hoon kam hai.

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hi - 13th September 2006, 11:08 AM
hi raj..

that was an amazing posting.. kahi dil ko choo si gai aapki ye gazal.. likhte rahiyega..

nisha

nisha ji app ko meri gazal itni aci laggi appne tahe dil se reply kiya meri kalam ki khushnaseebi hai......main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon.....umeed karta hoon ki yu he appka saath milta rahega......raj

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13th September 2006, 11:10 AM
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hi - 27th September 2006, 05:51 PM
raj apka gila sahi hai ki mai apki post par reply nahi karti par kya karu mere pass na to koi shabd hote hai aur na hi mujhe aap jaise shayero ki taareef karna ata hai aap ki har peshkash to qabil-e-taareef hoti hai jinko saraahne ke liye mujhe shabd hi nahi milte iss liye jabh bhi apki post par reply karne baithti hoon kuch der sochne ke baad waise ki waise hi chali jati hoon lagta hai ki jo soch rahi hoon kam hai.


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Re: kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe......(gazal) - 27th September 2006, 06:27 PM
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dosto app sab ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar.....apni nai gazal ke saath haazir hoon umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi.......


kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe,
majhdhar main chhorna koi unse seekhe.....

shama pe mitke shayad usko pa longa,
ye bharam parwane ka torna koi unse seekhe.......

sunsaan se veerane main koi na aiyega,
pathron se sar forna koi unse seekhe.......

jalake chiraag andhere se ghar main,
hawaon ko udhar morna koi unse seekhe.....

aasman ko bichha ke bister ki tarha,
zamee ko khud pe orhna koi unse seekhe......

ujjar ke 'veer' ki hasti huie zindagi ko,
baharon se nata jorna koi unse seekhe........

umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi..........raj.......
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hi - 27th September 2006, 06:32 PM
Dear raj,

nice creation... continue your writting..
enjoy the life..
give the words for your feeling


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Wow.................. - 14th June 2010, 05:08 PM
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dosto app sab ko raj ka bhut sara pyaar.....apni nai gazal ke saath haazir hoon umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi.......


kisi ke dil ko torna koi unse seekhe,
majhdhar main chhorna koi unse seekhe.....

shama pe mitke shayad usko pa longa,
ye bharam parwane ka torna koi unse seekhe.......

sunsaan se veerane main koi na aiyega,
pathron se sar forna koi unse seekhe.......

jalake chiraag andhere se ghar main,
hawaon ko udhar morna koi unse seekhe.....

aasman ko bichha ke bister ki tarha,
zamee ko khud pe orhna koi unse seekhe......

ujjar ke 'veer' ki hasti huie zindagi ko,
baharon se nata jorna koi unse seekhe........

umeed karta hoon appko achi lagegi..........raj.......
Wow....................... Read many times but never replied.

Its just Awesome......
   
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