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Thumbs up kaatil - 28th May 2010, 11:08 AM

aaj kuch naya aur naye andaaj mein pesh kar raha hoon .....

kuch to khuda ne kuch teri adaon ne
tujhe khoobsoorat banaya hai
vo haal hai deewane ka pyaar mein sanam
khanjar lekar haath mein aaya hai
naa maaro aise dheere dheere sanam
aaj bas ye kehne aaya hai

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hongee mehrbaan to ye dikhati nazare hain
kahin patli kamar to kahin naina kajraare hain
kya dosh hai batao parwaano ka
kuch to khyaal karo apne deewano ka
kise furast hai roj roj marne kee
band karo ye ada katl karne kee

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hoti hain kitnee jung bas tumhaare liye
marte hain kitne aashiq bas tumhaare liye
kahe koi kaatil to bura maante kyon ho
katl karne kee ada phir jaante kyon ho
karti hain katl teri ye sharm -o-haya bhi
kya bilkul nahin tere mein daya bhi

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

milta hai kya maza logon ko maykhane mein
dekho gour se jara is husnkhane mein
ang ang jaise chalakta hua jaam hai
jaam jaam pe likha peene waale ka naam hai
nahin pilna jisko usko pilati kyon ho
husn ke ye jalwe sabko dhikati kyon ho

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
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Arvind Ji......Rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen... !




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Arvind Ji......Rachna ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe....yunhi likhte rahen... khush rahen... !
thx. again naresh jee har baar kee tarah aapkee reply savse pehle aur seedhe dil tak pahunch jaati hai



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29th May 2010, 11:57 AM

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aaj kuch naya aur naye andaaj mein pesh kar raha hoon .....

kuch to khuda ne kuch teri adaon ne
tujhe khoobsoorat banaya hai
vo haal hai deewane ka pyaar mein sanam
khanjar lekar haath mein aaya hai
naa maaro aise dheere dheere sanam
aaj bas ye kehne aaya hai

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hongee mehrbaan to ye dikhati nazare hain
kahin patli kamar to kahin naina kajraare hain
kya dosh hai batao parwaano ka
kuch to khyaal karo apne deewano ka
kise furast hai roj roj marne kee
band karo ye ada katl karne kee

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hoti hain kitnee jung bas tumhaare liye
marte hain kitne aashiq bas tumhaare liye
kahe koi kaatil to bura maante kyon ho
katl karne kee ada phir jaante kyon ho
karti hain katl teri ye sharm -o-haya bhi
kya bilkul nahin tere mein daya bhi

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

milta hai kya maza logon ko maykhane mein
dekho gour se jara is husnkhane mein
ang ang jaise chalakta hua jaam hai
jaam jaam pe likha peene waale ka naam hai
nahin pilna jisko usko pilati kyon ho
husn ke ye jalwe sabko dhikati kyon ho

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum
Arvind ji,,,,,

Behtareen peshkas..... Dil se daad qubool kijiyega,,,, bahut hi khubsurat andaaz me likha hai aapne.... aur thoda different b lga mujhe (Different yani new... acha lga) .... aise hi likhte rahiyeee .....

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29th May 2010, 12:45 PM

aru jee:

bahot Khoob..!

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Arvind ji,,,,,

Behtareen peshkas..... Dil se daad qubool kijiyega,,,, bahut hi khubsurat andaaz me likha hai aapne.... aur thoda different b lga mujhe (Different yani new... acha lga) .... aise hi likhte rahiyeee .....

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thanx kavita for a wonderful reply, for appreciation and for liking. Aap aise hee reply karte rahiye main aise hee likhte rahoonga



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aaj kuch naya aur naye andaaj mein pesh kar raha hoon .....

kuch to khuda ne kuch teri adaon ne
tujhe khoobsoorat banaya hai
vo haal hai deewane ka pyaar mein sanam
khanjar lekar haath mein aaya hai
naa maaro aise dheere dheere sanam
aaj bas ye kehne aaya hai

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hongee mehrbaan to ye dikhati nazare hain
kahin patli kamar to kahin naina kajraare hain
kya dosh hai batao parwaano ka
kuch to khyaal karo apne deewano ka
kise furast hai roj roj marne kee
band karo ye ada katl karne kee

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hoti hain kitnee jung bas tumhaare liye
marte hain kitne aashiq bas tumhaare liye
kahe koi kaatil to bura maante kyon ho
katl karne kee ada phir jaante kyon ho
karti hain katl teri ye sharm -o-haya bhi
kya bilkul nahin tere mein daya bhi

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

milta hai kya maza logon ko maykhane mein
dekho gour se jara is husnkhane mein
ang ang jaise chalakta hua jaam hai
jaam jaam pe likha peene waale ka naam hai
nahin pilna jisko usko pilati kyon ho
husn ke ye jalwe sabko dhikati kyon ho

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum


Arvind jii,
Bahut accha likha hai aapne, keep writing.

god bless u


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aaj kuch naya aur naye andaaj mein pesh kar raha hoon .....

kuch to khuda ne kuch teri adaon ne
tujhe khoobsoorat banaya hai
vo haal hai deewane ka pyaar mein sanam
khanjar lekar haath mein aaya hai
naa maaro aise dheere dheere sanam
aaj bas ye kehne aaya hai

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hongee mehrbaan to ye dikhati nazare hain
kahin patli kamar to kahin naina kajraare hain
kya dosh hai batao parwaano ka
kuch to khyaal karo apne deewano ka
kise furast hai roj roj marne kee
band karo ye ada katl karne kee

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

hoti hain kitnee jung bas tumhaare liye
marte hain kitne aashiq bas tumhaare liye
kahe koi kaatil to bura maante kyon ho
katl karne kee ada phir jaante kyon ho
karti hain katl teri ye sharm -o-haya bhi
kya bilkul nahin tere mein daya bhi

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum

milta hai kya maza logon ko maykhane mein
dekho gour se jara is husnkhane mein
ang ang jaise chalakta hua jaam hai
jaam jaam pe likha peene waale ka naam hai
nahin pilna jisko usko pilati kyon ho
husn ke ye jalwe sabko dhikati kyon ho

choodo roj roj kee takraar tum
kar do khanjar aar paar tum
bahut khub

dil ko choo gaya

daad hazir he

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aru jee:

bahot Khoob..!

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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thanx dhaval jee, aapki duaon ka hee asar hai jo main likhta hoon aur aapko pasand aatja hai. Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.



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Bahut accha likha hai aapne, keep writing.

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thanx sunita jee, aapki reply padkar bahut accha lagta hai, lagta hai jaise maine kuch accha likha. Thanx again



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daad hazir he

sada khush raho
thanx shakuntla jee, daad ke liye shukriya. Aap yun hee reply karti rahiye main sada khush rahoonga



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